Song titles

ok here is a contest where you write a poem about the song title given..

Rules:

* one title per person
* one poem per person
*must be newly writen
*must be your own
*have fun

Prizes:
1st- 7 comments and votes
2nd- 5 comments and votes
3rd- 3 votes and comments

Song titles:

Wings of a Butterfly-DONE
How to Safe a Life
Saying Sorry-DONE
Over My Head-DONE
For You I Will-DONE
What's Left Of Me_DONE
Where'd You Go-DONE
Ever The Same-DONE
Right Here_DONE
Be Without You-DONE
One Wish-DONE
Dirty Little Secret-DONE
So Sick-DONE
Whats Left of Me-DONE
***good luck***

Are we writing a poem about the song itself, or are we just using the titles as inspiration to write a poem using the meaning of the song title given?

Sorry if this is a stupid question, but it's better to know what I'm doing for sure, then guess and screw it up...

well....no not about the song...but has to be the tittle..

anyone??

ooh!
Saying Sorry..by hawthornre heigts rite? well..im not reserving it..but i wanna do it if no1 takes it by 2morro after skool but i g2 get off the pc now:(

~*Who Cares?*~

Wings of A Butterfly~ HIM

Spread out to the sky,
Clouds seeping in my eyes,
The sun bleeding on my back,
Now an angel dies,

Every 'friend' i had possessed,
Left me for the better,
I watched agonised by pain,
Ripping every stupid letter,

'Love' is stronger then a friend,
Even though Im scared to say,
The leaves of Autumn are to fall,
Left to die today,

Angel falls from the sky,
And pelts into the ground,
All of this for a friend,
But not one have I found,

I gave up my possessions,
My soul, my heart and care,
The priceless gifts I envy,
Are broken for me to bare,

Petals of forgiveness,
I broke off and spoke out,
But the ones you had to give,
You kept, so i shall doubt,

Life is not plentiful,
With beauty nor of grace,
Every flower embedded,
reminds me of your dying face,

Bright to the sight,
But hides a lethal thorn,
Roots embedded in the ground,
And seeded to be born,

Goodbye my bouquet of deceit,
My lullaby at night,
My one 'true' life and love,
I've given in to the fight.

Thanks.
~Emma

nice job...keep em comin'

come on!

lmao, if no one else posts does that mean i win???
lol
cmon ppl i need some competition im not that hard to beat....
lmao
~Emma

Wait so these are song tittles and we can write any poem that has that tittle in it? Because I am doing the song Whats Left of Me and I am just making sure :D....Is that even a song? lol

yeah it has to do with somewhat of the title like the first one posted.....and yes it is a real song..

Saying Sorry

Saying sorry can sometimes be tough
People don't say sorry quite enough
Its always hard to admit you were wrong
But it has to happen for people to get along

Everyone has and will make mistakes
Its part of a relationship to give and take
If you love the person that you did wrong
Say your sorry and help yourself belong

(I wrote this on may 13th? 1 day before you opened your contest? Is that okay? If not just delete it!! Thanks)

One Wish
by Latasha

Promises of being with you slowly disintegrate,
As your voice becomes just a distant memory,
My prayers were never answered,
As your face never appeared.

Leaving my side with out any warning,
All I wanted was you here,
Never did I want to see the truth,
You were my one wish.

Making you my one wish,
Was my mistake,
You never needed me,
The way I needed you.

My prayers left unanswered,
As tears fall from my face,
Maybe you were my fantasy,
Needing you here was just to much.

You still remain my one wish,
I know I'll never be yours,
But when you look into the sky,
I hope you remember forever you remain my one wish....

**not the best, but its what came to mind**

-----So Sick-----(NeYo?)
By: ~*Who Cares?*~

I'm so sick of life, so sick of pain,
So sick of being forced to walk in the rain.
So sick of heartbreak, so sick of you,
Sick of the dreams my head makes all night through.

I thought you cared, but now I'm so sick,
You said you loved me, but changed your mind quick.
So sick of sadness, so sick of my tears,
Thought you came to save me from my fears.

Thanks for the extra stress you've added on,
Because I'm still so sick and sad that you're gone.
Have a nice life, say hi to your new girlfriend for me,
Soon she'll be so sick too, I know you agree.

~*Who Cares?*~

~What's Left Of Me~

Are you finished making fun of me?
Do you wish to pick your
Teeth with my bones?
Leave me here to rote
Leave me alone and
Gather what's left of me.

Bloody tears role
Down my cheeks
My wrist sliced so
Deep no feeling is
Left in my slender hand.

I wish to lie here by myself
I have nothing left to loose,
I lost this battle
Which I call life
I will not travel
With you tonight.

In the shadows
Is were I lay
Cold and damp
No faint whisper
In my ear.
Hollow my heart
Does feel
Can you see my
Soul in the gateway
Of my eyes?

What's left of me
Is not so great
I am only a child
That feels no pain.
Pick on me as much
As you like
Treat me with no respect
I am hollow inside
I will feel no pain.
Do not worry for
This is what's left of me.

Nothing to special
Nothing to great
Hear me sigh
As I slip away
For I have
Nothing left inside of me.
Hollow in my heart
The gateway is closed,
This is all that is
What's left of me.

any one else...

hmmm can you judge only useing 5 poems lol. Come on people think of this as a challenge or something. :D I will give you a pretty yellow rose if you post a poem ; ) lol.

Saying Sorry~
yeah it is fine....one day before wont hurt!...so yeah your does count!...
ok poeple!...
come on!!!!!!
anyone else?

this will take a while..lol

yea it is....come on...people!

hello??????????/ come on....ok.....here is what i am going to do....
**each of the prizes...add two comments and votes...and first place goes on my favs...**
i hope this will bring more poems in!!!

~Dirty Little Secret~

I'm bothered by the fact,
that you treasure my mom.
I'm the one who does right,
when she does everything wrong.

I don't quite understand,
where it is I stand with you.
Or what it is I have to do,
to make you love me too.

She's done nothing with her life,
and caused you only grief,
yet you enable her and baby her,
like the ground catches a leaf.

What exactly did she do,
that was so special in the past?
What exactly did you feel,
that made your love last?

Just tell me grandpa, please,
why it is you love her so.
I promise if you tell me,
I will never let her know.

~Sean Dohr~

Be without you

Like a baby abandoned
Like a ship lost at sea
I'm dying without you
Why can't you see

Every minute without you
Is like an endless year
Every night i wake crying
Wishing you were near

You sheltered me from harm
Embraced me lasting love
But like the seasons move
Death creeps upon a dove

That dove was me
And you, the death
Ever so slowly
taking my breath

Though I try to forget
I still need you here
All I want right now
Is you to be near

Where'd you go?

Where'd you go?
When I needed you most..
Where'd you go?
When I called your name..
Where'd you go?
When I screamed and cried..
Where'd you go?
When I collected the pieces of my heart..
Where'd you go?
When I picked up that knife..
Where'd you go?
When I was lying dead on the floor..
___________________

hope you like it! :)

only 5 more people!!! come on!!

Right Here

I'm right here waiting,
Waiting for you.
I'm comtemplating,
On what to do.

Do I let you go?
Free as a bird.
Forget 'bout the words,
That were unheard.

Do I hold on tight?
And not let go.
Pray for the day you say,
I love you so.

I'm right here waiting,
For you to set me free.
I'm right here wishing,
That you loved me.

..Hope that was okay. It's pretty short. taleee xx

Ever The Same

If there's one thing I know (ooh)
I can count on you (for sure)
If I have a problem, I can tell you
I can believe you will pull me through

Your love's more than enough to make me feel
The most important person; with you I feel like the world
I want you to know that I can never leave you
Our friendship is what that proves

Yet, when you're not around
I feel more alone than anyone knows
Sure, I smile, but inside my heart is ripping

I wish you were here to tell me I'm okay
But without you, I always seem to complain
You are the one who takes away my pain

Give me your heart, I'll give you mine
A fair trade of bargaining time
I think I'll cry when it's finally goodbye

But for now, I'll wait right here
For nothing's ever the same

I'll wait 365 days
My patience shall stay
And I will be brave
For a year it will ever be the same

only two more! lets go people! :D

two more!!!!! come on...... and graet ones so far.. nice job everyone

2 morrre. C'mon. I wanna know who the winners are =[ Taha.

Over My Head

Words, Music, Laughter
They are all over my head
I cant think about them
Cause now I am dead

Six feet under
With a coffin and bones
Theres nothing left of me
Im down here all alone

Over my head
Is where the world is
All the careers
And people in show biz

It's all come to an end
And I am now in peace
I'll see you in the second world
But until then do what you please

[c] KurMiT
it isnt very good but now you only got one more poem to go someone hurry up and post!!!!

yaya 1 more

yayyy! someone just write a poem pleasse? :P

no doubt.... hurry up! lol - now im impatient-

urg.. lol, why dont you just judge it? :P

do we absolutely need 1 more..ill make another poem if i have 2...lol

one more people....come on i want to judge!!!!...just one more that is all i ask.... and nice poems so far.... all are doing well!

ITS OVER!!! let it go and judge I cant take it anymore!!!!! *screams* And you like candy right? lol

How to save a life~~

1)Learn CPR
2)Be a trained docter
3)Want to save the life
4)Be thier protector
5)You could be a friend
6)Give encouragement in bad times
7)I'm done with this poem
8)I hate all these rhymes

HAPPY? i know this wont win the butt of a flyin squirrel but i know yall wanted a poem to do the judging, so I made one in about 3 minutes, LOL