Too Humpty Dumpty

I have recently become very upset with my writing. Although, I have been able to find inspiration to write, my poems have lacked depth. I haven't exactly found what I need to find to bring my poetry to that next level. You can check out my poems if you'd like and any suggestions would be much appreciated...

Thanks!

~Sean Dohr~

Well, not that this will help much, but the topic reminded me of a question I've had for a long time... Does it actually ever say that Humpty Dumpty is infact an egg???
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But anywho, sticking with the topic, I'd say just try diving into something new. Whether it be different style, or rhyme (or no rhyme at all!!! I've tried this a few times and I'm actually growing acustom to it - I like it much more than I used to), structure or topics - there's so much you can fiddle with and the only way you will ever get close to impressing yourself is to try something that challenges you atleast a little bit.
I too have trouble keeping myself happy with the things I write. Infact, most of the things I write I think are crap - but the more I look around the more people I see that enjoy them or appreciate the message (whatever it may be). So I'm very thankful for that as it is a huge confidence boost. Maybe that's what you need to?
Well I don't know for sure. But I wish you the best of luck :)

Sean, youre doing too many contests. try stopping that and doing something else, i mean, try delving into your past...your sadness. Your losses, and write in emotion.

I usually try to hint at my past for some of mine and even though it is really hard to have those feelings all over again at times, I think it makes the reader able to feel the same things.