Broken Frienship - contest

I'm making this contest... because I'm still having problems coping with the lose of one of my friends and its been a few months.. anyways..

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1)Must Be Your Own Work
2)Must Be Made In The Month Of May

-The contest will end after 10 poems are entered...

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1) 1st place 6 votes and 6 comments
2) 2nd place 4 votes and 4 comments
3) 3rd place 1 votes and 1 comment

Could it be about a mother who misses her son, who she lost in war?

sorry I want poems just regarding broken friendships sorry

I thought we were best friends, but now look at us,
I have no one to talk to, or to sit with on the bus.
You said no matter what happened, you'd always be there,
You said you loved me, but you really didn't care.

You said you'd never hurt me, and you'd tell me everything,
We even got the "friends forever" friendship rings.
But now it's too late, you went and crossed the line,
Don't care what you do with your ring, but I threw away mine.

Thanks for always being there, until I needed you most,
Now when you see me walking around, I'll only see your ghost.
I hope someday you miss me, when your alone and crying,
But I won't care, because you left me when I talked of dying.

You told the whole school, I was a cutter,
You kicked me when I was down, and put me to the gutter.
Thanks for being, a best friend to me,
I hope you realize, without me, your lonely.

Hope this counts.
~*Who Cares?*~

good job

keep them coming

* I wrote this poem for a friend of mine. Not my situation, but his. Its like there is a girl who was his best friend and then all of a sudden stopped talking one day. No reason or explanation. She bangs all phonecalls, cuts cell phone calls, and has blocked him online. Isnt it a crazy world... *

AT LEAST SAY GOODBYE
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For just a moment of the day
Please put all that hatred away
Pretend as if we were in the past
When we had a kinship meant to last

I cannot find the heart I once knew
Nor the old friend who had stayed true
Through thick and thin, protected me
From the pain of this world`s misery

There are wrongs that I have done
Teased and hurt so that I could have fun
And I`m not even asking you to forgive
But your utter silence has kept me captive

Just tell me where I`ve gone wrong
Sing me an end to this unfinished song
I may have bruised it all beyond repair
So just stab hard and make the last tear

The `you` inside me dies painfully slow
Tell me my mistake, please let me know
I`ll apologize until you scream we`re through
Then if I must, I`ll try to let go of you

But if, for some reason, you do not grip
This final wish of our dying friendship
I`ll let it die, with agony a few know
Who have lived to see their best friends go

These are words from the innermost part
Of the little that is left of my dying heart
If things do not change and stay as they are
I`ll suffer with memories refusing to go far

I`ve committed the crime of the century
I don`t know what it is, but still I agree
I really wish that we can be friends again
I don`t show it often, but I too feel pain

If you still don`t wish to reveal my crime
Then let me walk into the mists of time
I`ll travel far away and we won`t ever meet
But end it for me, make solitude sweet

Over again I`m saying the same damn thing
I haven`t really slept and my head is spinning
You mean so much, please don`t be mad
You were the best damn friend I ever had.

-----------------------
Dhaval

my poem is caleed no longer and its about my friends that i lost:

The days have now gone sad and turned dark blue
The sky has opened up
The Bolt lighting has gone through my heart
A whisper of your name
A cold feeling inside]
You stole my happiness took it away
You saw me cry and walked on by
I saw that you were there but not for me
You gave me that look that made me die
You talk about me you make fun of me
Deep, deep down I saw that you were gone
I need a friend not an enemy
We were once as one but now I see
My friend is my enemy
Time goes on
Time stands still
My heart is shattered for my friend
No longer do we laugh
No longer do we cry
No longer are we friends
Life is better off this way
Maybe for you but not for me
Maybe if you saw the hurt inside of me
You will be my friend once again
But no you leave me on my own

So angry, So sad..

You make me so angry
All you care about is yourself
Cant you just once
Think about me

All I ever do
Is be there for you
Being the best friend
I can be

And what do you do
You rub it back in my face
You make me want to scream
But at the same time
Cry with all my mite

For just once in your life
Will you think about someone?
Other than yourself

And actually be a friend
Actually care for another
Actually try..

That is all I am asking
Just a sympathetic word
Now and again
A grateful smile
Or a loving look

Because that is what friends are for
They are there
For times like this
When you need
A shoulder to cry on
Or a person to laugh with

They are not there
For you to use
At your convenience
Then leave discarded
In a bin

You make me so angry
All you care about is yourself
Cant you just once
Think about me..
_______________

hehe.. i recently broke up wit a friend too.. :) keep your chin up!
jessy xox

~ No Longer There When You Cry ~

sleep overs and silly chats
experiments on each others hair
then a boy comes along
our friendship thrown in the air

like torn pieces of paper
that the winds sweeps away
our friendship bonded no longer
two hearts gone astray

the friendship necklace you gave me
now the gold stings my neck
since you replaced me with him
our friendships a wreck

how could he mean more to you
I am always the one to be there
when you cry broken hearted
that he just doesn't care

then you discard me unneeded
with the wink of his eye
uncaring to my feelings
where are you when I cry

our friendship a past memory
many attempts to fix it , I did try
finally moving on with my life
no longer there when you cry

This poem is based on a friendship that was broken many, many years ago .
A person I once called " my best friend " . I hope she has since found the meaning to true friendship .

your poem was made in the 4th month, not the 5th

sorry the poems for my contest muar be written this month

good job

good job

I'm sorry this poem wasnt wrote in may

Therefore the poems by
-Who Cares
-Lucy
And
-Jessy

Are the only poems legiable
-Sorry

still needing 7 more poems

author: Luanne
date: 2006.05.19
09:04

I wrote this today . 2006/ May / 19th

Time entered = 09:04

And how would you possibly know if I wrote it in the 4th month because it hasn't even been entered into my poems yet !!!!

sorry my mistake

i apologize... i never found it so i assumed it was old

there fore i guess i only need 6 more poems

Wow your fast with the replies.......lol

No problem Hun , I understand how you see if they were written before by checking their profile.....Very smart idea I must say....

I will go enter mine in my profile now....

it just because im on the site right now lol, and thanks ya i want to make sure no one doesnt enter one that doesnt go by my list of rules

A very responsible thing to do . That's what will make this a great contest .
Fair and by the rules.....
Great job !

tralalala i wanna kno hoo wins! hurry up ppl

i like to be fair lol =) its always the best way to go

i like to be fair lol =) its always the best way to go

Living Nightmare
by Tara-Kay

I feel I'm totally lost in this living nightmare,
I am scared, only because you're not there.
I know that I can do this without you,
But I'm really not sure that I want to.

I just want you to comfort me again,
I know I need you to ease the dreadful pain.
I think of you every second of the day,
And now I am sure that its what I need to say.

You didn't keep secrets from me not ever,
I thought I'd promise the same to you forever.
But there is something I'm not telling,
I feel as if my heart is really swelling.

If I keep it inside any longer, I might burst,
If there's anything you want to say, say it first.
But I just need you put you arm round me tonight,
Hold me close, make it alright.

I'm lost in this living nightmare,
Please just tell me that you care.
I miss you, I need you here,
Please keep me close and near.

© Tara-Kay Randall 16th May 2006

these poems both make the cuts
they followed my rules =)

only 4 more poems

Wait for meee!!! I'm still looking to post one...

: ) : ) : )

you better hurry lol, i only need 4 more entres

ahh 4 more come on ppl!

In Love With A Ghost ©

I have no fathom of what makes you tick inside
You say one thing that actually means another
I am the one who is supposed to read your mind
Instead I am the one running for cover

One day it is how I make you swoon
The next minute you change your mind
Leave me alone but stay in this room
It seems I am always one step behind

I gave you my heart for all to see
The great irony of cupid`s curse
You took my love and made a fool of me
But I will survive honey, you were not the first

All it will take is just a little time
Time..ah yes I remember it well
I will take some words, make them rhyme
And scurry along into a tighter shell

It took a proverbial house to fall on my head
To find now what I needed the most
Admit to myself with terrible dread
That I fell in love with a ghost.

your poem is approved...

only 3 more poems

come on people i only need 3 more

Question...

What about missing him like lost boyfriend?

why dont you just end this? just a suggestion :)

ill give it a few more days...

hehe.. ok :)

oooh the agony..so much time..
~*Who Cares?~*

Why Does It..??
by Stephanie

Why Couldn't You Tell Me?
Why Couldn't You Talk?
Why Couldn't You Listen?
Why Did You Do That?
Why Did You Have Him?
Why Did You Kiss Him?
You Knew He Was Mine?
You Knew I Loved Him?
You Knew He Loved Me?
You Broke Our Friendship
I Didn't
You Did

yay! one more! :D

It doesn't have to be this way.

Every time get lost in my thoughts
And my own reality seems so far away
Then everything I ever felt comes back
And it’s like reliving each day

I can still see your crystal green eyes.
They’re as cold as ice just waiting to crack
I still get lost in them every time.
Just like a memory I can’t get back.

You were always rough around the edges.
But you had always loved me for me,
Made me feel like I was something special.
You opened my eyes so I could see.

But behind your tough exterior,
hid your true feelings and colours,
Behind your eyes lied your fears.
But you could'nt tell the others.

You were never truly happy.
And I always questioned why.
Now I finally understand.
The reason you had to lie.

How could I be so blind in the mist of my life?
That I couldn’t see that you were in pain.
You were slowly fading away.
And you had nothing left to gain.

But you had the chance to escape your life.
And find a place where you could smile
Find a home where you could belong
And be happy for a while.

I knew this was what you needed
You had wanted to live
You needed a brand new start
Something I couldn’t give

I can’t remember the last time we talked.
And over time I’ll be hearing less of you.
Soon I won’t be able to hear you at all.
And there’s nothing I can do.

If I could scream out your name,
You would still be lost in my heart.
I would only find a painful echo.
That symbolizes we are apart

I couldn’t make you stay
And I can’t make you talk.
It was your choice to stay or leave
And you had chose to walk

And so this seals my letter,
I hope you’ll read it one day.
I want you to know that...
It doesn’t have to be this way.

--emotionless.19*

lol the long wait is OVER :P!

YAY JUDGE JUDGE JUDGE!!:) lol sry very happy

i'll judge as soon as i have a chance please be patient with me