We miss school days!

  • PURE HEART
    18 years ago

    hey there!
    there is a new contest by me!
    this time the topic is School days. we all miss that rite?
    so lets share our experiences of our school days among ourselves.......so the rules are:
    1. should be ur own work
    2. should be in rhythm
    3. must b real and lively
    4. one poem per person
    5. must be newly written

    the contest will end after 10 poems
    so get ready guys! all the best.........

    Rewards:
    1st- 5 comments on any of ur poems
    2nd- 3 comments
    3rd- 1 comment

  • swill
    18 years ago

    LEAVING HOME

    My first day was bittersweet
    I missed my mom, made my first friend
    Those young years went by so neat
    Who had thought theyd come to an end?

    All those brilliant times
    Which I felt would surely last
    Have slipped from innocent hands
    Those thirteen years have gone so fast.

    Little by little we made our way
    Perilous bridges we dared to cross
    The warmth and light of the sunny days
    Kept away the dampening moss.

    Light now ends and darkness waits
    But this journey does not end here
    The bright lamps of knowledge
    Our uncertain ships shall steer

    I may find myself on a separate path
    And our roads may never cross again
    But these profound memories shall stay in me
    Replayed again and again till I am content.

    This parting is inevitable
    We might as well make it pretty
    I shall miss you, my dear school
    You shall stay in me for eternity.

  • swill
    18 years ago

    is that appropriate?

  • PURE HEART
    18 years ago

    well i wanted to share ur experiences in ur school life. but its fine i think. and yeah it must b newly written.....

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    Childhood Friends

    When we were little
    We went to the same school
    We played on the same playground
    Broke the same rules

    We were the same
    Because that's just how we were
    Now that we are older
    It's my turn to confer

    I miss the way we'd race
    I miss the smile on your face
    I miss talking endlessly for recesses
    I miss playing that old hopscotch game

    I still remember jumprope
    Wanna play mousetrap?
    How about double dutch?
    Sometimes we don't want to and call it c**p

    I loved playing all these childish games
    I just turned 13 and it isn't the same
    I realize that I'm turning old
    But I'll wait knowing truth be told

    I pray we will meet again
    Goodbye, my childhood friends...

  • Devyn
    18 years ago

    Homework

    I've been working on my homework
    all the live long day.
    I've been working on my homework
    even though it's Saturday.
    I can hardly keep from snoring.
    Why's homework have to be so boring?
    I can hear my mother shouting?
    Is your homework done?

    Did you work all night?
    Are your answers right?
    Did you double-check your spelling too?
    Will you pass the test?
    You can have a rest
    When your homework's done.

    I HATE HOMEWORK!

  • swill
    18 years ago

    is this contest ever gonna get completed?

  • PURE HEART
    18 years ago

    untill and unless 10 poems are posted! judging will not b done...sorry guys!