A Thousand Thanks To Switchblade!!!

  • Robert Gardiner
    18 years ago

    I recently wrote a Kyrielle Sonnet, "Ecstasy!!!", in which I had an oversight which he caught, and I would like to thank him for his good eye and taking the time to point out my error. He noticed that one of my lines had one more syllable than it should,

    After not noticing the flaw in it upon a second look, he broke it down for me,

    I was then able to see that my problem was "Anywhere". In my zeal to write the poem and my rush to complete it, I hastily mistook it for having two syllables instead of the three that it has, and didn't notice the mistake I had made and may not have noticed, if he had not caught it and pointed it out to me. I have subsequently change the line and fixed the syllable error. The line now reads, "Where're, you lead, I’d gladly go", and I would like to thank him for catching my initial error.

    Thanks, a million times over Switch!!!

  • Same Year Reply
    18 years ago

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