Adriana's new contest!!

  • Adriana
    18 years ago

    okay i know i have been doing a lot of contest but i can't help it i'm addicted.....wait that gives me an idea...in this contest i want you guys to write 1 thing your addicted to...in a poem of course...whether your addicted to a boy/girl....or a type of food...whether your addicted to singing or dancing....well i'm sure you get the point...here are the rule....

    no explicit or profanity poems
    1 poem per person
    i will close this contest when 10 poems are entered

    Ready.....get set...go...go....go...hahaha

  • unstated affinity
    18 years ago

    isn't it wonderful..?

    Isn't it wonderful..?
    our last winter..
    when a story was written
    by the sky of heaven...

    the rythm of the wind..
    bring us to a dream
    where our soul and faith
    lies within the overflowing stream...

    the stars...
    like the tears of thousands angels..
    flowing and swaying..
    unsteady but gentle..
    the moon..
    like the melodies of our hearts..
    so sweet and tender..

    isn't it wonderful..?
    to walk on each other hands..
    in the impeccable place.
    where we found our wishing star

    isn't it wonderful..?
    to be always together..
    loving each other..
    wherever we are..

  • Sole
    18 years ago

    Without You I'm Nothing
    --------------------------------

    Without your warm and friendly smile
    I'm nothing.

    Without your charming bright blue eyes
    I'm nothing

    Without your contagious laughter
    I'm nothing

    Without your touching beauty
    I'm nothing

    Without you, my world is grey
    I'll wake up each and every day
    Wishing it didn't have to be this way
    Because without you, I'm nothing

    Without your daring attitude
    I'm nothing

    Without your confident air
    I'm nothing

    Without your determination
    I'm nothing

    Without your caring prescence
    I'm nothing

    Without you my world is black
    You make up for what I lack
    I just wish you could come back
    Because without you . . .
    I'm nothing

    ************************************************

    Peace. [Sole]

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    ~Where To Start~

    The worst is when you love someone,
    as more than just a friend.
    She teases you and flirts with you,
    to you it's not pretend.

    All her friends will tell you,
    "I think she likes you too."
    You'll knod and shake your head,
    as if you already knew.

    But, inside you are always questioning,
    if to her it's just a game.
    But, you're in love, it makes no difference,
    to you it's all the same.

    You sit with her when your alone,
    and try to take things further.
    No further than a hug or kiss,
    and she's labeled you a pervert.

    Now things are all messed up,
    because you had thought wrong.
    She didn't really like you,
    you were right all along.

    Sometimes, when you're in love,
    you take things more to heart.
    When it comes to women,
    men have no clue where to start.

    ~Sean Dohr~

  • Tisha
    18 years ago

    ~You Mean The World To Me~
    by Tisha

    Sitting here missing you and wanting you here by my side
    And these feelings I have for you I can not hide
    You are always on my mind
    For another true love, like you I will never find
    Your the guy that moves me like no other
    I love you like I could never love another
    Your the man of my dreams
    Cause when I am with you ,my whole body steams
    Your my knight in shining armour, you always have been and
    always will be
    Honey, you mean the world to me

    Copyright ©2005 Tisha

    * I think there is at least one guy in all our lives that makes us feel this way*

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    Lol... I dunno.. but when I started writing this, someone just started singing in my head with a guitar and stuff rotfl... this is about my first luv.

    __________________________________________

    Addicted 2 U (Can't Live Without You)

    I tried to run away
    Life just can't be the same
    I'm tired of waiting for the day when I can leave

    I wasted all this time
    On what was never mine
    I just wish I had the guts to say "I love you"

    I find myself instead
    Covering it up
    With my dreams inside my head
    Right now I feel so dumb

    I blame my head for thinking it could end up so perfect
    Living in a world where it all would go my way

    I heard a million hearts beating at the speed of sound
    They were calling out, "Come back I miss you"

    Instead I try to tie a pillow to my head
    I'd rather soak myself in a washing machine
    Before I tell the truth to the love of my dreams

    I can't live without you if my heart keeps screaming:
    "Please wake up 'cause you're not dreaming"

    I just wish I could tell you how much that I'm not over..
    'Cause every night I hear your voice in my head
    I can't stop it if I tried
    I wish I didn't cry
    Truth is I can't survive
    For my entire life

    Without you I'll always lose
    But my lonely heart is proof
    Of how much I can't live without you

  • Adriana
    18 years ago

    5 more to go........but i like all these poems so far and i see that its going to be hard to judge.

  • J Lau
    18 years ago

    Truth is...
    by J. Lau

    I used to think
    That I can control,
    The feelings I had for you
    And the thoughts of being with you.

    I kept my distance,
    I held my stance.
    I treasure the friendships,
    And I wished you both happiness.

    I knew that it will not
    Be an easy path,
    But it turns out to be much rougher
    Then I could ever imagine.
    Cause deep down,
    It hurts like crazy.

    Truth is...
    I cannot hold my feelings back
    And ignore its existence.
    I cannot pretend l am not jealous,
    That I'm not the one by your side.

    Truth is...
    I cannot ignore the pain anymore,
    When comforting you when you fall.
    I cannot stand seeing you being hurt over and over again,
    And there's nothing more I can do.

    Truth is...
    I'm not being truthful and fair to myself,
    Cause it hurts so much inside each time you cry.
    I cannot leave this wound open,
    And not distance myself to let it heal.

    Truth is...
    I had feelings for you ever since the day we met,
    And it only grew deeper as time past.
    I know that I should not feel this way,
    But I can't help myself thinking of you each day.

    Truth is...
    I was sure that you were the one,
    ever since we met again that day,
    Around the end of June.

    I don't know what to do anymore,
    My logic is overwhemled by my emotions.
    I still wish that everything will work out,
    Between you and him.
    But if one day in the years to come,
    That fate finally grant me the chance.
    I wish that we will be together,
    Forever less a day...

    For that is the day,
    I wanted you to know...
    How I truly felt ... about YOU.

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  • End Of Eternity
    18 years ago

    Like A Hurricane

    Twisted in my own web
    i was searching for a reason to smile
    like a hurricane you came in my life
    and made all the pain worthwhile
    i rolled upside down in your words
    you made me find angel in satan's eyes
    just when i lost all my hope
    though so far, but you heard my silent cries

    no regrets as there are no expectations
    where in this world do you find such relations?

    read in books
    had dreams
    seen in movies
    even fantasized
    now i wonder
    how you made me go through this
    to my life you are a long awaited bliss

    i wish if time could stand still
    so addicted to you i am now
    you make me smile like a child
    and i am here for you and i always will

    trust my words as my soul speaks
    live my promises as i tell
    my life has never been so beautiful
    and its all because of you my friend
    My Michelle

  • Adriana
    18 years ago

    anyone else want to enter?

  • ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ
    18 years ago

    I will post a poem shortly

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    hey umm idk if this is exact..i say its an infection...but its pretty much the same as an addiction. anyway lemme kno if it duznt fit the theme rite n ill change it

    You're my infection, you intoxicate me,
    All I do, is think of you, you're all I see.
    You control my thoughts, my actions,
    You make my mind go to fractions.
    Why do you torture my soul?
    You have made a big hole.
    You're my infection, you're my life,
    You cut through me like I'm butter, and you a knife.
    You infect my every move,
    This I would be willing to prove.
    You're my everything, my sun my moon,
    For you're infection, I'm not immune.
    My infection.

  • Lost Soul 691
    18 years ago

    Thirty Years No More

    I need to see you
    to tell you face to face
    That is why I've asked you
    to join me today in this place

    Should we end this now
    before it is too late
    I can't go on any longer
    for my love has turned to hate

    What started out as fun
    has easily become
    A habit more addictive
    and I'm smarter now, not dumb

    But how do we end
    thirty years of our life
    All the times of pleasure
    now cut me like a knife

    Oh, I hear the little whispers
    from others when you're around
    Can't they see I'm trying
    forging ahead, breaking new ground

    I'm not welcome at my mother's
    and I know it's you to blame
    You've got your talons in me
    I'm captured in the flame

    You fill my days with hazy smoke
    and flow amongst my veins
    To part will be a heartache
    but I'll free myself from the chains

    Where have all the years gone
    just what do I have left
    You've taken so much from me
    another bodily theft

    You still invoke urges
    though I've suffered your abuse
    Can I fix the damage
    or just declare a truce

    My pulse still races
    and my heart beats
    But until I ban you
    I'll hide beneath the sheets

    Your poison is in me
    no longer can I control
    For you've taken me over
    mind, body and soul

    The evil prevails
    in everything you do
    It permeates the space
    it's all around you

    So why do I cling
    onto your silent calls
    Where is my strength
    to break down the walls

    Am I afraid to lose you
    and what will take your place
    For you've been a mighty crutch
    but rarely my saving grace

    Today we are wiser
    then the days of our youth
    When you weren't forbidden
    but now you are uncouth

    The price I pay to keep you
    a hidden part of my life
    Doesn't measure up
    it isn't worth the strife

    Damn, I just can't take it
    so I will say adieu
    I'll turn from the mirror
    break the cigarette in two

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    =O one more..rite?:)

  • Moose
    18 years ago

    A Perfect Fantasy

    I live a perfect life
    Nothing ever awry.
    I had everything I wanted,
    I was the luckiest guy.

    I'd wake up every morning
    with a smile on my face.
    Walk down the stairs
    to my moms warm embrace.

    Straight A's in school
    and loving friends
    Life was perfect
    It'd never end.

    That is until
    I wake from this fantasy
    about how things
    Should really be.

    I wake every morning
    to a yell and a scream
    then I just realise
    my fantasy was just a dream.

    Flunking out of school
    not a friend to be found
    feelings of depression
    and the need to be underground.

    Life was never perfect
    it was only a dream
    about how things
    should actually be.

    ((ehh, lol really bad but oh well.))

  • swill
    18 years ago


    ADDICTED

    The weather beaten garden clock betrays some laziness
    The once precise hands have now grown rhythm-less

    The laced hammock sways beneath the winking stars
    And the silver moonlight floods the dale of flowers

    But something strikes my heart as I lie in that light
    Enveloped in the velvet silence of this queer night

    The dancing flame of fire still burns the candle wick
    The bottle of cherry wine lies smashed by my drunken kick

    The wind is steady; blows strong without a change
    But somehow this heart of mine has never felt as strange

    But now my thoughts chase each other to victory
    And I finally understand the cause of my misery

    On this very hammock she used to be in my embrace
    I used to kiss her till she fell asleep, exhaling on my face

    On this quiescent trail we had patted smiling flowers
    Formed imaginary hearts by joining the radiant stars

    Between these very hills our winter moons had sunk
    We’d break the wine bottles each time we got drunk

    The butterflies had blushed upon seeing our first kiss
    Laying on the fresh-cut grass, enclosed in a smitten mist

    And now I lie, drunk, with wine and memories of two
    I hope missing her is not something I must get used to

    The air of strangeness transforms to a glacial breath
    This new life of loneliness is in fact a living death

    The wind puts out the candle, darkness adds to gloom
    Even the gusts now bring the rosy scent of her perfume

    And as it intoxicates me, my eyes turn to scour
    I look around for her, until I realize she is afar

    But every time a star falls, this heart of mine believes
    And searches for her, once again, amidst the mocking breeze............

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    shoot! lol.. i really wanted to do dat! urrgg! :P
    newayz... nice poems everyone!
    jessy