need an opinion like now!!

ok im gonna ask my gf to marry me in like a couple of hours and i wanna know if what im gonna say is right:

"i know i f**ck up and say the wrong thing at the wrong time and im sorry for that and i know i'm dorky and stupid but for some odd reason you love that about me, i love you and i know weve gone through alot of good and bad things but we always seem to work them out. i cant picture myself without you being there with me. when im with you it feels like my life is complete...what im trying to get out is will you marry me?"

is that ok or needs work?

Awww, that's so romantic. Good luck.

I honestly think its perfect!!!! My boyfriend fucks up a lot, but I would marry him cause I love him to death. I feel if we didn't fight, it wouldn't be....us. What you have to say is honest, and from the heart. Thats what counts. Say that. Its best to say what you feel. Good Luck!!

Whatever you do, don't plan it...and DONT SWEAR just speak from your heart be yourself be open and be real - thats why she loves you in the first place...

How did it go????? :OD

YOU GUYS DO KNOW SHES A GIRL RIGHT????

sooo.....

Yup - go for it. But You're 17 - only make this life commitment if you really want it. Divorce is horrible.

Peace. [Sole]

That's really cute! But when I get propossed to, I don't want to here f**ked up.. try messed up maybe..

aww..datz sweett.. i think ur speech does need a little work.. hehe.. jus try n make it romantic instead of lik.. makin urself look bad.. hehe.. but, r you sure u wanna get married rite now? i mean.. i dont kno netin abt ur relationship.. but ur only 17.. im jus sayin think abt this ALOT b4 u propose..newayz! best of luck!
jessy

thanx for all the advice guys, i havent had a chance to ask her though cuz the day i was was the day before i went out of town and i just came back saturday night, i bought a way better ring though, i might ask her today when we skip 7th cuz im getting tired of carrying this ring box in my pocket all day lol.

Sweet