Poets Gather

  • StarGirl
    20 years ago

    Ok... in this post you gotta say one positive thing about the person's above you poetry. It can be constructive critism too but lets go with positive. ^_^

    it can be anything simply like "I like your use of words" or "I think this poem (enter name of poem) is really good." You get the idea lol just something positive.

    Start with me and then follow the person who responds to this n so forth n so forth.

  • alexander
    20 years ago

    Hey I loved the poem a friends friend it was great

  • Ten Feet Tall
    20 years ago

    i really liked "to good to be true"...i think thats what it was called...it was really sweet...well except for the end cuz that was kinda a bummer for you. but it was good!

  • Sierra Rae
    20 years ago

    Stormy:
    “That Night” was so sad, and had an unexpected twist at the end…that was really like “whoa, where did that come from?!?!” but it was really really good.
    “Close the Door” was really inspiring…that was like…ahh!! I can’t even explain it, it was just so amazing! That poem really moved me, and got me thinking about a lot of things on that subject. Wow that is one of the best poems I have ever read. Please keep writing…I’m adding you to my favorites list because those were just truly amazing!!!

    and btw...ya this was a great post idea!!! I found a new poet to put on my fav's list!!!

  • PnQ Mod Account
    20 years ago

    Sierra:

    I absolutely LOVED "Broken Roller Coaster" and I got it before I even read "Pre"

    What a cool concept to liken those two things!

    BRAVO!!!

    and, yes, I agree that this post is an awesome idea!!!

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    Ann:

    I loved the series of your's and Tim's. It was so emotional and gave out a lot of messages. I recommend every body should have a look at it. It's so emotional and such a good team work.
    I read almost every poem of yours. And i admire you for writing any subject, be it such a silly matter or the most serious matter..you handle it so well.

  • SarZz
    20 years ago

    Trincy:
    I luv her beautiful sonnet sequence....it really was marvellous.....!

  • SCARECROW
    20 years ago

    I loved eternal eternity, beautiful wording!

  • SCARECROW
    20 years ago

    How kind of you Bob. Thanks. I read your poem Memories, and it was incredible. You're quite right, there's nothing greater than giving life to a child. And Eddie, I read, the Soldier, what an awesome poem. So true, and I almost cried reading it. Well done!

  • Aken Sol
    20 years ago

    Yeah, I read your "Forsaken" too and it was awesome. The way you gripped the reader's attention with your magical way of telling the story... it was dark and sad, just how i like my poetry ;-)
    Aken Sol

  • vanessarrr
    20 years ago

    I am amazed by "The average poet". i think everyone should read it. excellent poem, Kibble.

  • Andrea
    20 years ago

    wow, i love your poem "Memories" that is very beautifully written.

  • LiL One
    20 years ago

    I read your poem "I lied". I though it was an excellant poem. it was much different then the poems I usually read, because your taking responsibility for your actions. Keep it up!

  • Rachael/7MidniteTears
    20 years ago

    star of me, rape: the victim, rape: the criminal, the life game, anything you choose, those are probably your best, that were excellent. keep writing you are a wonderful poet.

  • Kevin
    20 years ago

    For someone who is 13, and i don't mean to patronise based on age...she is brilliant, simple in form and most likely still developing her own style....but yeah....skilled and very honest...which i admire.

  • Dawn Manna
    20 years ago

    all of your poems are really good. you are talanted and should keep writing
    dawn

  • Andrea
    20 years ago

    i love "This Fear..." excellent piece. i know deep inside everyone is looking for mr. right, and i hope you find him!

  • HOLLY ARMER
    20 years ago

    Oh Andrea, that poem "My Guardian Angel" is so beautiful! I loved how easily it flowed. It told a very loving tale of a child in a sad and harmful situation! Very moving piece! Great job!!!