should i

  • anonymous
    18 years ago

    should i write how i feel even if it doesnt make sense and or rhyme, or cover my feelings with rough desciptions to make it sound better? help me.

  • HOLLY ARMER
    18 years ago

    You could really go either way on this.
    By adding descriptions it can give your feelings depth and intrigue the reader.
    However, if you apply too much description it can take away from the emotion.
    My best advice to you is just keep writing. Don't worry so much about how good it is. If you just keep pen to paper you will grow and with growth comes better writing.
    Another tip is to read poetry as well, all types. That's the best tutorial ever....

  • LostHopesCrimsonTears
    18 years ago

    i agree, i usualy just write what comes out. you should write for yourself to express yourself. if it comes out good and people like it too, even better, but you shouldnt worry too much if its good or not.

  • Nee
    18 years ago

    Agree with Holly ^^

    its not about the rhyme or about how gud it is...poems are just a way of expressing how you feel..so just keep writing and you consider them as some thoughts also =)

  • kirst
    18 years ago

    Write how u r feeling
    who cares if it doesn't rhyme
    poems sound much better when they come from the heart.

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    try a combination

  • MorbidCupcake
    18 years ago

    You should just write how you feel. Dont hid ur self to make it sound good. Trust me, if you say wht you feel itll be good anyway.

  • **~Lucy~**
    18 years ago

    try to write how you feel then try and expand on it thats what i do and sometimes that dont make sense

  • amandaa
    18 years ago

    Write what you feel, even if it doesn't seem to make sense. When people focus their poetry on trying to make it rhyme, it ends up sounding pretty bad sometimes. Let it flow.
    Also, with practise It will get better.

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    write what YOU want ;) don't stay with the crowd. play it ur way. it doesn't matter if it's the worst rhyming in the world or the best. it's still a poem and that's what counts. have fun ;)