~*Love Poems*~

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    can it b like...this girl loved this guy but then he died...?

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    well i wrote this like an hr ago...

    1) Good Bye Darling
    She watches as they slowly, lower the casket,
    Wishing she had never told him to take that shortcut.
    If it wasn't for her yelling, he'd still be alive,
    As she goes back into her memory archive.

    Back in high school, when they first met,
    He asked her out, because it was a bet.
    Then he realized, money didn't matter,
    He didn't care who knew, for he loved her.

    They were only freshman, yet madly in love,
    They had maturity far up and above-
    the rest. Then at 18, he popped the question,
    "Will you marry me", and "yes" was her reaction.

    Now she cries, after 5 years of marriage,
    She wishes more than anything to give him one last message.
    That's she sorry, and she loves him more than anything,
    She will miss him, and don't worry, he'll always mean something.

    The priest then states, "He died in a car,
    As he, and his wife, drove to the local bar.
    She said, take a shortcut, because it's getting late,
    Because tonight was special, since their child, their first date.

    A drunk from the bar, must've not seen them,
    Because he hit the car, and the car went in flames in mayhem.
    Luckily for us, the wife got away,
    As we can see, he didn't, that's why were here today."

    He says a little pray now, as all throw in roses,
    As in his coffin, he eternally snoozes.
    All the guest go home, except for his wife,
    She says goodbye, he was the love of her life.

    "Goodbye, my darling Husband, I've known you so long,
    I'm sorry that this happened, I was so wrong.
    I'll really miss you, I'll never forget about you,
    Goodbye honey, I know you love me too."

    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    2) That Moonlit Walk

    Quiet streets, emptying out all emotion
    The hollow buildings swaying far into the distance
    Trees lining up the sidelines
    Bringing me back to what felt like a dream

    My hair let loose, my mouth in a smile
    I could just feel your eyes
    Piercing me in a soothing array
    The park played its melody, our thoughts growing astray

    I could see you with your hands in your pockets
    Your unique pendant, never taken off
    For one second I could almost see you laugh
    But you looked away

    I remember how our hands touched, fingers laced
    Our sweet hugs, never leaving right away
    Our kisses, ones that always felt the first
    Just knowing we were closeby was enough

    I remember the days like those
    When we'd stay up with the radio
    Sing and play the guitar
    Fool around, watch the clouds roll by

    But that night it felt different
    I could remember the words you said
    "Do you know how much I love you?"
    That question hit me in the head

    I gave you a light punch, smiled and turned around
    "As much as I do," I said, staring at the ground
    You tipped my chin and looked me in the eye,
    "I love you so much, if you left me I would die"

    I gave you a sweet kiss and my thoughts would reminisce
    "If you died then I would cry"
    That moonlit walk, we made our promises
    And I could see the midnight sky

    "I love you and I always will"
    Are the words that I remember still
    We are going different ways
    But those words still make me feel alright

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    #3 Waiting..

    My love for you
    Will never fade
    It lingers around
    My broken heart
    Waiting for you
    To come back..

    My memories
    Float and twirl
    Around my
    Heartbroken mind
    Waiting..

    I want to once again
    Feel your delicate lips on mine
    Listen to your soft voice
    Stroke your shiny hair
    And be with you..

    I miss you..
    There is nothing else
    I can say..

    Every night in my dreams
    I dream of you..
    And when I eventually wake
    And realize it was all a dream
    Just a dream that will
    Never come true..

    I cry and cry..
    Cry until all my sadness
    Seems to evaporate
    Into thin air..
    And then I continue
    To wait for you..
    Because I love you
    And I will always
    Be waiting..
    _____________________

    hehe.. hope you like it! :)
    jessy xox

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    4. Fly away

    I know we have our differences,
    and we do not always agree.
    I know I said I loved you,
    but you have to set me free.

    Free me from this pain,
    Save me from these tears.
    Save me from my darknessed soul,
    Save me from my fears.

    I said I love you, and I do,
    but this is not our fate,
    I won't be here in this world,
    filled with pain and hate.

    Free me from this cage of horror,
    Even thought you want me here,
    Let me past these dark, heavy clouds,
    let me see the sky so clear.

    Let me out of this awful pain,
    Let me leave today,
    Let me say goodbye to you,
    Let me fly away.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    only four?! common ppl!

  • Timothy r
    18 years ago

    5) Dance With Me ©

    Take my hand and follow me to my heart
    Let the music wash over your mind
    Stay real close and listen to the sounds
    Let all of your troubles fall far behind

    I can take you to a far away place
    One that you dreamt of as a little girl
    Just hold on a little tighter
    It is just you and me in the world

    They are playing your favorite song
    As you flawlessly glide across the floor
    You take me with you in your flight
    An experience I have not felt before

    You have never felt so good in my arms
    It seems like we are floating on thin air
    You are so beautiful in the light
    I love the way it glistens off of your hair

    You ask me with a tear in your eye
    As the music fades to an end
    Dance with me one more time
    Just until I can catch my breath again.

  • Latasha
    18 years ago

    8) One Wish
    by Latasha

    Promises of being with you slowly disintegrate,
    As your voice becomes just a distant memory,
    My prayers were never answered,
    As your face never appeared.

    Leaving my side with out any warning,
    All I wanted was you here,
    Never did I want to see the truth,
    You were my one wish.

    Making you my one wish,
    Was my mistake,
    You never needed me,
    The way I needed you.

    My prayers left unanswered,
    As tears fall from my face,
    Maybe you were my fantasy,
    Needing you here was just to much.

    You still remain my one wish,
    I know I'll never be yours,
    But when you look into the sky,
    I hope you remember forever you remain my one wish....

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    7 more..ahhh

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    come on people! :) you can do it! lol..

  • Fallen~Tears
    18 years ago

    So i really wanna enter but it was written like 4 days before this would you still accept it?

  • Fallen~Tears
    18 years ago

    (9) Duct tape Heart

    He didnt give a damn about her
    She only wanted to make his dreams come true
    She did everything she could for him
    and the only thing she wanted was to hear the words " I love you"

    He'd come home drunk at 4 a.m.
    purfume on his chest
    Just the fact that he came home
    all she felt was truely blessed

    Those were the nights
    She tried to hide her tears away
    for today wasn't that bad
    and tomorrow would bring a brand new day

    He could hear her silent crys
    yet he'd never stop
    she was just another girl
    that he had got knocked up

    as she sits holding her head
    as the tears fall like rain
    She just sat there praying to
    god to take away her pain

    "Dear God, please let him love me
    Please let him treat me good
    Please let me be the one
    he hold in his arms if you only could

    Please let him need me
    Please let him never part
    and Dear god, most of all
    please fix my duct tape heart?"

  • Steph Faragxx*
    18 years ago

    12. I Know You Should Know

    I Know I Love You
    I Know I Have Feelings For You,
    I Know It Could Work,
    I Know I Want You,
    I Know I'm Yours,
    I Know My Feelings,
    I Know I'm Too Weak To Ask,
    I Know That I Would Say Yes,
    I Know That You Feel The Same,
    I Know That Your Weak Too,

    Maybe You Should Know This

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    only three more! btw, excellent poems everyone! :)

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    Fighting for You (13)

    I told you how much I loved you
    I warned you it was a lot
    You carried all of my burdens
    Listened to all of my thoughts

    We broke up and I came back
    I still don't think that we are through
    I always see you laugh
    I think I still love you

    I see you hanging out with other girls
    I can't help but wonder if you "play"
    I was your angel, you were my world
    What happened to that day?

    We planned it out to always be together
    Never separated, in love forever
    What happened to that moment?
    Did it really go away?

    Girls pick on me, they say I'm not good enough
    I don't care, I'll still stay tough
    I don't care what it takes, I'll live and breathe for you
    If I can do that, I'll surely fight for you

    If you ever read this, I want you to know
    I'll always love you, I'll put up with your shows
    I keep this secret to me and only me
    But I'll fight for you, because now I can see

    No matter what, we're yin and yang
    Half and half, two in a gang
    You will never leave my heart
    My first love from the very start

    I'll fight for you, because no matter what you do
    I can't help but think I will forever love you
    Whatever happens, when you go my way
    I can tell my feelings have never changed

    I'll fight for you, come what may.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    dos mas, YAY!!!

  • FlirtingWithDeath
    18 years ago

    Ok this is not my best poetry but I wanted to do this contest.

    ~I will not wish upon the stars~

    I will not wish
    Upon the stars
    You broke my heart
    When I asked for your help.
    The moon stared
    Down and
    Laughed at me
    When I poured my soul
    Into the night.

    My first real heart ach
    It hurts so bad
    I feel like dying
    For what I have lost.

    Twinkle twinkle
    To heck with you stars
    I asked for one thing
    And you tore me apart

    A loving man I did not get
    I lost him before
    I told him loving things.

    I will not let
    A man stop me from
    My dreams
    But it hurts so bad
    To know what
    We could have had

    I will never wish
    Upon the stars
    You broke my heart
    When I asked for your help.
    My fairy tail now ends
    I will shut the books
    And say to heck with
    The shining stars
    And never ever wish
    Upon you again.

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    omg, one more... aaah!

  • FlirtingWithDeath
    18 years ago

    I think we should stop now lol Come on Brianna let us know who wins :D

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    yeah, I agree

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    thanks:)

  • FlirtingWithDeath
    18 years ago

    Yay I knew you couldn’t resist my charm :D. And I agree I am not patient and neither is Wings hehehehehehe

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    you've got that right:P lol

  • FlirtingWithDeath
    18 years ago

    YAY now i need to see what my prize is :D Thank you babes *hugs* I knew that life size chocolate statue I made of you would pay off lol. GREAT JOB everyone I loved all of the poems!!!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    *gasp* i won 1st?!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    ty:)