Which is your first poem.. and when you writte it?

I was just curious to know which is your first poem and when you wrote it? Can you post it here or give a link to it?

Well, my first poem is written in my mother tounge (Malayalam) and hardly one or two in this site may understand it. I wrote it at age 10. Lol! i am not going to post that for sure. Unexpectedly, I found my first poem in English, in one of my file. I thought i will post it. I guess i was 17 at that time.

*To my first and last love*

The images of my love is vivid and infinite…
Whether you love me or not… I don’t mind…
But I love you… and it will be so…
I expect nothing back… nothing!
Just, I want to love you… truly
I mean, an endless love, Love endlessly
You sank my theories in the deep ocean,
You left it to fly away in the space.
I couldn’t catch it… or I didn’t try to…
It’s a fact… My control was lost…
My dreams followed you…and only you…
I never deserve you… Still, may be a chance?
Hopes are left! You may mock or laugh…
But I won’t give up
I am yours… you are mine… and it’s my belief
I would pray… and once God will hear…
You will come… and all will accept.

I am happy that still the same person remains as my first and last love.

I wrote my first one at 17, and it is somewhere around here, it is about my sister, who died when I was 17, i hope to find it tommorow, and post it soon.

i had mine back in 4th grade. it was written in a different language (tagalog). i've quickly written 3 more after that in a week. all of them were in english but unfortunately, when we moved, they were lost. i used to write them down on a really pretty stationary and tape it on the wall. i think one was about being young and enjoying it. another was "if i had one wish" and the other was graduation. it was probably written in broken english... funny how i find it easier to write poems in english now than my native language...

My first poem was written about, How I Would Kill Bully's wrote when i was 8, It was not a good time

Thats so disappointing! Every body has lost their's... I really want to read some of them. Very curious... IT will be cute... i am sure.

oh god... LOL I don't remember!!! I've written a lot of poetry and a lot of it isn't even posted on here.

I think the one I can truely remember writing is called "Misread Words" which is actually in my profile but I'll put it here.

Misread Words

She said she was sorry,
She really did try,
But the words from her mouth
Couldn't explain her feelings inside.

Two friends one day, two enemies the next.
All from words misread.

One person they hurt
Two for each other
Three for a friend
Four for anther.
Five, Six and Seven for everyone else.

All from words misread.

No one's to blame,
No one's at fault.
Words are deadly at best.
Meanings hazy and Clairty Foggy.

All from words misread.

Though she said she was sorry,
The meaning still linger
Her words not believed
As she wipes a tear from her finger.

Time will heal as they say,
And I guess it is true,
From all that is said
All from words misread.

My first Poem is Called "Reflection" I wrote it about my real father before I met him. Its the one poem I do not share because what I wrote in it is completely different from how i think today. And I will never give him the satisfaction of having a nice poem written about him. But i wrote it when I was 14 years old.

I just posted the first poem I ever wrote!!! I wrote it when I was 15 years old!! It's called "The Invisible Force"!!

hahaha.....quite a cute question...well i wrote my first poem when i was round abt 6 or sumtin....its title was"the cat:...hehehe

I think that I wrote parts of poems before my first poem. My first actual poem is called "The Last Night". I had entered it in a poetry contest for school. It is posted on here.

my first serious (as in real) poem was Domini Canto...

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=91339

it was a while back, uh maybe 4 years ago

i wrote my first when i was about 8, i cant remember, but it was about the abuse i went through

The first one I can really remember writing when I was being serious about it and had enough to write about was "Falling on Myself" which is posted on my account and is split up into 2 parts because it was just a little too long.

gosh, you guys write great poems! they're your firsts???!!!

This is my first real poem. Like I said, I wrote parts of poems before, but this was my first whole poem.

The Last Night
by Hannah

All those nights I spent with you
holding you so tight
All those things we talked about
never did we fight

I could tell you anything
you would understand
We could go anywhere
you would always hold my hand

But one day everything changed
you were taken away from me
How could this have happened
we were meant to be

It was late at night
we were in your car
I could see it coming
the headlights from afar

There was nothing you could do
the car was coming fast
It flung our car over the rail
breaking all the glass

They told me as I lie in bed
how my loved one had died
And about the drunk man
who decided to drink and drive

Copyright ©2004 Hannah

My first poem was die with the dusk, dragon. I wrote it when I had just turned 9. It's not that great (and neither are my other poems) but I've evolved and I write different now, so, yeah...

I wrote my first one when I was 15. It was called Love and is posted along with the rest of my stuff.

My first poem was when I was 11, in class we had to write a poem on our favourite colour. I chose purple... nothing rhymed with it. It was, most likely, the worst poem ever. I don't know where it has gone but it s*cked, I made every line rhyme quite forcefully.

Vix: :O, you were six?!?! That is VERY good considering you were 6, I think it is pretty good anyways! (just thought I'd comment that)

Well, in 4th grade I wrote many short stories and tiny poems, but now I wouldn't call them poems. hehe. Anyway, I wrote my first REAL poem when I was almost 16. Its a LONG story and rather ironic. Anyway, it was called, "I Will Always Be There". I wont' post it on here though... it's rather bad... I sorry. lol.

Amy

Wow i read some of your poems and your good im 10 and look under cathey and youll find me

I've written poems for several years now, but the first poems I posted on this site were "Satan's Seed" and "Still Searching" which I posted on
8-5-04

my first poem, "the shadow of dance" were i write them since i was 16...

I wrote first poem at age of 7... It was in my mothertoungue Marathi about a India-Pakistan Cricket match...

I wrote my first poem about a tiger called Stripy when i was 8 but the first real poem i wrote was when i was 15 and is my first poem i posted on this site =)

my 1st peom i ever wrote i was in grade 2 and it was about being dead in a coffin..

My first poem was "sad mans pain"... Some liked it so i keept on writing..

my first poem was in 5th grade and here it is (and yes it is very corney i think!)

Once i saw a butterfly

once i saw a butterfly
dancing way up high
it came down to me and crawled up my arm,

it tickled
and made me giggle,
but as soon as i started giggling
it flies away,

now every time i see a butterfly
dancing way up high,
i smile, cause just the thought
makes me happy.
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lol i cant believe i still remember that it wasn't even about a butterfly. It was about how every time we have some thing good or feel truely happy and we realize it, it just dissapears. THe butterfly was a metaphor for freedom. I suprised the heck outta my teacher when i told her that. but she loved it so i keep writing. I have her to thank for alot of thigns in my life including my poetry.
~bianca~

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=399513

My first poem was "Gone with the Wind"
and it was so horrible that i burned it.
It said something about "the bed was kinda bumpy so i couldn't sleep" "the king was not me nor was the wind warm"
It was so horrible. I'm kinda glad i will never see it again lmfao!

hmm i think my first one was like 3rd grade i lost it a long time ago though

The first ever poem I submitted here was "Stolen Innocence". I look back at it today and wonder WHAT drove me to write such a piece.

My first poem that I actually was very pleased with, is the one on my poems. I just posted it! so everyone check it out.

I am not sure which of the two came first. It was along the same time though. I was 18 and in my senior year of high school. One was for English class and we had to use the line.....Cupid draw back your bow. Mine was very silly and corny but the teacher loved it. The other poem was written about a girl in our senior class that died as a result of drunk driving.

My first poem is not worthy of submission onto this site. I cannot recall the title, but I wrote it when I was about 12, give or take a year.

My first poem was Twilight and I was 11 (I still am) and people are impressed with my talent. I have over, better poems, but here it is.

Twilight brings a silver glitter, in the twinkle of my eye
When time passes by I think of a bird, flying through the sky
Carrying mankinds wants, and there pleads to know the truth
And the bird, flys past time carrying mankinds curiosities forever.

The knowledge behind, times barrier is kept asleep
Running past a silver glass, the futures truth behind it waits
Feeling lost, falling into the past for everlasting more
The dawn of mankind, brings all the knowledge evermore.

When the time comes, we will all understand
The future will cease, the past will fade
The longing dreams, as the twilight approaches
And the present will freeze, to a wasteland of dreams.

my first poem (that i can remember writing) is "It's Not Your Fault" i wrote it in 8th grade (while having problems with cutting and suicide)

It's not your fault

You didn't do anything wrong, it's all me this time.
I don't really know what's wrong.
Maybe it's the fact I just saw my life flash before my eyes.
But it's not your fault.
You didn't know this would happen.
You didn't do this to me, I did.
I ruined myself, and now I'm hurt, permanently.
But you couldn't have done anything anyway.
It wouldn't have changed anything.
But don't blame yourself, just because...
I killed myself.

My first poem was written.. well when i was 13 or 14 i think.. its in my profile.. Warped and Twisted... no its not copyrighted... lots of people copyright a poem called Warped and Twisted by Skittlez... But yeah it was pretty sweet

the first poem of mine was "missing you"

I remember writing my first poem. Though I do not remember what it is called, I do know it was about time and spiders.