Movie Titles

CONTEST OVER CONTEST OVER CONTEST OVER CONTEST OVER CONTEST OVER!!!!!!!!!!!

This contest is about movie titles i will post 15 titles!!!

Rules:
Must be newly written (unless given permission)
Must be your work (DUH!)
Contest will end at 15 poems
Must use title given
No Profanity
One poem per poet
One poem per title
Be creative

Prizes:
1st Place: spot on favs 7 comments and votes
2nd Place: spot on favs 6 comments and votes
3rd Place: 5 comments and votes
4th Place: 4 comments and votes
Everyone else two comments and votes

Movie Titles:
1)Just Like Heaven-DONE
2)If Only-DONE
3)The Miracle-DONE
4)The Ring-DONE
5)Mean Girls-DONE
6)Secret Window-DONE
7)The Notebook-DONE
8)Red River-DONE
9)Misery-DONE
10)Big
11)Intstinct-RESERVED
12)The Sixth Sense-DONE
13)Love Story
14)Pretty Woman-DONE
15)Death Wish-DONE

Please put the title number next to you poem!! Have Fun!!!

#1 Just like heaven..

I walked into this gorgeous garden
And it took my breath away
I could not tear my eyes
From this scene
It was just
So stunning
So Exquisite
So divine
It was just like heaven..

The colors were just spectacular
Scarlet petals falling from flowers
Olive green leaves glittering in the sun
Golden rays of sunlight making everything sparkle
They brightened the area
Once bare and deserted
And made it bright and friendly..
It was just like heaven..

The little fountains
Contained so much hope
So many dreams
They flowed over and over again
Never stopping,
Never giving up
The little cherubs that stood atop them
Would smile and remain
In a warm pose
Welcoming you to join them..
It was just like heaven..

The tall, thick trees
Stood proud and tall
They were the wise
So many experiences
Were entwined within their trunks
As you sat under
One of those wise old trees
You would absorb that wisdom
And it would always help you
To make the right decision
It was just like heaven..

As you turn around
And walk out those large black gates
You turn to look back
And say goodbye to heaven
Until the next visit
And remember..
It was just like heaven..
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hehe.. hope you like it! :)

Misery

shackles of fear
A bleeding rose
Breaking stem
Pain arose

Little tremors
Of misery
Seep in veins
of anxiety

Breaking wings
Watch them fall
Tattered insane
Let them fall

Half-closed eyes
Drifting away
In mindless games
Led astray

idk how to do this juss testing something out

can i reserver note book? if not then :( if i can then ill write 1 by 2morro after skool, but i g2 get off the pc in 10 min n thats not enuff time...

Yep

Kay, I'm trying to do one for 'The Ring'

[#4] The Ring [Triolet]

Our love for each other is strong,
It doesn't matter about the ring.
Together we'd never go wrong,
Our love for each other is strong.
I have wished for this for too long,
To be your queen, You be my king.
Our love for each other is strong,
It doesn't matter about the ring.

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A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of
only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st,
4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd
and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme
scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines.
Make each line 8 syllables in length.
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Copyright © Natalie, 2006

Secret Window

Behind a dusty bookcase
Covered in cobwebs
Ancient novels of lore

In an abandoned room
Layered in dust
Furniture long since used

Up a creaky staircase
Spiraling around
Steps rotten with mold

Across the desolate room
Ruined from water
Walls stained with grime

In a forgotten house
Crumbling in old age
Secret window remains

7 The Notebook

She kept the notebook, very close to her heart,
Careful not to leave it behind, never having her and it part.
She wanted no one, to know of her problems,
She wanted no one to read her endless sad poems.

She sat in the corner of the gym on the floor,
Writing in her notebook, her emotions just pour.
She was beaten up, and needed to vent her sadness,
She needed to get rid of her tears and stress.

She wrote of her death, and signed the date,
Got a thought in her mind, which she had to debate.
After a minute or two, decided it was time,
So she finished her last sentence and made sure it rhymed.

She went to the bathroom, took out the gun,
Put it to her head and said, “well this was fun”.
She pulled the trigger, and fell to the ground,
People heard the shot, and gathered around.

They picked up the notebook, and read the poem aloud,
As people sniffled and cried among the small crowd.
They felt so bad, for all they had done to this girl,
But they all moved on, as the world continued to whirl.

~*Who Cares?*~

#2 If Only

If only you understood
What I am going through
But the thing is,
You don t have the slightest clue

If only I could tell you
You would comfort me
But thats not an option
This is how its supposed to be

I look happy all the time
And like everything is going right
You wish you were me,
You think I have the perfect life

If only this would stop
Then i would be okay
Someone please help
I cant go another day

My family is being destroyed
And theres not a thing I can do
I feel so helpless
If only I were as strong as you

If only everyone realized
This is a stupid fight
If only I hadnt of lied
Maybe everything would've been alright.

Wow. ^^^ Loved the poem above. Awesome!

Thanks :-) You did a great job on your too!

Thank you =P

~Death Wish~

Blood drips from my veins,
like rain from the sky.
Hits the carpet like a waterfall,
sitting here, waiting to die.

I start bleeding profusely,
after one last slit.
My body starts to shiver,
my brain and heart start to quit.

I can feel the blood dripping,
not just on the floor.
It's running down my arm,
can't feel pain anymore.

My eyes close and re-open,
now I can't see.
My body is breaking down,
there is nothing left of me.

I try to stand, but I can't,
and crash down to the floor.
Now, I start to see things,
I've never seen before.

A bright light and a hand,
that is held out toward me.
I think to myself, is it God,
no way, it couldn't be...

...could it?

~Sean Dohr~

^Hey, this poem is old, but I really think it suits the title best.

Yeah Sean thats fine thanx for letting me know!!

c'mon people! just a few more! :)

Pretty Woman (14)

A beautiful being sits in a chair
Forlorn gaze, uncombed hair
Hidden eyes everyone sees right through
No one cares about her point of view

Red and pink glow around her once-smooth skin
Fragile hands, fingers bent in
A prized image to look upon
No one could suspect anything was wrong

Draped in a long, white robe
Covering her beaten, bruised skin
Dark, bloody marks
Her shamed soul dying within

She stands up, shaking
Softly climbing steps on stairs
The day she died from other's sins
Her innocence lost from staking

No one can hurt her anymore
She's at the top of the stairs
Accepted within heaven's gates
A pretty woman smiles, for eternity in the Lord's care

Alright if nobody else is gonna post then if any one wants to do a second u can!!

Can I reserve Red River =D

[8] Red River.

As I cry this red river,
My whole body will shiver.
So many tears will flow,
And you won't ever know.

What you've done to me,
Is hurting, You see.
Our perfect friendship,
You didn't care to rip.

So many words you said,
Are stuck inside my head.
And so many thoughts I think,
Are allowing me to sink.

I'm falling down now,
But I know somehow.
You are gonna pay,
No matter what you say.

Did you Jessie, forget?
I have friends that won't let.
They will bring you down,
Drag you all over town.

Because of you,
I don't know what to do.
I'm losing myself,
And everything else.

Copyright © Natalie, 2006

`Taleee xx [P.S. I hope this is okay, I seen the title Red River and it kinda matched how I'm feeling at the moment]

Yeah its fine!!

c'mon five more! lets go people!

3)The Miracle

A child to be born,
the parents only teens,
The dad looking forlorn,
The mother looking terrified,
her world has started to lean.

They know how it happened,
but they weren't prepared,
The child would grow,
but how could they take care of it?
All of the family of the parents were scared.

But they didn't give her up,
and it's a miracle they didn't,
they could have just abandoned her,
but something told them no,
This story gets more interesting when you realize who was in it.

My parents were the teenagers,
who, when teens, started their family,
and the child that was born,
turned out pretty good, I'd say.
The child in the story was me.

(C) Minnie30567746

12. The Sixth Sense

The sixth sense
A chilling offense
To a child plagued by fear

In the bathroom
Fingers quake
Guns fire
Blood will smear

Seeing a child
Witness the dead
The horrors of life
The sickening dread

Afraid to go to the bathroom at night
Afraid to come out
Fearing what might
Be under the blankets
That frightening night

It lingers through the plagued child's life
Hiding in the church,
Even in refuge he feels cursed

Beginning to comfort the child will bring
Peace to the dead that linger on the streets
Peace to those men who die innocently
Peace to the weary who can't fall asleep

His mother comforts him with her words
He helps the dead, and in return
Peace to the boy plagued by the dead
Peace to the third eye
The voice in his head
Here come answers to this chilling suspense
Peace to the boy
The boy with the sixth sense

Come on just 3 more!!!

lets go people! only THREE more! :)

I'd like to reserve 'instinct' please

Thanks

Sondos

Come on People!!

Nobody else gonna post then im going to end this contest!!!! Agreed?????

yayy! end it! :)

I will give Sondos about 1 1/2 more days!!!

Well im gonna end it early!!! So contest is OVER!! Judging will be soon...

ooo! i cant wait! :))

yay cant wait either!:D

YAYYYAAYYAAYY!!!!!

Can't wait for results!

anytime soon? lol.. :P

lol, hopefully