3 poem Story

I have just wrote a 3 poem story. I would like if it somoene would comment on these. I've never wrote a poem like this and would greatly appriate some comments. I will also then return the favor.

How Long
His Nightmare
For 10 Years

That is order of which they should be read.
I hope you enjoy them, I really enjoyed writing these ones.
Be pleasently suprised!!!!!!!