I'll pick the title you write the poem *Contest*

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    ~Six Feet Under~

    Death is so easy,
    compared to life.
    Dealing with issues,
    with only a knife.

    A slit to the wrist,
    or a neuce to the neck,
    is just a sign,
    of a lack of respect.

    A disrespect to your friends,
    your family, and you.
    If you're depressed,
    there are things you can do.

    There are ways to get help,
    from family and friends.
    If you have done wrong,
    you can make ammends.

    It's just too simple,
    to give up and let go.
    Things can always get better,
    believe me, I'd know.

    The strongest people,
    are the ones who survive.
    They fight to the end,
    just to say they're alive.

    ~Sean Dohr~

  • PnQ Mod Account
    18 years ago

    Never Holding Back

    My love for you I cannot contain
    Must show it every chance I get
    Needing to prove it in such a way
    That you will never forget

    Can you see it shining in my eyes
    It’s the motive for my every act
    Can you feel it behind my kisses
    The love that I’m never holding back

    My joy for life is overflowing
    It’s evident when I sing
    Helping me through the rough times
    Peace to my heart will bring

    Can you see it on my face
    My shield when grief attacks
    If fuels my hope that all is well
    The joy that I’m never holding back

    My faith in God is growing
    Getting stronger with every trial
    If I’m traveling on the right road
    It grows with every mile

    Can you see it in my poems
    It’s typed in white and black
    It’s the basis of all I write
    The faith that I’m never holding back

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    The Mirror On My Wall

    I walk around
    To find nothing but a reflection
    What is it a reflection of?
    Nobody know's

    Is it a reflection from up above?
    Or is it from down below?
    Nobody really know's
    But I have done this before
    And I am a Pro

    I take my time
    and look real slow
    but all a sudden it goes sublime
    and starts to aglow

    I walk some more
    and the image begins to grow
    I start to see the bigger picture
    I can't beleive it is me

    I look into this shinny glass
    and I have to agree
    That it looks like me
    I see a name on the glass

    It reads, "The Mirror On My Wall"

  • Sole
    18 years ago

    Never Saying Never
    -----------------------------

    Perhaps it was me, who said goodbye to you
    On the day I told, all the things I'm going through

    Perhaps it was me, who bid you goodbye
    On the day I told, my former life a lie.

    Perhaps it was me, who broke what we had
    On the day I told, why I was feeling sad

    Perhaps it was me, who turned you around
    On the day I told, the feelings I had found

    Perhaps it was me, who tore us apart
    On the day I told, what I held inside my heart

    Perhaps it will be me, to fix this broken line
    Perhaps you will come round, and tell me that it's fine

    Maybe I stopped a friendhship meant forever
    But I remember you telling me,

    Never, say never.

    ****************************************

    Peace. [Sole]

  • PURE HEART
    18 years ago

    YOUR WARM, WET KISS

    Holding my hand in your hands so gentle,
    i felt as i was lost in your world.
    feeling the sense of your every nerve,
    i felt as everything was turned.

    Your soft hands were around my waist,
    touching me so soft so tight.
    I felt as i was not on the ground,
    and i felt like a flying kite.

    My heart could feel the heartbeats so fast,
    my breath could feel the warmth of yours.
    My eyes could see the depth of an ocean,
    in the deep blue innoncent eyes of yours.

    The sensual feeling you aroused throughout me,
    making me feel like the princess of love.
    I melt like the snow in your masculine arms,
    and was waiting to hear some words.

    You whispered the magical words in my ears,
    which i wished to hear a long time before.
    You brought your lips closer to mine,
    kissing me so soft and touching me from core....

    It was more wet than sea,
    more soft than silk,
    more sweeter than sugar,
    but more than that-
    it was my first Kiss...

  • Adriana
    18 years ago

    oh thats okay.... i guess i have to read the rules more carefully next time..haha..peace

  • Stabbylou
    18 years ago

    I hope I got this right :)

    Turning Back Time

    If I were a child again, I'd rejoice
    I would play and I'd dance and sing out
    Turning back time I'd see once again
    What the simple things are about

    Oh yes- I would chase my own shadow
    And I'd skip to an innocent beat
    I can remember a time when I'd smile
    At every person I'd meet

    Well, that's what I'd like to claim back
    An age where beauty wasn't just in dreams
    I want to reach out and touch life
    Warm my hands in the richest sunbeams

    But wait, I can do what I've mentioned
    Turning back time may be well and good
    Yet there are still so many years to enjoy
    If I could turn back time... I don't think I would.

  • Fallen~Tears
    18 years ago

    ~Theres no turning back~

    Ever since you left me here all alone
    ive been trying to find the strength to make it on my own

    You swore you'd never leave, here is where you'd stay
    but something went wrong, as i wiped your tears away

    Everything i said earlier i never really meant
    but that is the price i will have to pay... always living with the torment

    "I hate you" is what i yelled as you shut the door
    i was just frustrated i never imagined the next time i saw you you'd be lying on the floor

    you were found with a note saying " with out your love i'd die"
    i never meant for this to be our good- bye

    So as i neal beside you and pick up your gun
    I have to fix the things ive left undone

    Hopefully once i find you up above
    I can tell you how you were the one i'd always love

    Theres no turning back now as i put the gun to my head
    Because with out your love also.. i was dead..

    By Meaghen

  • PS
    18 years ago

    Any Last wishes
    By:Poonam

    i hate you
    for what you did to me
    cursed me beat me dead
    but now its your turn
    you won't be missed
    any last wish?

    the fire of the inferno
    call to you day and night
    i hate you
    for all that you are
    and what you will ever be
    so i ask again
    any last wishes

    you hurt me bad
    took away all i had
    the hope, dreams
    and the naivete
    that made my day
    but you'll be gone
    and i ask
    any last wish?

    its over now
    and never again
    will i have to feel the pain
    you'll be gone
    and away in hell
    and doesnt matter
    if you have a wish
    because you dont deserve
    an angel to grant it
    so goodbye and
    dont forget it
    my solemn punishment
    and the lack of last
    wishes.

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    Woohoo that is the last one... :)

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    Haha, great contest : ) There should be more like this one!

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    Thank you sooooo much for picking me for third! Once again, I thought this was a great contest. You should consider making another one like it!

    ALL THE POEMS WERE GREAT!!!

    ~Sean Dohr~

  • PnQ Mod Account
    18 years ago

    Thanks, Ken! Congratulations, Sole and Sean!

    Great poems everyone!

  • Sole
    18 years ago

    Indeed, awesome Idea Ken.

    Congratulations Sean and Ann!

    Congratulations to everyone, on reading - all the poems were really great, and as usual, I'll be commenting once on everyones as well - just to say thanks for making it a competition!!

    Peace. [Sole]

  • Sole
    18 years ago

    Yah Sure xD Just tell me how I can help :P

    Peace. [Sole]