Need a poem please

  • Melissa Rogers
    18 years ago

    Not sure if anyone is willing to help me. I am looking for a poem, or someone to write me a poem. I would like it to be about a married woman with children, who is not in love with her husband. She doesn't want to leave him because she doesn't want her kids to be hurt (emotionally). She is completely miserable but all that matters to her is the happiness of the kids. There is a man at her work that she thinks about constantly. She isn't in love with him, but just likes to be close to him. He is nice to her, and tells her the things that she longed to hear from her husband before she fell out of love.

    Thanks to anyone willing to help me.

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    i have something to say, and it is just my own opinion which we are totally entitled to.
    I think we cant write poems for other people, and this is why? Poems reflect feelings, we write about our own experiences using our feelings and emotions, we write about what we see around us and we write how we think people feel but we dont know unless we've been or know someone in situations.
    My own opinion, but just think about it.
    love Tara-Kay

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    i'm not saying we shouldnt write poems, i am saying that poems are from our hearts and minds and what we think and feel. How can you write a poem for someone, they are different from you and the poem is what you feel and not them.
    I was only giving my opinion though.

  • Ashleigh Skye
    18 years ago

    sounds like a very sad situation..

  • Lexi
    18 years ago

    i agree...

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    that sounds a lot like my mom...

  • Ashleigh Skye
    18 years ago

    wow nice poem bob