Got a poem you're really proud of? #2

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=156835
Poem called "Dying In The Corner"

Talks about stress and suicide. (its just a poem, I don't condone suicide)

When I wrote this piece, I had the theme, but the style was a surprise. When I read the first few stanzas, I had to go back and change the rest of the poem to match it. I don't know what style is it.. so I was thinking that someone here would tell me.. or direct me to another poem with the same style. If not, I would love if someone tried the stye.

Its
1,2,3 where 3's main word appear in the following stanza 3,4,5 ...

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=672313
It's called, "The Rag Doll."

It's the point of view from an abuse victim and how they might be dragged to do what other people want them to do instead of listening to them wanting help.

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=648752
It's called ,'Living Love'

It's just about...the feeling of love.

I think it's the best poem I've written ever! I'm always getting compliments on it. Alot of people have told me it's their favorite one of mine.

yeah, my poem You are my angel, its about my best friend Sophie and how she is always there for me and its the best one ive written about her so far, its really true and sweet

http://www.friendship-poems.com/poems.php?id=663671

my poem 'Abuse To Underneath the Willow' is one of my fav's because its a sad love "story" sorta...to me its sad and reminds me of my ex and how so many times we were in that positon but i never killed myself.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=674759

My poem is A Final Prayer. It was one of the first works i've written. And i'm extremely proud of it. And after editing it some over the last few days, it seems better than ever.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=440604

I've got two

Twisted Point of View -

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=671553

and

Let the Angel Rot In Peace -

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=660246

Xx-me-xX

my poem stitches

it was the first really seriouse poem i had written, also, i felt the idea behind it was pretty original.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=527837

Ruby

Good one, Ken!

I have not yet written anything I am truly proud of, but my favorite among my own would be "Dreams of a waking mind"

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=605193

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=679848
The Military Man:

Yesterday a friend of mine told me what he liked about being in the military and that maybe people who weren't in the military wouldn't understand what it was like. I know I don't understand but I wanted him to know I'd always support him.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=146395

It's called "I Don't Care at All."

I just wrote it... and as you will read I explain how I usually write. I like having all of my poems to flow perfectly and rhyme exactaly. I also have never wrote a poem that didn't follow the ABCB order... until now. I'm proud of it because I was able to finish a poem that didn't reflect on my "RULES" of writing... and I have a 4.5 rating on it. Which I consider pretty good. I like the poem that I put together... but only if all of you other readers like it too... so please be honest if you happen to comment! =]

my poem is called "the phone call"

i wrote it a while ago but it just shows how i feel and how a guy can sweep you off your feet. its about not getting the guy you want and having to wait.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=673579

It's called Daydreamer

I'm proud of it because in a way, it describes me. And the feeling of the poem is very tranquil, unlike my usual style of sad or dark.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=680029

This poem is called "Half A World Away"

This poem contains repetiton, with subtle changes in a few lines per stanza, I wrote it about the love of my life, and the after effects of a very difficult decision. I am proud of this poem because I felt that I did repetiton a tiny shred of justice. I hope you agree.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=681158

hehe.. i guess i am proud of this because it was my first sad poem and i didnt think i would do very well on it and then i think it turned out to be one of my best poems.. :)

Illusion of Strength

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=677863

I'd have to say that I'm proud of this poem because it's the first dark poem (my intrepretation of dark anyways) that I've shared with anyone.

Whether one likes it or not doesn't matter, I'm pleased with the fact that I'm opening up more and willing to share this side of my emotions.

Heather

No Longer Overdue:
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=693928

This poem is about a broken love, but the technique I used is different than most writers

'Twats with baseball caps' It's explicit, so no under 18s can look at it

Another Day in Deadwood

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=616345

About a place, a life, another time.....or is it?

Here's the poem I'm into, at the moment. I've been giving it the fine tooth comb recently, and I must say, I like the way it all came together. I'd say it's an absolutely beautiful poem.

Statue of Perfection!!!
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=384153

A six line sample:

Beauty, to my eyes,
A statuesque sculpture, so divine,
Stately, Shapely, and just simply, beautiful,
You’re Sophisticated, Stunning, and I’m just, spelled, by you.
To your beauty, nothing does compare.
There’s nothing that can match, your loveliness.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=649591

{WHO AM I?}

i think this poem is the best rated that i have so far...this one is a true reflection of me...and i think it's not bad so if you want you could read it...its either that poem or the one below (which is an older one and doesnt reflect my life as much:)

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/explicit/poems.php?id=591563
{HE DID THIS}
-lisa

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=532714

i poured alot of time into this work, and i'm pretty happy w/ the outcome. sorry to everyone for the lost time, i'm gonna start posting again i promise.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=702979

One of my favs, because I tried in as few words as possible, to convey feelings of guilt, regret and lost love. And to also make this "Last Promise" virtually impossible to keep.

I'm proud of this because I've never played with pronunciation in poetry before:

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=720069

Hmm...there are a couple in particular....and I can't make up my mind which one recieves more of my pride.

"Metal: Harmony, A Better World"
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=705967

"Catastrophe and A Comfort Blanket"
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/edit_poem.php?id=711837

"A Masked Costume Party"
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=688162

there are couple of poems that I wrote from my heart which make me feel relieved when I read them

"If My Words.." http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=539602

I love this poem because the idea was kinda new to what I mostly write.. and it was very expressive of what I passed through

"It Took Me...." http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=710178

I love this poem for the person it is dedicated to...

"I Need To Hold You Once More", http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=677600

it was about my first passionate touch with my bf...

Today my cat went out after dark, and lately I have been hearing really bad cat fights otuside around midnight every night. She's bakc now, but when she wasn't I was worried she would get ina fighrt with whatever that animal was, or a fisher. She has ived with us practically all her life, and I am worried that she might die soon, because she is old and overweight. So whenever she is being lazey, I try to wake her up and just see her move. But today, I wrote a poem about how worried I was when she was out and there are fishers and other animasl bigger then her. I was so worried I was cryinfg. Can you rate my poem?

http://www.friendship-poems.com/poems.php?id=723698

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=632532

I am most proud of this because so many people that knew Mick and have read the poem have been moved by it. And only this last week I found that Karma may be at work: his widow/murderer is apparently "unable to cope with life" at the moment. Shame. :-)

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=697967
I am a Mistake

I'm proud of this one because it tells the truth about who we are, and why we are all mistakes.

wats the use of answering this question if people hardly care to read about other people's poems...
anyways, this one is specially meant for those who are genuinely interested in reading other poet's poems... my fav poem is

Just for a bit of change

Its her wedding today

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/explicit/poems.php?id=747193
Poem called ' My Life At Eight'

I think that i im proud of this poem, as although it has not happened to me, i feel that i am putting across a message to help those that similar things are happening to.If you do read it please let me know what you think. Thanks.. Kirsty xox

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=754801

'Your Eyes'

This is the first Rictameter Ive written.
(I hope I did it write)
It took me many rewrites and Im proud of it.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=757370

I really loved how this poem turned out...it's about STD. I just wrote it to express how horrible of consequences one may have after one simple pleasurable night...It was kind of hard for me to write this poem because in no way what-so-ever does it relate to me...lol...

3 poems,i know they're not so very good, compared to what some write here

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=695292

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=696111

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=756612

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=694343

I'm not sure why... I'm just never written anything like it before.

I've*

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=757687

Is the piece im most proud of so far
Hope you like it

Most poetry about life is either positive or negative and not generally the two combined otherwise it then becomes a novel .The Idea behind my poem was to try and point out the pitfalls in life and how easy it is to get stuck in rut ..The other reason I tend to write these type of poems is to get people talking about them and life in general and I thank you for your input

Peace
John

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=726398

because this is one of the reason for I picked up my pen the first time...............................