New Word Contest Results

  • Jenna Balkin
    18 years ago

    Ok..I'v looked very carefully over all of yur poems and I have decided the winners....

    1st - Jessy - Black Night
    2nd - Who cares - Black Night
    3rd Wings of an Angel - Under Pressure
    AND
    EQUAL 3RD - Meggie33 - Silent Screams...

    Congrats to all those people and well done to everyone else...You all wrote AMAZING poems and it was really hard to judge :)

    PLEASE SCROLL DOWN
    to read how many comments you have earned and general comments from me on your entry...

    Wings of an Angel - UNDER PRESSURE
    Comments - 10 Votes - 5
    2 - Entering
    1 - In order
    2 - Title
    5 - Third place
    5 votes

    A very Dramatic and sad poem. It made me think twice about my life...maybe what I have isnt so bad after all...
    I love the rhymes and how it all just fits together, WELL DONE!

    Jessy - BLACK NIGHT
    Comments - 14 Votes - 10
    2 - Entering
    2 - Title
    10 - 1st Place
    10 Votes

    Being the longest poem entered, I must say...it's the saddest...It starts off so romantic and even made me smile...Then I got goosebumps as it started to get so sad...It such a lovely poem nd I'll always remember it :)

    Silhouette, of something unimaginable - MEMORIES
    Comments - 5
    2 - Entering
    1 - In Order
    2 - Title

    Short but sweet...I like the fact that you can fit all the words in so quickly...shows alot of talent :)
    I love how it starts off scary but ends so dreamy :)

    Who Cares - BLACK NIGHT
    Comments - 13 Votes - 8
    2 - Entering
    1 - In Order
    2 - Title
    8 - 2nd Place
    8 Votes

    Im a huge fan of Good endings and the last sentance of this poem appealed to me :)
    I love your rhyming and words you used...It makes this poem stand out and seem so exotic...

    Lost+Hopes+Crimson - SILENT SCREAMS
    Comments - 4

    2 - Entering
    2- Title

    Wow, I was intreged by some of the words you have used...they fit so well together and make the sentance more exciting...
    I LOVE the words " I emerge from behind my veil of tears..." Gorgeous! Sounds perfessional!

    Just Rain - BLACK NIGHT (of) MEMORIES
    Comments - 5
    2 - Entering
    3 - Title ( Used two titles...very creative )

    Woah! Once again, Im a big fan of good endings and that was an awesome ending...I love this poem as it paints pictures in my mind...Keep it up!!

    Meggie33 - SILENT SCREAMS
    Comments - 9 Votes - 5
    2 - Entering
    2 - Title
    5 - 3rd Place

    An awesome poem :) I love the fact that everything i..but it isnt... The rhymes are amazing and I really enjoyed reading this poem...

    Kim - SILVER MIST
    Comments - 4
    2 - Entering
    2 - Title

    This poem created amazing pictures for me, it has an incredible ending, and it flows beautifully. Well Done!

    I WILL GIVE OUT ALL PROMISED COMMENTS AS SOON AS I CAN! :)
    I"LL START TONIGHT, BUT I PROBS WONT GET THEM ALL DONE....LETS SEE HOW THINGS GO :)

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    awww! thank you so much! :D iv never won 1st place before! thank youu for making such a fun contest! good job everyone else! all your poems were excellent!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    YAY 2nd PLACE!!! WOOHOOO!!!thanx so much:)

  • Jenna Balkin
    18 years ago

    I will give out all owed comments today :)
    Once again well done guys!!

  • silhouette fairy
    18 years ago

    thanks
    and congrats to all

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    imnot rushin u but idk if u mayb 4got aobut me...prob not..i was just saying...no rush..:)
    ~*Who Cares?*~
    Thanks again

  • Jenna Balkin
    18 years ago

    NO WAY!! I'm not fogetting :)
    Im still giving Jessy her comments!!
    I promise I will get them to you :)

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    thank you :)

    yay ;) 5 comments... ok, let's see...

    *is very slow* lol..
    pls comment on :

    Kiss the stars...
    Pain's resolution
    Pop in another pill, take another drink
    Phoenix
    Without Music

    __________

    Thanks ;) it makes me feel good... keeps me motivated when I win things ;)

  • Meggie33
    18 years ago

    thank you thank you!!

    it was really fun to write, and although it wasn't my type of style, it was still fun

    **meggie**

  • Jenna Balkin
    18 years ago

    Ok...I am being heaps slow at giving you your comments...but I cant be on the computer for very long...So I will do some more later in the day :)

    Jen X

  • Jenna Balkin
    18 years ago

    OK< I've done Jessy and Who Cares so far..I will finish the rest of you off later :)

    Jen

  • Jenna Balkin
    18 years ago

    Who hasnt got their comments yet?
    I've lost track of the last person I commented to..

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    hi... u forgot to do comments 4 and 5... "Phoenix" and "Without Music" ... thanks :)

  • silhouette fairy
    18 years ago

    yeah and me no rush but don't forget the rest of us all

  • Kim
    18 years ago

    I haven't gotten any yet Jenna, but its ok, take your time sweetie ^_^

  • Jenna Balkin
    18 years ago

    lol, Im so sorry guys!
    Im trying to remember..
    Ok, I think I know who is left :)

  • Meggie33
    18 years ago

    im left... i just remembered... well at least i think im left, but oh well, writing the poem was worth it so i don't really care if you get around to it or not : -D

    **meggie**