^^Titled Contest^^

!Titles!

~Existence
~Once upon A time COMPLETED
~Dying for a rose COMPLETED (2)
~Internal Bleeding
~No more my friend
~Star gazer
~Attack of the clones
~Tattoo COMPLETED
~Bridge
~Rain~COMPLETED
~Needles COMPLETED

Rules
Do wat u want when you want, i dont care, with one poem.

Prizes
1 spot in my favs, 4 comments 4 votes
2 maybe a spot in my favs, 3 comments and votes
3 2 comments and 2 votes
4 1 comment and 1 vote.

~Emma

-Rain-

Drip-Drop, Drip-Drop,
The rain goes
As it tumbles down
It glistens gaily from the grass
And glows on the petals of flowers
Drip-Drop, Drip-Drop,
The rain swooshes silently
As it slides over shiny leaves
Drip-Drop, Drip-Drop,
The rain runs down
The rugged hills,
And rough rocks
Drip-Drop, Drip-Drop,
The rain fades away,
And leaves the watery magic
Behind
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hehe.. i wrote this a while ago, but you said it didn hav to be a new poem :P hope you lik it!
jessy xox

Very clear. nice job

Needles

Feelling a flutter of wings
On my shaking hands of pain
Give me it again
I want some more of that pleasure again

Thats the shit i live for
I want my head to be free
Free to be all day
Free to think what im good for
Nothing
(and happy this way)

Shake me out of it
Ive lost some more soul i think
Sunk into the ground
Ive lost every little bit

Thats the shit i live for
I want my head to be free
Free to be all day
Free to think what im good for
Nothing
(and happy this way)

=)

Dying For A Rose

She looks in the mirror
Clutching her cold knife
Tears falling uncontrollably
She’s ready to take her life

Never before has she been loved
The emotion had never been shown
Until one day he said it
He told her over the phone

He couldn’t live without her
She had to be his
He was longing for her touch
He wanted to taste her kiss

The promise was made
His love would never die
He promised to be around forever
He promised never to make her cry

She’s crying now
His promise was shattered
Her heart broken
Her emotions are battered

He said he’d come for her
When she would not know
He promised a gift of love
The gift of a red rose

He never came
He had found someone new
She was no longer his true love
He didn’t give a hint, not a clue

The day he crossed her
The day her future became her past
Would be the beginning of the end
This day would be her last

Blood spills to the floor
Her body now froze
An innocent life was taken
All because of a red rose

Tattoo

One day a cop at a murder scene
Uncovered a tattoo from skin so clean
One that's plain, with no other markings
Bearing a story true

The beautiful woman had died
Supposedly from a sharp, steel knife
Bleeding to death with blood stains on the floor
No one heard a scream, the puddles mixing with the rain

Her ice-cold, milk-white skin bruised and battered
Her faded jeans and hooded top tattered
Her dark hair and eyes were drawn by death
Darker than permanent marker

Eyes open silently, witnessing a twisted dream
Her mouth crying out in a frightened scream
But no one heard her, for she didn't matter

The tattoo was uncovered on her upper back
It ran so long that it reached her hips
It whispered reminisced words from silent lips

"One day I'll lie here, dying
In the same place I was crying
As a child, long ago

Mother dear, where have you gone?
Father, where are you going?
And I was left alone in the snow

I had no brothers, no sisters, no father, no mother
They all let me go
I played with a little boy who did not let me stay alone

We grew up together under the same roof
Went to the same school, were best friends
And as our lives stretched longer, I knew a life would end

One day we were running across the street
And fell asleep under a willow tree
When I woke up, he had faded
Into a huddled figure, dead on the street

Each day I serve the same fate
Dead just as him
Maybe alive in some way
But without him I die inside of me"

A beautiful picture was tattooed on her shoulder
Of a woman and man
Who aged as they turned older
And faded into the river sand

The policeman wiped his eyes
And pulled off his hat
Held it in front of him
And paid his respects for his beloved

For on the tattoo was him
And the woman was her
There they were, at the lake
By a willow tree

He turned around and faded into the sand
And the lovers went far away, hand in hand

Just wondering, can we write a poem even if the title has already been choosen? I kinda wanted to do Rain or Dying for a rose.

hey! im sorry im having a huge brain block right now and maybe ill come back later and try to wright again but i have to say i just LOVE the poem "Once Upon A Time..By: Brianna."
i know my opinion doesnt matter i jsut had to say that breanna you did an awesoem job on that poem! i just loved it! 5/5
xoOx molly

yeah wateva you wanna do.....
dont mind
keep them coming theyre really good
~Emma

Dying for a rose

You gave me pink rose and said: I like you.

You gave me a red rose and said: I love you.

You gave me a yellow rose and said: It's over.

You gave me a black rose and said: I hate you.

You put a white rose on my grave and said: Im sorry

i get it,
pink simbolising a crush,
Red for love
yellow for maybe a bit of sorrow and pity
then the black for hate.
and the white because you died because of him..
very nice.
thanks for entering
~Emma

Well a Yellow rose is the simble of friendship so that makes sense

WOW! ^^^ i lovvveee that poemm! awww.. itz soo sweet! :D awww.. hehe.. good job wings of an angel and everyone else! love the poems!
jessy xox

thank you, I'm glad you like my poem..

urgg! i want you to judgee :P pleasse judgee?
jessy xox

come on people... please enter!

come on you guyss! do thessee!

~Existence
~Bridge
~Internal Bleeding
~No more my friend
~Star gazer
~Attack of the clones

pleassee? hehe.. wanna see who winss! :P
jessy xox

~Existence~

When put on this earth,
we were given one goal,
to perfect life on our own,
to look deep in our souls.

To surpass all challenges,
in life's long, tiring trip.
To believe in our journey,
and minimize the slips.

A common misconception,
that most humans believe,
is that we live for ourselves,
not to give, but receive.

A disaster of character,
that we are all subject to,
hopefully you are unique,
one, in a country of few.

Before we leave earth,
many disasters will strike,
it's the way we react,
that will save future lives.

And when darkness falls,
do you find the light?
Or sit in the back row,
and keep out of sight?

Do you follow the path,
that you've always known?
Or be risky and daring,
and go ways of your own?

It's the character flaws,
and the wasted breath,
that stop us from acting,
and will lead us to death.

~Sean Dohr~

Only four more! :P

Star Gazer
by:poonam

she looks to the skies
on every dark night
counting the stars
wishing she was there

she looks to the skies
to catch the falling stars
to hold close, so dear
to love them as her own

she looks to the skies
to feel the comfort provided
by the endless constellations
with stories from the ancients

she looks to the skies
to somewhere she might go
to memorize something
that humans have yet to taint

... :) way to go everyone! Internal bleeding, no more my friend, and bridge are left!

three more!!! We have to do this quick, I'm craving for who wins!

No longer my friend/Never letting go...
by Latasha

Breaking all the rules,
Friends tell the end,
I thought we'd be,
To many jokes,
So many good times,
I thought we were unbreakable,
Encountering so much,
Dependent on one another,
Nothing seemed to matter...

As long as we were laughing,
I never saw any of this coming,
Everything happened so quickly,
Maybe we took each other for granted
As lies were being told,
And rumors were spread,
Quickly our friendship came to a halt,
Ending everything I thought we had,
I never knew forever could end so fast...

Unable to grasp the fact we are no longer friends,
My mind often races back to old memories,
I will never forget how much you meant to me,
Your still my sister by heart,
No matter where life takes us,
Or how far we drift apart,
You will always be held dear to my heart,
I'm just not ready to give you up,
I will always love you more then any of my friends...

Please always remember I'm still here,
Even though no words are spoken between us,
I'm still remaining a faithful friend,
Never able to turn my back,
No matter how many tears I shed,
Forever a friend of mine you shall be,
I don't mind if you don't feel the same,
I love you to much to let you go,
But until the day you need me, I'll let you be free...

so wait can we use a title already done?

noo.. just thought id tell ya so u could get on wit your poem :)

ok internal bleeding

She sits in a corner, her wrists bleed in gallons,
The blood on her wrists, it sparkles, and glistens.
She cries herself to sleep because of you,
Pretending your so cool, by telling here you're through.
Well, it's not your relationship that's through its her, before you know it she'll be gone,
She'll only be a memory, a memory that won't stay very long.
A memory that will be just another person,
Who DIED of her depression.
She slits her wrists deeper, and pops in a pill,
There will be no more time to just sit back and chill.
She begins to gasp for air, but then gives up,
Because she is sick of lies, fakers, and gossip.
She writes a letter quickly, in her own blood,
And she screams out in anger her life is a dud!
She turns pale, and thanks god she's finally leaving,
She has died of depression, and from her bleeding.

~*Who Cares?*~
I know this poem sucks, i wrote it a long time ago, but um i just did it so that now there r only 2 more!:)

grrr.
Im sick of waiting.
lol
ok i shall have the prizes and winners asap.
so keep your eyes peeled.
OFFICIALLY CLOSED!
thanks to the entrants.
love
~Emma

yayyy! :D

same to you brianna! you did a great job! :D cant waiit!

CONGRATULATIONS TO EVERYONE!
YOU ALL DID EXCEPTIONALLY WELL!!!!
IT WAS SUCH A TOUGH DECISION TO MAKE AND FOR THOSE WHO DIDNT WIN YOU ARE GREAT POETS.
KUDOS TO YOU!
HERE WE GO DROM ROLL PLEASE...
1ST GOES TO......SEAN DOHR
A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE
2ND JUST RAIN
3RD REIKO
4TH BRIANNA

BUDDA BING BUDDA BOOM
congratulations hop you had fun
and youre prizes shall be recieved asap.
loving it
~Emma
ps remember....SMILE!!!!!!

Good job everyone! your poems were all great! :)

Wooo. I wasn't in the contest. But congradulations to the winners anyway! They were great poems =D

I'm Sooo Exited!!! THANKS for the pick! Great contest and poems everyone!

Still Waiting For Your Comments!!!

yay congrats every1 u all were gr8!

thank you :)