~~~CONTEST~~~

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    ~~~~~~~~~~~CLOSED!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~

    I will put three series of words.
    You have to use one of the series in a poem.
    I will post three titles to each serie, and you will get extra credit if you use it.

    I will end it after 15 poems.

    Rules are:
    One poem per poet and it has to be youre work.
    It must contain all the words, no matter what.
    Everyone choose the serie they like best.
    Have fun!

    Prizes:
    1st: 7 r/r/c and a place among my fav
    2nd: 5r/r/c
    3rd: 3r/r/c

    Word serie number 1: Love, sky, air, grass, summer, vacation and free.
    Titles to the serie: Love is in the air, Hot summer day, or Loving and Free.

    Word serie number 2: Dark, fear, cry, misunderstand, night, peace and trapped.
    Titles to the serie: Dark fear, Misunderstood, and Trapped in the night.

    Word serie number 3: Parents, phone, homework, school, bedroom, boys(or girls), rumor.
    Titles to the serie: Phonebill, Homework sucks, and Rumor has it..

    Good luck

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    #1 Hot summers day

    On that long ago
    Summer vacation
    We lay in the emerald grass
    As the golden sun
    Softly touched our faces

    The delicate air
    Swirled around us
    Bringing with it the
    Exquisite smell of roses

    The sapphire sky looked down
    At the pair of love struck lovers
    Intertwined in the sparkling grass
    With only beautiful smells,
    Warm sunlight,
    And their undying love,
    To cover them..

    As they made gentle love
    The butterflies hovered
    Stunned by the beauty,
    The perfect ness
    Of these two people..

    And after so many years
    Their souls were finally free
    Awakened by each other
    Joined, completed, and intertwined
    On that hot summers day..
    ___________________________

    hehe.. hope you like it.. :)

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Dark Fear

    What lingers in the dark of night
    That shadows seem to cry
    What hunger growls it's protest
    A thirst for one to die

    I misunderstand the value of night
    For it seems no peace can survive
    Every soul within seems to be trapped
    Drifting upon black clouds of life

    This dark fear of the night still haunts
    Every dream that was ever borne
    Wretched around like hunting snakes
    The night is to be harshly scorned

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    Homework sucks

    Homework sucks, don’t we know it just,
    Its not fun like romance or even lust.
    Parent’s always nagging for you to get it done,
    Not being able to chat to mates on the phone.

    School deadlines that always need to be met,
    Never a date with a boy will you get.
    Just sitting bored in your bedroom,
    Wishing you could just get away soon.

    Rumour has it, Homework sucks.

    (I think this poem sucks too)

  • -Ghostship Fidelity-
    18 years ago

    Trapped In The Night
    by Tony

    In the dark this love developed deathlike
    Waves of warmth thrust beyond your eyelids
    That tarnished treasure you had come to fear
    Now it had come to expire in this perturbed place
    Where no one will cast a oeillade at pendulous agitations
    Per contra, I have descried that each night you crave to depart
    Into that dark baleful hole beneath the steps
    Whither you cry as your heart darts in all directions
    To your broody brain, this weltered point is peace
    But I’ve fancied that you have been trapped
    Fettered to a blank wall in my elided closet
    Where I will ne'er let you run free again
    The note you have left me is addicting in many senses
    But I have found that you misunderstand my slant
    So tonight I will bite into your eye-appealing neck
    Sap you of all that exquisite and immaculate blood
    Goodnight love

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    nice poemss! loved them! c'mon everyone! still a buncha titles left! :)

  • Navy SweetHeart
    18 years ago

    #2
    misuderstood

    on this dark night,
    i crouch in a corner ful of fear.
    tears fall down my face as i realise that i am trapped.
    trapped in this dark night where i am misuderstood.

    i cry for peace.
    i cry to be understood.
    i cry in fear that i will never be released from this entrapment.

    tears fall from my eyes as i realise no will understand who i am.
    tears fall from my eyes as i realise no one will ever free me.

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    COME on PEOPLE!!

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    yes, come on! Im wanting to read some poems here!

  • IfIhide11
    18 years ago

    This one is called "Anger"

    Teeth pushed down
    As we start to quake
    Rage overload in the
    back of the brain
    Until we explode and
    someone gets hurt
    When you ease back down
    But yet you still shake
    At the time it felt so right
    but now you know you've
    picked the wrong fight
    As your rage deflates and
    your jaw's relaxed,
    You take one last breath
    and go for the attack

    -ifihide11

  • silhouette fairy
    18 years ago

    Dark fear
    by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

    She sits, lonely in the dark
    not knowing what to do
    with the silver gleaming
    the metal grows heavy in her hand
    i know i shouldn't do this
    dropping the blade to the ground
    she shakes with her sobs
    the night over comes her corner
    the sudden fear creeps in on her
    the sobs settle
    as the peace takes over
    again the next night
    with the blade at hand
    she feels trapped
    cold and misunderstood
    as the blade comes closer
    she sends out a prayer
    please gods save my soul
    don't put me with those
    that misunderstand others
    as she fades away
    she gives out a simple cry
    never give in to your dark fear
    for you shall end up like me

  • Meggie33
    18 years ago

    #3
    *Rumor Has It*

    Parents holler,
    about homework and the phone,
    but rumor has it,
    that you're home alone.

    At school I'm without you,
    when I'm at school you're not there,
    while I'm sitting at my desk without you,
    at your picture I do stare.

    Boys & rumors,
    it's all the same,
    I see your face,
    but whats my name?

    Do you know who I am?
    Do you remember my face?
    Rumor has it,
    that I've been replaced.

    Do you love me?
    Do you care about me at all?
    Rumor has it,
    that you only answer when she calls.

    Do you want to be with me?
    are you going to ditch me for her?
    Rumor has it,
    that you're with her, and you were even with her before.

    Does she mean more?
    Does she make you smile more than me?
    Do you wish to be without myself?
    Rumor has it it's her you want to see.

    Are your feelings the same?
    Or have you changed your mind?
    do you wish to be with her?
    Do you want to leave me behind?

    Rumor has it you guys are close,
    that you guys are one,
    rumor has it you're together,
    and that you guys have lots of fun.

    **meggie**

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    9 down, 6 to go... Great work people, keep it up!

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    will you end it? :P

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    hm.. Ill end it tomorrow, you can still put in entries till then.

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    anyone??

  • Poetess Lana
    18 years ago

    Rumor Has It

    Rumor has it that this boy likes that girl.
    Well, I was on the phone with Jennie
    when she told me that he said that she
    said...

    Rumor has it, that bad things come
    to those who lie, or start the rumor...
    Well, I heard Mrs. Allen says bad things
    come to those who dont do their homework!

    Rumors in the hallways at school,
    in church, at the park, the ice rink.
    Rumors follow everywhere...
    Even into the bedroom...
    Where although it was just a quick
    goodnight kiss, one thing leads to
    another, the next rumor is
    Alicia got pregnant!!!!

    Which the parents of Alicia hear,
    Rumor has it rumors are ugly things...
    and bad things do come to those who lie.

    *Ehh... not sure if i like it, but okay.*

  • LovelyDivine
    18 years ago

    Open Wounds

    No words can explain how I feel,
    I pray my open wounds will heal.
    Never thought I’d hear such words,
    Coming from a lover’s mouth.

    Listening to these painful words,
    My heart begins to hurt.
    Ripping, breaking, falling apart,
    That’s what’s happening to my heart.

    A hole in my heart is now forming,
    The place my love burned for you.
    I feel the pain and heartache coming,
    Coming from my open wounds.

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    are you gonna judgee?

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    yup ill do it today or tomorrow.. need some time to think of who deserves the prize;)

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    YAY!

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    1st: perfect scars

    2nd: Meggie33

    3rd: punkcick

  • LovelyDivine
    18 years ago

    Congradulations to everyone. I'm actually surprised I got anything. 1st time I got anything in one of these contests. Thanks. Congradulations again.