sad dressing poems

ok this contest is for sad and depressing poems....
rules are the have to be your own... (duh)
have fun be creatie... and it ends june 19 all other poems will not be counted...
1 place... 6 comments and votes plus added to favs list
2place ... 5 C/v
3...4c/v
4...3 c/v
5...2 c/v
h/m... 1
h/m...1
h/m...1

Good-Bye Darling

She watches as they slowly, lower the casket,
Wishing she had never told him to take that shortcut.
If it wasn't for her yelling, he'd still be alive,
As she goes back into her memory archive.

Back in high school, when they first met,
He asked her out, because it was a bet.
Then he realized, money didn't matter,
He didn't care who knew, for he loved her.

They were only freshman, yet madly in love,
They had maturity far up and above-
the rest. Then at 18, he popped the question,
"Will you marry me", and "yes" was her reaction.

Now she cries, after 5 years of marriage,
She wishes more than anything to give him one last message.
That's she sorry, and she loves him more than anything,
She will miss him, and don't worry, he'll always mean something.

The priest then states, "He died in a car,
As he, and his wife, drove to the local bar.
She said, take a shortcut, because it's getting late,
Because tonight was special, since their child, their first date.

A drunk from the bar, must've not seen them,
Because he hit the car, and the car went in flames in mayhem.
Luckily for us, the wife got away,
As we can see, he didn't, that's why were here today."

He says a little pray now, as all throw in roses,
As in his coffin, he eternally snoozes.
All the guest go home, except for his wife,
She says goodbye, he was the love of her life.

"Goodbye, my darling Husband, I've known you so long,
I'm sorry that this happened, I was so wrong.
I'll really miss you, I'll never forget about you,
Goodbye honey, I know you love me too."

~*Who Cares?*~
Is this ok? If not, let me know, and I'll change it!

Faded and Forgotten

Drip, drip as the last tears you cried ran down your face and one by one they hit the ground.
But now your gone forever. Without a trace of your existence left.
You have been forgotten and lost.
No one remembers you and they never will.
You were nothing, a nobody that quickly faded in the mist of everybodyelse's accomplishments.
But there was someone out there that could've saved you.
Yeah me if i would've had the time you would still be here insulting, gossiping, and making fun of my every move.
I could've helped you! But why would i help someone that hated me. Oh how much you hated me.

I am really bad at wrighting i just started writing not to long ago!!! ~Lil M~

Can't Escape

Every step crumbled beneath
Every laugh turned to ice
Every smile led deceptions
Inside my cascading eyes

Photos led only to memories
Poems released more than hide
This painful life I can't conceal
Is a ghost I can't leave aside

Haunting, taunting my every move
Grinning at my utter defeat
Paralyzed by my family's disgrace
I embrace my fears and begin my retreat

Farther and farther from my dreams
Away from all hope and light
Till there's nothing more but darkness
Shimmering around in sight

Whimpering I fall to the ground
Kill me now, I have nothing but pain
End my sorrow and my dismay
Draw my blood from my cold vein

Oh but death didn't take me away
It let me dwell upon my pain
Now even farther to a pale house
Across my shirt, it read, "Insane"

The Bedrooms Nightmare

The leaves in the dead trees lurch
Interweaved within the breeze that drives hard to collapse
The moon glistens with an intoxicated stare
Cease the clip right there
Admit the beautiful girl
That punctually commandeers the screen
With teeth akin to knives
Lips comparable to deaths own icy contiguity
I pose here oblivious to what she is about to do
As she laces her fingers round my spine
With an unvital snap, I have been abdicated
Impelled into the abysmal barathrum beneath your bed
Full of all the people you hungered
And got over just as expeditiously
Glass lacerates into your neck
As you aspire to drain your poisons to hastily
Swallowing the cup in the rigorous endeavors
This wooden frame about your window leaps
It’s fashioned for your image
Both of you bracing to expire tonight
The ceiling fan howls as it craves to hang from it’s cord
It was fabricated to tenure you by the throat
Dangling two feet aloft those virgin white sheets
They are as white as the apparitions in my vitiated brain
I put a unhallowed smile on as I withdraw this blade
And inject it’s apex into your skull

She'll Never Know

His hands so tightly grip her as she stumbles to the ground
Overbearingly he hits her, almost taunting those around
So many times its happened, yet so many times ignored
The price she'd paid so many times she could now no longer afford
Battered, bruised, and broken, she lay in a bed of tears
A complexity of angers, and the torment of fears
When theres no place left to turn, no one to hear her subtle cry
She'll find no tranquil replacement for the answers known as why
And she'll end so quickly what she wishes had never began
Leaving me here thinking how could i really have been her friend
But now in this regretful moment, I'll watch her in her pain
Refraining from impeding, feeling best if I abstain
So instead of life, embracing, soon she'll choose to let it go
As I'm ready to give to her the comfort that she'll never know

Daniel Ray Mulvany

Valentine's Day
by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

They sit together
on the lover's holiday
cuddling, and smiling
acting lovey dovey
he knows she wants to die sometimes
she thinks there might be someone else
they part in their ways
he goes to the one he loves
she to the one that loves her
she holds the cold metal, his photo
crying why couldn't you love me
like the way you love her
she holds the blade closer
thinking "walk the sidewalk"
she gets closer to her want
he now feels her pain
leaving his lover
he runs down the road
now she is thinking "no turning back"
the blade "walks the sidewalk"
now turning, it "crosses the street"
he reaches her house
tears running down their eyes
she clutches the note
he clutches the nob
just a second too late
she lays there motionless
kneeling beside her
he reads the note
"we both can't get what we want"
he knows, though no one else does.
he now belongs to her
she got her wish
but he shall not
that was her happy ending
but his sorrowful beginning

My hiding place..
by ..נєѕѕу..©

As I hear the car
Roar into the drive
I start to weep
I try desperately to stop
But the fear
Flowing from my eyes
Is uncontrollable..

He slams open the door
And yells fiercely at mommy
His words sound funny
And I know he has
Had way too much to drink
I curl my little fingers into fists
And beg myself to stop crying..

I know that if he finds me
I will be in for another beating..
So I scramble under my bed
And sit as still as can be..
This is my sanctuary,
My hiding place..

He storms up the stairs
And shoves open the door
He calls my name
In a haunting tone
Calling me, mocking me..

And then his face appears
That terrifying face
That has so many times
Beaten me until I was black and blue..

His pupils are whirling around
In his crazy eyes
And his face is a stunning purple
He grabs my delicate wrist
And pulls me out..

"No, daddy, please"
I wail, frozen with fear..
My mother runs in
And screams at him once more
"Leave her alone!
Don't you dare touch her!"

He turns round and hits her
A strong hard blow
And she falls to the floor
With a heavy thump..

Then he turns back to look at me
His eyes flaming with anger..
He picks me up and hurls
Me against the wall..
The sharp noise of
Breaking bones
Fills the room
He kicks my tiny body
And leaves me lying there,
Under my bed,
My sanctuary,
My hiding place..

Bathroom Hauntings

The walls are caving in on me,
There's no escaping this hell.
I can't stand all these voices,
Even though I've already fell.

Crying and screaming,
I'm wishing I can die.
Looking into the mirror,
The pain I see in my eyes.

Rocking myself back and forth,
As I'm sitting down on the floor.
Why won't they quit? Leave me alone,
I've already said I can't take anymore.

The pain is stabbing my chest,
And I can't seem to sit still.
I just want to die now,
And I wonder if I will.

The voices are getting louder,
Telling me what to do.
They're saying I'm weak,
I won't ever make it though.

Kicking and screaming,
I lose complete control.
Punch into the mirror,
My life you stole.

Shattered glass everywhere,
Cuts all over my hand.
But still to this second,
No one understands.

Copyright © Natalie

BabsB6,
yes you can sumit it i love that poem it is great go right ahead

ok cmon is thqt all you got don't get me wrong all of htem are amazeing... but cmon..... i need more to judge from

Forgiveness

You don't see what you've done
Or how much you've hurt me
You can't see my broken heart
Or how much I cry at night.

You pretend that nothing happened
And want me to do the same.
How could I forgive you
For being disloyal and deceitful.

You ask for my forgiveness
And say that you're sorry.
I just don't know how
How to forgive your betrayal.

How can I forgive you?
Forgive you for the lies
Forgive you for the other woman.
How am I suppose to just forgive?

oh, i forgot to say, mine is old too, is that okay?

Daughter of a Freak
by Wings of an Angel

Her hair so awful, her skin so pale,
She always wondered, where did she fail?
Born by a freak, raised as a slave,
No one to guide her, to tell her how to behave.
Years of working, years so dark,
She has never seen light, it has left its mark.
Shut in a room, just going out to clean,
It's the most horrifying thing they'd ever seen.
A key to lock her bedroom door,
Nothing on the walls, nothing on the floor.
No pillow, no bed, no good memories to hold,
No warmth, no love, nothing but cold.
Her mother locked the door, threw away the key,
The girl keeps asking herself "Whats so wrong with me"
Sitting in her room, hearing her mother go out,
She tries to scream, she tries to shout.
Her mother left her behind, in this room to die,
Now she's sitting there, trying not to cry.
She lays down, on the cold hard ground,
Trying to pray, hearing no sound.
Laying there for a couple of days,
in darkness and sadness, down she layes.
She will never raise again, never see the light,
She finally gives up, she will no longer fight.
Her eyes cry of sorrow, her eyes cry of tears,
Suddenly she sees something, an angel appears.
"Come with me, darling, come to the light,
"We will love you, you don't have to fight"
The angel smiles and reaches out her hand,
Where did this come from, she doesn't understand.
The girl reaches out her hand, suddenly starts to soar,
"Don't worry little darling, they won't hurt you anymore"

Black Shadows

When I was 12 I saw my first black shadow stand right in front of me,
it made me stop right in my tracks and think "what the hell could that be (?)"

I brushed it off and thought to myself "oh it was nothing I must be seeing things"
a couple days later my dad sat me down and said "sweetie grandpa is finally pain free and is flying with his new wings"
he passed away.

That same year I saw another shadow the exact same person figure all in black;
then my teacher told me my friend had passed away, I didnt believe her and she said "honey, he's not coming back."

Now I know these shadows have a meaning and I dont want to see them anymore,
why did they even start coming to me for (?)

A couple years later I see another;
damn whos it gonna be this time(?)
I didnt know him, but it was my fathers brother.

One year later the shadow appeared; only this time there were two,
I have a feeling this one is going to be hard to get through.
Exactly one week after 9/11,
I lost my baby sister and now shes waiting for me in heaven.

I cant take it anymore, why are they bothering me for (?)!
I want all this to end,
Im tired of seeing a shadow then have a funeral to attend.

Within the years more shadows came; family member went,
I really miss my sister; every time I pick up her clothes I can smell her sweet baby scent.

I'm in control,
I have my soul,
I hold my life
in the blade of a knife
I told them I would,
I knew that I could,
The hand trembling,
The air chilling,
My parents crying,
they know that I'm dying,
My friends smoking,
they think I am joking,
My breaths drawing close,
I have an overdose
Of pain.

can you end it at a certain number? not a date? cause thats agess away! :P

ok then i'll end it now seeing as i am going out of town
i will read em all and get back to you with the results....

ok this was a very hard decison... all of your poems were amazeing...
1.) who caresdarling
2.)she'll never know
3.) my hideing place
4.) can't escape
5.)valentinesday
h/m 1.) the visit
h/m 2.) her very last breath
h/m 3.) faded and forgotten
h/m 4.) depression

again let me tell you... it was a very hard decision.. all you of you were great...

yay thnx:)

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aww, thank youu! :)