It would me the world

I havent wrote anything in a really long time. Today I just had to for some reason so I did. It would mean the world to me if you woud please read my new poem called "A Blurred Thought" and comment on it. Rate on it too if you wish. I will return the favor too. But please just read it and comment .. I wanna know what you think since it has been a while. It would mean so much. Thanks

hey, i would be glad to read and comment, if you could please read jetsam for me, that would be great.