10 titles, you write

  • swill
    18 years ago

    MY DREAM
    Its Christmas time and everyone’s merry
    The ball seems to go on all night
    They’re waiting for the Christmas fairy
    The lamps are glowing sparkling bright

    11 o clock on Christmas eve
    I'm stranded at home and theyre calling
    Captive in a valley of make-believe
    I try to climb up but I'm just falling.

    There is not a soul in sight
    Streets all empty but for the snow
    Not even couples on this holy night
    Are kissing underneath the mistletoe

    Every beggar is in the town hall
    Wearing dresses which aren’t frayed
    I cannot hear but the reindeers call
    As I write my sad serenades

    Friends and family all dressed up
    Now dance to a tune so fine
    One of my pals just called up
    Asking me to join all in this merry time

    But I don’t really feel so spirited
    The trembling hope wont go away
    ive waited long though patience is limited
    but I think I’ll just wait another day

    the night is cold but I feel colder
    the night has lost its golden sheen
    waiting more will only make me older
    but I just cant let go the sight of the screen.

    Waiting for that clanging sound
    Which could just be your email
    But could it just be another Judas
    And not the holy grail?

    And finally a sound is heard
    Hope takes over my weary mind
    But its just the bells at the party
    Its midnight and they begin to dine

    Two more hours pass by
    They party on, its almost dawn
    But hope has made my sleep fly
    And left me alone and forlorn

    They’re returning from the ball
    And they’re making such a din
    But I hear that sound after all
    And I rush to my electric screen

    The windows open up so fast
    I see your name emerge
    The joy I feel is deep and vast
    Contentment clears out the dirge

    Finally you had replied
    I read every word a hundred times
    I imagine you reading my email
    As you correct my mysterious rhymes

    No gifts underneath the Christmas tree
    Just the tree and lonely me
    But no gift could have ever compared
    To the one I had received

    No gift could’ve made me this happy
    No box of toys topped with a red bow
    No one could’ve ever cared less than me
    If this Christmas was devoid of snow

    But another sound begins to ring
    I cant believe my ears,
    i hope its just a deceitful lie
    But the alarm clock reduces me to tears

    But I’ll just get over it
    Its happened so many times before
    I'm almost so used to it
    That I just slump back on the floor.

    Every second of the dream I dreamed
    Could’ve sworn that it was real
    Words are too weak to express
    The sadness that I feel.

    DHAVAL

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    Loved You Once, But Not Now
    By: Italian Stallion

    You ask me to stay around
    And I don't want to let you down
    But I loved you once
    and you gave me hell

    You came to me
    You gave me hope
    And you showed me how
    But then you gave me dope

    And I can't go on any longer
    I don't know if I can cope
    With this entagled mess
    You call love

    You call it love
    I call it abuse
    Next thing I know
    Here comes a shove

    I go with the flow
    Try to brush it off
    Sit and watch a candle aglow
    Trying to get the subject out of my mind

    It doesn't seem to work
    I must have been blind
    Not to see this before
    This entangled thing we all call love

    I have decided to cut you off
    Cut you off from me
    I loved you once
    But I don't now

    Go in peace
    And don't you dare lift a brow
    This is the end
    To this mess

    I walk away
    Under a lot of stress
    Maybe I'll take the day off
    And play a little chess

  • Sole
    18 years ago

    Those ^^ Are amazing! Keep up the awesome work! Might write one later . . .

    Peace. [Sole]

  • Patrick
    18 years ago

    Feel My Pain

    Feel my pain
    as my soul scream
    it scream a name
    miss understood
    not known to be.

    Feel my truth
    almost forgotton now
    of a life miss used
    complete abuse
    by me

    Feel my tears
    every night they come
    never letting go
    they will not ever
    be done.

    I made one mistake
    that follows in my path
    I cannot seem
    to run as fast
    as this shadow
    screaming of my past
    so as I die here
    just know its ok
    what you see here is a shell
    nothing more
    than an empty space
    that once was me

  • ~~Lindsay Woods~~
    18 years ago

    Till the End
    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    You are always there,
    Through the times that i was scared.
    You were there when i needed someone to hold,
    You were the person who never told.
    When i first met you i thought you were kind,
    But now that we are parted, i am blind.
    You asked me one night,
    To be with you, things would turn out alright,
    But as time passed away,
    I had something to say.

    My grandpa died, and i wanted to tell you,
    But valentines day would never come through.
    I never got anything that day,
    But i knew what you were trying to say.
    That night i cried and i was alone,
    I didn't call you because i couldn't use the phone.
    I was so sad and depressed, i had no where to go,
    I lied in my bed and look out my window.
    I saw the stars, they twinkled in with light,
    And that reminded me of that happy night.
    Nobody could make me happier, when i was with you,
    Our relationship was wonderful and true,
    But that day you broke my heart,
    And told me you would rather start,
    on another relationship, to just be friends,
    and he would be there to the very end.

    Three weeks went by,
    and he never even said "hi".
    I told myself things would never workout,
    And now i realized there is no need to shout,
    He talked to me at the end of last week,
    And he said we need to be friends, and our friendship he did seek.
    Ever since then, we have been the best of friends,
    And we both realize now, we will be there for each other till the end.

  • MemoirsOfMe
    18 years ago

    Tears of Pain

    My anguish falls like rain
    Upon the sheer glass floor
    I cannot stand to look into it
    Reminding me of myself before

    It seems like they wont cease
    The deluge pouring without end
    It is my heart spilling its secrets
    No hand for anyone to lend

    I feel so alone in the world
    Am I the only one who cries?
    Its like no one cares to pay attention
    Like no one even wants to try

    So as my pain cascades into eternity
    No one will even hear
    Im forlorn, injured, and elapsed
    My Tears of Pain keeping my fear

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    ~Broken Heart~

    I am giving you your final warning,
    cut the sh** and quit your mourning.
    You're going to be fine, you see,
    the one who's given up is me.

    We've been done many times before,
    you are, no longer, who I adore.
    This is it, we cannot continue,
    I have lost myself within you.

    Now, I'm trying to find who I am,
    but with you around I can't.
    This is not just another break,
    forget about me for heaven's sake.

    I just can't take this added stress,
    I quit this never-ending quest.
    Time is needed, for me to think,
    of this mountain, I've reached the brink.

    Now, It's time for me to come down,
    I refuse to continue to wear this frown.
    We had good times, yes I'll admit,
    but reality is, I'm sick of your sh**.

    ~Sean Dohr~

  • PS
    18 years ago

    Rain

    Falling droplets; they say the gods cry.
    but they are not the tears of a child lord
    nor the weeping of a mourning goddess
    that hateful resounding noise above
    is not the anger of almighty Zeus

    no, the heavens are not so sad
    human punishment is not so anger filled
    the gods laugh, not scorn
    that rain is god's joke on sinful beings
    spit not tears falls from the heavenly bodies
    the gods bowl in lands of the divine. they laugh.

    why cry when they reside in a world
    where the days are intertwined
    when they live in a painless paradise
    so gods giggle and mock
    the horrible race of man.

  • silhouette fairy
    18 years ago

    Rain

    rain, something i think of
    it reminds me of you
    the day we met
    our hair stuck to our faces
    my make-up smeared
    i looked up at you and smiled
    water dripping off your nose
    our eyes met,
    it didn't matter how wet we were
    then a car, a puddle
    well you know
    the moment lost
    then we got on to the train
    we sat together and whispered
    about nothing
    but about everything
    it wasn't even our stop
    but we got off any way
    dancing in the rain
    I've never felt this way before
    then you kissed me
    everything vanished
    adn we went our seperate ways
    all of this just because of the rain

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    Off by one minute...bummer. : (

  • silhouette fairy
    18 years ago

    that stinks well i'll write another
    like your poem though poonam
    but grrrrrr

  • lost_laureate
    18 years ago

    OUR LOVE

    It could never be theirs,
    This love that we share,
    There's a bond they cannot make,
    No Chemistry could learn to break.

    My love for you a river,
    For you I will always deliver,
    Like a letter- sealed and signed,
    My love is no match for time.

    Your love has conquered mountains,
    Purer than a dozen fountains,
    It thrilled me - every part,
    Then you placed it in my heart.

    Our love is is quite euphoric!
    For although it's prehistoric,
    Whether future, present , past-
    My love- your love- OUR love will last.

  • Sole
    18 years ago

    Stay Strong
    ---------------------

    Stay strong my saviour
    Never let them get you down
    Stay strong my darling
    Keep the smile, lose the frown
    Stay strong my light
    Pick yourself from the ground
    Stay strong my Friend
    Please don't drown

    Stay strong my heartache
    I'll fall, but you can fly
    Stay strong my sorrow
    Don't listen to them lie
    Stay strong my pain
    See inside the inner eye
    Stay strong my Friend
    Please don't die

    Stay strong my laughter
    So I can come when you call
    Stay strong my kindness
    Move forwards when I stall
    Stay strong my peace
    Break through this wall
    Stay strong my Friend
    Please don't fall

    Stay strong my beauty
    Because I need you here
    Stay strong my image
    Because I live in fear
    Stay strong my love
    Because my every tear
    Is cried for you my friend,
    So stay strong, and keep me near

    **********************************************************

    Peace. [Sole]

  • master of shadow
    18 years ago

    secrets

    Hidden truths within one’s mind,
    Locked away in a dark corner
    There for others to try to find.
    Locked away within a stone case,
    Granite cold to feel,
    The course grains scratch upon the skin
    Hidden secrets, under locks of steel
    Buried away from the world
    Never allowed to be seen,
    Fearing that they will be discovered
    That someone may get though the protective screen
    Find the hidden chest within
    And break though the locks of steel
    See within deep within your darkest thought
    Where you’re secrets shall start to reveal.
    So you lock them up tighter
    Deep within your mind
    Locked away in a dark corner
    There for others to try to find.

  • ~~Lindsay Woods~~
    18 years ago

    i wonder who will win!!!!!!!

  • PS
    18 years ago

    ouch. im sorry. i like your though.

  • swill
    18 years ago

    come on, SPILL THE BEANS! lol

  • swill
    18 years ago

    well done!!!
    just for advice sake kristina, how can i improve my poem?

  • Sole
    18 years ago

    Thanks A Lot!

    Congrats to everyone - all poems were awesome.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • MemoirsOfMe
    18 years ago

    Yay. I'm honored to get 2nd place.

    Thanks!

    Congrats to those who won, and all who entered. They all were really amazing.

  • ~~Lindsay Woods~~
    18 years ago

    nice job every1~

  • PS
    18 years ago

    great poems you guys!!

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    Heyyy, thanks for the pick. GREAT CONTEST!!!