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Hey, Thanks. i really appriciate it. and i took your suggestions. very helpful! :)

yea im never really any good at writin when i have to use certain words, and i totally 4got 2 put a title so weird. Sorry i didnt read the rules rite...

The orginal poem wasn't fragmented. I just couldn't format it any other way *sigh* But I still like it.

Thank you Sluvy, I changed peacefulness to peace..... I will try to work on the I's & and's.

Thanks Sluvius, very helpful i appreciate the compliments and criticism

Sondos

Congratulations to all the winners.

Congrats Everyone Whom one. :)

Sluvy , you are so right about the 'to and the' ..... Thanks for this great contest and all your time and thought put into each poem to deliver honest helpful critiques .

Awesome poems everyone ! Congrats to the winners !

Congrats to everyone!

Thanks Sluvious for the wonderful competiton and constructive critques. I'll work on that line to make it better.

Congrats everyone :)

Well done everyone who entered

And well done to the winners, brilliant poems

Sluvious, a great contest..

I will change songs to song and think of a title :)