Could you guys...

Hey. Could you guys maybe comment on some of my poems? I really need the feedback, to know if I should be improving or working on some things in my poems. I'll do the same for you guys if you'd like. And just one more request, please comment on one of my recent poems, "Another Suicide." Thanks a bunch. :)

-Marta.

hey I'll comment on your poems!, plz comment mine 2. thanx!

hey i read i think about 5 of your poems, including the one u wanted read. So i'd like it if u could return the favor (i only have 5 posted) and btw, ur poems are really good!!!, very emotional!!