New Word Contest ( everyone's a winner )

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Hiya!
This is the first contest I have ever done :D
So Im pretty excited to see if anyone responds!!
Ok, I got this idea off someone else, so I wont take too much credit... *tee hee*

Ok, below are some words....You have to put every word in the poem and Choose a title for it ( also below ) if you like :)

*RULES*
*The poem can be about anything..even blood and guts! lol
*Has to be your own work ( as expected )
*Has to contain ALL the words listed below but you dont have to chose one of the titles, but if you do it's an extra 2 comments :)
*Have fun! I'll give everyone at least 2 comments just for there effort!

~ WORDS ~

Secret
Night
Cold
Under
Fear
Behind
Black
Memory
Mist
Silver
Echo

~ TITLES ~

1. Silver Mist
2. Black Night
3. Memories
4. Fear
5.Secret sounds
6. Echo's of the Wolf
7. Silent Screams
8. Always Night
9. Forever Fearing
10. Under pressure

| Have Fun |

Love Jen XX

Under pressure

This dark secret, this dark night,
This thing of cold, this thing without light.
Under all expectations, in anyones mind,
She was supposed to be perfect, supposed to be kind.
Under her skin, inside her head,
This fear of disappointing, every night in her bed.
"Did I do good enough" is behind all her thoughts,
For the grades she has, hard she fought.
"They only care about me being good"
But when she failed, alone she stood.
All alone, her mind went black,
In her memory, she know she had to go back.
He will hit me, my face and his fist,
Outside there will be a mysterious mist.
The mist is silver, the mist is her,
Her guardian angel, the parent she prefer.
The echo of her angel, the echo of her mother,
Which her dad tried to replace fast by another.
Her mother is angry, yet for her daughter she is nice,
But he abused her so bad, he have to pay the prize.
"Its over, its over" her mother tries to shout,
She grabbers her husband, and throws him out.
"Leave now, and never come back!
How dare you take her, how dare you attack?
I called the police, gave them proof,
that you didn't give her a home, you gave her a roof.
You never cared, and you always yell,
Goodbye so called daddy, go to hell!"

-Black Night-

On a cold black night
She stands alone on the bridge
The place they first met
The place they first kissed
The place they said good-bye..

It remains in her memories
Forever more,
Lingering here and there
Flowing about her body
Eternally reminding her of him..

The mist surrounded them
Like a silvery shawl
He whispered that he had to tell her
A secret
Surprised but excited,
She exclaimed
Ooh.. A secret?

And then she saw it
The cold hard fear..
Sitting there behind his
Electric blue eyes..

He could sense her alarm
And decided to tell her this
Precious, terrible, information
As carefully as he possibly could..

He looked deep into her eyes
And told her
No matter what,
You know I love you right?
Her eyes started to water
And she nodded her head slowly
What was he going to say..

He brought his mouth
Close to her ear
And kissed it
I love you
He repeated
Then he took a deep breath
And these are the words
That came out of the mouth
That she loved so much..

I want you to find someone else
You deserve better than me
I want you to find someone
That makes you feel special
That makes you laugh
And that you will love
Until the end of time..

What are you talking about?
You do all those things..
Why would I need someone else?
She had cried out, starting to panic..

He looked pained
And sighed a little..

I have cancer
I will not be here
To the end of time
To love and to care
For you..
I only have a few months left..
And then I will be gone..

She gasped..
The tears in her eyes
Started running down her
Cold cheeks
And then she looked up
At him and saw the tears
His tears,
Overflowing from those
Electric blue eyes..

She couldnt hold it in any longer
She let out an anguished sob
And it echoed all around their
Magical palace..

He held her tight
Right under his chin
He kissed her hair
And told her
Everything would be fine
It will all be ok..

She was comforted
By his soft,
Confident words,
But what she
Did not see
Was the sparkle on his cheeks..

He cried silently
Just as scared as she was,
As they embraced
On their once magical bridge
Surrounded by
A silvery shawl
On a cold black night..
___________________________

i really hope you like it! :)

come on people!

Jeah, post!!

Wow awesome poems guys!!
Keep em' coming!!

do the words have to be in order and if not can it be an extra comment if they are????

ok im gunna write one n ill enter it a little later:)

i want to kno the answer 2 ^^^ that question b4 i start writin tho

Im gonna try to post one tommorow!!!

No they dont have to be in order..But sure!! I'll give an extra comment if they are :)

come on you guys! this is really easy and as the title says, everyone is a winner! so get writing! btw, are you goin to do 1st, 2nd, and 3rd places too? or are you just giving everone the same amount on whether they used a title or not?

i'll try to write one and as soon as i do i'll get it to you

Memories
by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

The dark secret of the night
flows cold as ice
deep under my door
slowly fear creeps up my spine
something touches me from behind
i turn to see the black silhouette...
a memory so vivid it was real
now sitting in the mist
with the silver glow of the moonlight
hearing the echo of his voice
ringing in my head
i love you.......

There will be 1st 2nd and 3rd...

1st - A spot in my Fav's, 10 comments, 10 votes, recognition, and i'll continue to vote on all new poems.

2nd - A spot in my fav's, 8 comments, 8 votes.

3rd - 5 comments, 5 votes...

But as I said...Everyone is a winner...if you win it's 10 comments + another 2 for trying and another 2 if you chose a title.
Everyone who enters will be garentied 2 comments :)

Black Night

Darkness controlling, the moon gone completely,
But I have a secret, and in time, I’ll state it sweetly.
The night changes me, as the cold burns my skin,
As the spirits rise from underground, ready to begin.

Fear is in the air, as they’ll come up from behind,
They’ll snatch away your feelings and will leave you blind.
The black hand of the dead, snatching away your memory,
Leaving you in a mist, lost in the night so gloomy.

When out of the darkness, appears the silver moonlight,
Taking away the spirits, and making everything alright.
An echo of a scream, is heard from far away,
But it’s just me, saying everything is now okay.

~*Who Cares?*~

Okay, I wrote the words in order, and I used a title!:)

Ha ha, k

Silent Screams

Silent screams
Inside my heart
Slowly but surely
Tearing me apart
Silent screams
Only shown by my tears
I hold back
But one escapes my grasp
The cold wet droplet streams down my pale white face
My secret is no longer my own
My fear
So clear
Like the memory of you
Every night crying
Your picture under my pillow
In my dreams I see you
Through the mist of the silver fog
An echo calls back to me
I Emerge from behind my veil of tears
But you are gone
And there is nothing
Just black......

Wow, these are gonna be hard...but im loving the challenge of judgement....
Pure talents are shining through guys!

I will Judge soon....
If I can get a few more ppl to add some poems of there's.....Tell people about this contest so that it will fill up quicker :)

Black Night (of) Memories

My secret world opened
On a cold, dark night
Beneath my feet, I was dragged under
In fear I turned around
Behind me I could see horrors beyond suffering
I screamed as it grew pitch black
It felt like a distant memory
Mist clouding my mind
I choked on fresh air, waking up by the silver moon
The only thing I heard was my silent echo...
As I gazed up in wonder at the new world I found.

oo! please judge :P

~SILENT SCREAMS~
by Meggie33
Secrets kept, inside my mind,
Silent echos, heard from behind.

Darkened night, and cold fear,
Silent screams being heard, far and near.

Silver tears, falling liked blackened mist,
Under my chained down heart, and handcuffed wrists.

Silent screams, heard throughout the night,
Dreams now shaddered, and darkened light.

Whispering laughter, and mournful cries,
Lips sewn shut, and honest lies.

Flying nightmares, and white turned black,
Such and imperfect world, yet nothing to lack.

Twisted truths, and untold emotions,
Forbidden words, and waterless oceans.

Silent screams, both quiet and loud,
Silent screams, lower than the ground, yet above the clouds.

**meggie**

come on, please just judge, im waiting and waiting, i want to know the results... : - D

**meggie**

hehe, me too! :D

Silver Mist
By: Kim

A weeping willow looms over the darkened river
bank.
Silver tendrils trailing into the cold black waters of despair.
Secrets echo through the night, whispering behind the edges of memory.
A silver mist arises from the lake of fear
Drifting under the cover of perception.
A haunting melody glides through the still air
Of a truth, frozen in time.

Hmm..ok..I'll give the results on Monday :)

aww.. cant you give them any sooner?? :P

ah, Monday.. that's a whole lot of waiting and unpatience:P lol

Ok..Results are in...
Go to the new post I done called New Word Contest Results....