Hi, Sunny and Sluvious,
I have read your poetry in your sites both, I found your creation full of ideas, but why the punctuation is weaker.
I think the youngstar like you, should pay more attention on the punctuation management. This is the first most important part for a good writer to pass this section. You won't be a good writer, if you don't learn more and solve them before you write a long piece of story etc....
Of course, every body wants to be a good writer or author in the future. I myself, is not looking for this goal, because I am an old Chinese man, who has gotten not enough English knowledge (not) from mother tongue. I may face more difficult in writing, if I must write in English to earn my life. I wish the young people like you should accept my advice in this part. Keep a good basic grammar to start your powerful creation in your good life.
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