So i liked Misunderstoods idea.. ~!*Contest~!*

~!*CONTEST IS NOW CLOSED~!*

So I liked misunderstood's idea and wanted to start a new one since that ones over..(same rules apply) I'm going to list 10 titles and I want you to write a poem for the title.

1) The day you left
2) Tears in the rain
3) what will tommorow bring
4) what used to be
5) you and me
6) my bleeding dying heart
7) What lies next to you
8) If these memories ever fade
9) Never let it go
10) If i never see tomorrow..

Rules:

No profanity
No explicit
one poem per person
No prewriten work

You gotta write them in order

Example first person that enters title is gonna be
"the day you Left" 2nd person who enters title is "Tears in the rain" and so on..

Prizes:

1st place) 10 comments and a spot on my fav's

2nd place) 6 comments and a spot on my fav's

3rd place) 4 comments

The contest ends when all the titles are taken up, please make sure that you follow the rules. If any of the rules are broken I'll have your poem deleted from the contest. This means if the order is broken your poem will be deleted.

who ever enters the contest will recieve a comment on the poem that they entered.

~!*Fallentears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Tears in the rain...

Leaving my hand in the crowded world,
you swept away like the wind blows.
I kept searching you till the distance,
may be you are standing so close.

My heart started bleeding,
My eyes started crying,
My tears started flowing,
And my soul was dying.

The grief inside me,
came out through my tears.
But you were far from me to see,
that how much pain I got to bear.

All looked at me with the sympathizing eyes,
as they could feel that i was in pain.
But you did not even turned to see my tears,
but you thought it was just another rain.

My expectations got burried in the earth,
And joys got flew with the rain.
My love was lost in the crowd,
Now every rain reminds me of this pain…

what will tomorrow bring
by: Poonam

a earthy princess with clover eyes
sits atop her gray stone castle tower
the wind carries away her endless sighs
and she thinks what will tomorrow bring

destined to marry a prince unknown
from a faraway land and life so warm
in her home she is lives alone
she dreads, "what will tomorrow bring"

mother and father, queen and king
force her to sit and tat silver white lace
she wishes to ride and hear the bells ring
but alone she wonders what will tommorow bring

of being an archer, swordman she dreams
but is told that it is far too unladylike
more fun than harm to her it seems
wondering what will tomorrow bring

the man to whom she will be married
lives in a land with fun and merryment
wondering how her life will be varied
she thinks what will tomorrow bring

the bells rings and the horses bray
and young man with matching clover eyes
looks to the tower to see and say
whom and what will tommorow bring

married and going home to a free land
a princess and prince walk hand in hand
a perfect and joyful life, they sing
is what tomorrow will bring

You and me

You where there when I needed you the most
always and forever it was you and me
You were there when I could not see
Didn't know I could love but you opened the key

You were there when you gave me a box and inside was a ring
It was the most beautiful thing
You asked me to marry you
and I said "I do"
I guess it will always be me and you.

(I just now made up this poem! Thanx for this title)

~My Bleeding, Dying Heart~

My bleeding dying heart,
you ripped my life apart.
Took a look at my dreams,
tore them at the seams,
and left me right back at the start.

You left me all alone,
in an apartment all my own.
10 years of my life gone,
you played me like a pawn.
These seams will be re-sewn.

I've lost love like this before,
this time it hurts much more.
I thought she was the one,
the one who'd bare my son.
She's got me to the core.

I need her here for me,
that's the way it needs to be.
I need her in my life,
she was born to be my wife.
To my heart she holds the key.

People say that I'm obsessed,
because I will never rest,
until she's by my side.
These emotions I can't hide.
She's got me in a mess.

~Sean Dohr~

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Sorry Misunderstood, I didn't mean it as a demand more of like a request : )

~Sean Dohr~

What lies next to you
by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

What lies next to you
when you're in the grass
while you're looking at the sky

what lies next to you
when you're sound asleep
with lullabies in your dreams

what lies next to you
when you're daydreaming
with your love near

what lies next to you
when your life flashes before you
with a knife at your wrist

what lies next to you
when you're 6 feet under
with tears on your cheeks

what lies next to you
i want to know
can you tell me??

*just wrote it *

If These Memories Ever Fade
by Alyson

If these memories ever fade
Will life go back to normal
And will I be able to live
In the world that they create

If these memories ever fade
Will my love come back to me
Visit me in the night
Like nothing has ever happened

If these memories ever fade
Will those of the past be reborn
And will the pass on their knowledge
So we may learn to avoid mistakes

I hope that these will happen
And that everything will go back to normal
But for now I sit here wondering
Will these memories ever fade

never let go

i love you
i thought you loved me
i told you to never let go,
and you whispered in my ear i will never let you go, but then i hear voices in my head saying goodbye,
the thought of you is still in my mind each time i hear or see your name i will never let go of those words that you said to me i will always love you forever i kept those words in my head
i will never let you go as to that i will let go of something that belongs to me inside my heart and once that lets go and flys away i will catch it one day and i will never let that feeling fade away

never let go

i love you
i thought you loved me
i told you to never let go,
and you whispered in my ear i will never let you go, but then i hear voices in my head saying goodbye,
the thought of you is still in my mind each time i hear or see your name i will never let go of those words that you said to me i will always love you forever i kept those words in my head
i will never let you go as to that i will let go of something that belongs to me inside my heart and once that lets go and flys away i will catch it one day and i will never let that feeling fade away

never let go

i love you
i thought you loved me
i told you to never let go,
and you whispered in my ear i will never let you go, but then i hear voices in my head saying goodbye,
the thought of you is still in my mind each time i hear or see your name i will never let go of those words that you said to me i will always love you forever i kept those words in my head
i will never let you go as to that i will let go of something that belongs to me inside my heart and once that lets go and flys away i will catch it one day and i will never let that feeling fade away

I could never let go
by Dean

I could never let go,
of you're precious smile,
I could never let go,
of you're angelic lips,
I could never let go,
of you're elegant legs,
I could never let go,
of you're symmetrical boobs,
i can not let go of you're
pretty eyes,
I could never let go.

sorry if it suck i made it fast ;p

Contest is now closed..

Winners:

1st place:"The day you left" by Misunderstood

2nd place: "what used to be" by Kristen

3rd place:"If I never see tomorrow" by Pretty Green Eyes...

Everyone did an excellent job thanks for whoever entered.. Ill get the prizes done as soon as possible..

Any suggestions on how I can improve my poem. If flow was the problem, that is because of the poetry style. Thanks for any suggestions!!!