Poetry Contest YAY!! lol

~Without You, I'm Nothing~

Today you are my inspiration,
I've never known someone like you.
A person so amazing, so beautiful,
even after all that you've been through.

Its crazy how you cope with things,
that aren't even your fault.
I'd be lucky if I could survive,
half the battles you've fought.

Just the sight of you,
makes each day that much better.
If you were not in my life,
nothing else would matter.

~Sean Dohr~

without you, i'm nothing
-Poonam

Today i lost my sanity
whatever that was keeping me going
lost my happiness
the smile that made my face
and the good times are gone
the movies and dinners
long phone calls that covered
everything to nothing
i lost my support
that helped me get through everything
i lost my laugh
that rang when i was around you
today i lost the most dear thing to me
today i lost my friend

WITHOUT YOU, I AM NOTHING By a boy called Dhaval

My hearts got your name all over
Me words are disguised prayers
My ears burn like they're torches,
But when your words reach them.

I speak I sing I cry,
You don't hear me
My sighs, like idle wind,
Do go but a yard away.

You, however, miles and miles away,
Hear only Pidi's laughs,
And when he says lubim
Your nights turn to day.

Dejected, I feel like dying,
When I wait so long my heart
Loses its rhythm.
My cries you hear not.

Despite this inhumanity,
My love never stops to fade
I am so confused in this maze
But this love was in heaven made.

When I say I love you, It hurts you
But his words seem like life,
And his tears like honey.
I'm alone torn apart in strife.

I dream about you
But He is loved by you
Though his love may not be
Half of what I feel for you.

If you read this someday,
youll find me confused and lost
I hate life without you, I love you
I love you, will always do, forever and ever...

You dont know how much time I spend
Thinking about how you could make my heart sing
Only if you were with me now, but
Without you, I know I am nothing...

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Lubim- I love you in slovakian...the girl is a slovak :)
Pidi- Boyfriends name :(

Dhaval- This broken hearted creature

Without you I'm nothing (an enchated box) by katie!

I hear it, that precious sound, floating to my ears
Like a sparrow caught upon the morning breeze
You have my heart in an enchanted box
Where my happiness resides with perfect ease

Herein, I lie beneath the oaks with my love
Her heart beats softly within my eyes
Your hair so divine flows gently in the wind
As I keep with the angels whilst the tradegy does cry

Soothe my soul with your honey covered voice
Bitter sweet pain rips each of my eyes apart
Within that decorated box, enchanted with ages
Lies my agonies each unrequited hour of my heart

An angel has come, to my aid, for my love
Though her winged form be soot covered and blood stained
Your voice sharing times where you have faced the worst
When we are together I ponder on your hidden pain

An enchanted box lies beneath the breath of the beast
Wherein I lay my body down to eternal rest
Speak within each treachourous hour love
As many arrows pierce my elven breast

Farewell to you, my time has come
Therein lies each day where my heart was lost
For you hold my life within your golden hands
At peace forever within an enchanted box

Without You, I'm Nothing
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Without your warm and friendly smile
I'm nothing.

Without your charming bright blue eyes
I'm nothing

Without your contagious laughter
I'm nothing

Without your touching beauty
I'm nothing

Without you, my world is grey
I'll wake up each and every day
Wishing it didn't have to be this way
Because without you, I'm nothing

Without your daring attitude
I'm nothing

Without your confident air
I'm nothing

Without your determination
I'm nothing

Without your caring prescence
I'm nothing

Without you my world is black
You make up for what I lack
I just wish you could come back
Because without you . . .
I'm nothing

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Peace. [Sole]

By the way, I don't know if you knew that Without You, I'm Nothing is an awesome song performed by Rock Alternative band Placebo? (The version without David Bowie is better!!) Just thouhgt I'd let you know . . .

Peace. [Sole]

*~*without you, i am nothing*~*

i'm trying to get over this,
to move on to someone new
but i feel like i am nothing
when i don't have you

without you life is pointless
it seems to just drag on
nothing seems important to me
now that you are gone

without you i am dying
all my energy has been drained
my heart is smashed to pieces
and my entire life is stained

without you i feel alone,
like i'm here all by myself
i am just nothing now
and there is no one here to help

my life is twisted, my mind is cold
i am starting to break down
i just can't be me anymore
because you are not around

the only time i felt happy
was when you were by my side
but now you're gone and over me,
and part of me has died

without you life is empty,
i don't have anything
and without you i am nothing,
because you were my everything

*rachel*

Without you I am nothing.
by Sarah

I miss you so bad, want you back so much.Just once again feel your warm and tender touch.

Its been nine months but it seem forever.
Just want you back here so we can be together.

Your not coming back, realizing took me a while.
Knowing I will never again get to see that smile.

It pains me so much facing this fact.
on my heart this has hit me with a deep impact.

When I was with you I thought I was something.
But now your gone without you, I am nothing.

In my heart you will forever be.
The memory of you will live on endlessly.

Im excited for the results today!!!

Without you i am nothing-- By Meaghen

Today was the day you decided you couldnt stay
today was the day my life was washed away

washed away like sand on a beach
like the clouds in the sky you can almost reach

today was the day i cried crisom tears
today was the day that i just wanted to disspear

Today was the day i saw you kissing her
Today was the day you told me we no longer were

So now i get to live my life knowing with out you i will never be whole
So today was the day loneliness with eternally live in my soul

~*Without You, I'm Nothing*~

Part of me died
My heart stopped beating
Thoughts quit racing
Life lost its meaning

I think back to that time
That most horrific day
When I broke your heart
And threw our love away

You are far from me
Gone is our love which was true
I miss your soft touch
I miss my world which is you

Now I wake from slumber
Realizing it was all but a dream
I look around to find you
But the mirror reveals only me

I hope to find you now
Before your goodbye sings
Because I realize I need you
Without you, I’m nothing

Erm . . . I'd rather you didn't. I have a thing about showing people my poems - it was brave enough of me to put them up on this site! I'm really sorry . . . Maybe you could send me the link to your webpage so I could check it out first?

Peace. [Sole]

Oooh, and congratulations to the winners! Thanks to everyone for taking part and making it a competition - I'll comment on one of your poems as well :)

Peace. [Sole]

Congrats to all the winners :)

Oh, and I don't mind as long as you copyright it with the name Elyse Terrell (my real name)

yes stephany of course you can put mine on there.. lol.. just let everyone know it was by me!! and congrats to all the winners :)
*rachel*