Need help on Improvement on my poem

- Name : Neema
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- Joined : Jun 6, 2006
- Posts : 3
Neema
18 years ago

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=698271

Male writing for a female..

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- Name : Neema
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Jun 6, 2006
- Posts : 3
Neema
18 years ago

Anything?:/

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- Name : The Angel of Secrets
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The Angel of Secrets
18 years ago

I don't really know what you want to improve, a poem is a poem, no matter what, or how good it is.

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