Lets mix it up a tad bit...*Idea #2*

  • Kaylee
    18 years ago

    I will sign up

  • PnQ Mod Account
    18 years ago

    I'd like to be the judge

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    I'm in...

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    I'll do it again :)

  • PS
    18 years ago

    ill do it

  • PnQ Mod Account
    18 years ago

    6 down - 4 to go!

  • Kenshin
    18 years ago

    Count me in this time

  • Mephastophilis
    18 years ago

    I'd love to do it :) It's been a while... XxX

  • katie!
    18 years ago

    I will do it...

  • PnQ Mod Account
    18 years ago

    Only one more!

  • Biscuit
    18 years ago

    ill do it if theres still a space?...

  • katie!
    18 years ago

    Yay! I cant wait to start!

  • Kenshin
    18 years ago

    Finally

  • PnQ Mod Account
    18 years ago

    Sorry, very busy at work today (brought it home, too) so wasn't able to check on this at all until now.

    Here is the Order:

    Kristen
    Kenshin
    Poonam
    Sean Dohr
    Katie
    Joe(Italian Stallion)
    Molly (Mephastophilis)
    Ken
    biscuit
    Kaylee

    Subject: First Kiss

    Title: The Kissing Bridge

  • Kenshin
    18 years ago

    On that fateful night we will met,
    I remember is was a summer's night,
    On top of the lover's bridge,
    We shared our first kiss

  • PS
    18 years ago

    sparkling stars danced across the sky
    our bodies swayed as we held each other
    as the water wandered its course beneath
    our lips touched, heat spread within us

    (i wasnt sure if i was supposed to rhyme, so i sort of just went with it)

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    Atop the arching bridge,
    our lips met tenderly.
    Fireworks went off, sparks flew,
    it was a first for me.

  • katie!
    18 years ago

    My first kiss in the evening
    The first of more to appear
    Upon that picturesque bridge
    Our feelings can be clear

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    By the way you're looking at me
    With the twinkle in your eye
    You're coming off as a little nervous
    I hope tonight I'll get my kiss goodbye

    On that fateful night we met,
    I remember it was a summer's night,
    On top of the lover's bridge,
    We shared our first kiss

    sparkling stars danced across the sky
    our bodies swayed as we held each other
    as the water wandered its course beneath
    our lips touched, heat spread within us

    Atop the arching bridge,
    our lips met tenderly.
    Fireworks went off, sparks flew,
    it was a first for me.

    My first kiss in the evening
    The first of more to appear
    Upon that picturesque bridge
    Our feelings can be clear

    Taking this feeling
    That I once longed for
    Up upon the river tonight
    I ask you for one more

  • Biscuit
    18 years ago

    The warmth of your breath relaxed me
    As you whispered softly in my ear
    Stroking my cheek with your fingers
    Gently kissing my nose with a smile

  • Kaylee
    18 years ago

    I'll post when I get home :)

  • Kaylee
    18 years ago

    The Kissing Bridge

    By the way you're looking at me
    With the twinkle in your eye
    You're coming off as a little nervous
    I hope tonight I'll get my kiss goodbye

    On that fateful night we met,
    I remember it was a summer's night,
    On top of the lover's bridge,
    We shared our first kiss

    sparkling stars danced across the sky
    our bodies swayed as we held each other
    as the water wandered its course beneath
    our lips touched, heat spread within us

    Atop the arching bridge,
    our lips met tenderly.
    Fireworks went off, sparks flew,
    it was a first for me.

    My first kiss in the evening
    The first of more to appear
    Upon that picturesque bridge
    Our feelings can be clear

    Taking this feeling
    That I once longed for
    Up upon the river tonight
    I ask you for one more

    As I ran my thumb acrossed your lips
    Your eyes sparkling like the norhtern star
    I closed my eyes kissing you softly
    Promising you that I'd never be far

    The warmth of your breath relaxed me
    As you whispered softly in my ear
    Stroking my cheek with your fingers
    Gently kissing my nose with a smile

    With the morning sunrise, gently gliding
    upon this moment; our embrace finalized.
    Forsaken lover's we shall be after this night.
    I shall always remember the kissing bridge.

  • Kenshin
    18 years ago

    Now that's a good poem... very romantic

  • PnQ Mod Account
    18 years ago

    WOOO HOOOO!!! Awesome poem! Everyone did a great job!

    BEST STANZAS:
    in alphabetical order: Biscuit, Kaylee, Ken

    CONGRATULATIONS!!!

    I will post the poem in the next post for you to copy (without typos and with uniform capitalization and punctuation)

  • PnQ Mod Account
    18 years ago

    The Kissing Bridge

    By the way you're looking at me
    With the twinkle in your eye
    You're coming off as a little nervous
    I hope tonight I'll get my kiss goodbye

    On that fateful night we met
    I remember it was a summer's night
    On top of the lover's bridge
    We shared our first kiss

    Sparkling stars danced across the sky
    Our bodies swayed as we held each other
    As the water wandered its course beneath
    Our lips touched, heat spread within us

    Atop the arching bridge
    Our lips met tenderly
    Fireworks went off, sparks flew
    It was a first for me

    My first kiss in the evening
    The first of more to appear
    Upon that picturesque bridge
    Our feelings can be clear

    Taking this feeling
    That I once longed for
    Up upon the river tonight
    I ask you for one more

    As I ran my thumb across your lips
    Your eyes sparkling like the northern star
    I closed my eyes kissing you softly
    Promising you that I'd never be far

    The warmth of your breath relaxed me
    As you whispered softly in my ear
    Stroking my cheek with your fingers
    Gently kissing my nose with a smile

    With the morning sunrise gently gliding
    Upon this moment our embrace finalized
    Forsaken lover's we shall be after this night
    I shall always remember the kissing bridge

    ~~~~~~~~~

    Authors of this Poem (by Stanza order)

    .+. κяıѕτєи ღ .+.
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=160387

    Kenshin
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=206623

    Poonam
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=215960

    Sean Dohr
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=165913

    katie!>©
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=60765

    Italian Stallion
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=144412

    Ken
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=199013

    Biscuit
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=134841

    Kaylee
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=213018

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    Nice job to all!!!

  • Kenshin
    18 years ago

    Congratulations to everyone

  • katie!
    18 years ago

    Well done everyone!

  • Biscuit
    18 years ago

    wow iv never won anything on here before!! thanks :) my computers broken and iv only just managed to get online while my sisters out to see the results :P well done to everyne the overall piece is wondeful, and twas a good idea Ken, combining everyones talents really made a great poem!