~Meaningfull Lyrics Contest~

~Meaningfull Lyrics Contest~

Below are 20 song titles. You must pick one and only one. And your lyrics have to have something to do with the title. I'm looking for a song that has a great deal of meaning in it. Something that if you would listen to it, It would give you chills, Shivers. The contest will end once all have been chosen. I will let people reserve them, As some people might find it hard to write them fast. If you reserve one, and you don't submitt it after
7 days of reserving it. I'll put it back up for someone else to take.

~TITLES~
1] Move Along [The All-American Rejects]
[DONE]

2] You Set Me Free [Michelle Branch]

3] Romance Is Dead [Parkway Drive]

4] I'm Okay [Christina Aguilera]
[DONE]

5] Made Of Glass [Trapt]

6] Wasted Years [Cold]

7] Undiscovered [Ashlee Simpson]
[DONE]

8] Blow Me Away [Breaking Benjamin]

9] Someday I will Understand [Britney Spears]

10] Why Do You Love Me? [Garbage]

11] What Are You Waiting For? [Lindsay Lohan]

12] Pictures In The Mirror [The Living End]
[DONE]

13] Lovers And Liars [Matchbook Romance]

14] Can You Hear Me? [Missy Elliot Feat. TLC]
[DONE]

15] Slipped Away [Avril Lavigne]
[DONE]

16] Someday [Nickelback]

17] Young Love [Chris Brown]

18] Happy [Ashanti]

19] Out Of The Blue [Delta Goodrem]
[DONE]

20] Listen To Your Heart [DHT]

21] Please [Staind]

22] This Is Not Me [Delta Goodrem]

23] Picture, Perfect, Pathetic [Parkway Drive]

24] Sometimes [Papa Roach]

25] Posion [My American Heart]

26] My Cinderella [Lil' Romeo]

27] Underneath [Jessica Simpson]

28] Until Her Heart Stops [Hawthorne Heights]

29] Stupid Girl [Garbage]

30] Swallow The Knife [Story Of The Year]

~RULES~
-> Only one song per person.
-> Must be newly written, NO exceptions.
-> It can have profanity in it. But try and star out the words.
-> Must be your own work
-> Have fun =D

~PRIZES~
1st --> 8 Comments/rates
2nd --> 7 Comments/rates
3rd --> 5 Comments/rates
4th --> 3 Comments/rates

~And. Once the winners are announced, I will do one comment for everyone else, But on the song they submitted.

Can I reserve: Undiscovered

Done, Kaylee.

Anyone else up for this?

mmm, well if kaylee's doing it, iono.....

heh just kidding, once I'm done with a poem I'm working on I'll take another look.

Lol. Alright, Cool!

Anyone else?

Can I reserve:: 15] Slipped Away [Avril Lavigne]

I wanna make it meaningful...the title seems like something I could do, I have a muse now.

[PygmyPuff]

ok ignore that, I wrote it now.
This one is about Ryan Hart, he was alive after the accident but was "unplugged"

[Slipped Away]

Verse One:
Sunglasses hide tear stained cheeks,
Impressions in our hearts last for weeks.
Memories recreated, rediscovered.
Never to be slipped away.
Refrain:
So soon your life was stole away,
So quickly gone without a trace.
Out of sight, out of life,
A shadow overtaking a rapid pace

Chorus:
So short your time here on earth was spent,
So quickly you slipped away.
Out of reach, out of grasp.
But in our hearts to stay.

Verse Two:
Mascara runs, eyes close quickly.
Guys pretend they just dont care.
Stressful shouts, Over reactions.
Crying leaves your pale cheeks bare.

Verse Three:
Anger strikes, anxiety lingers
Pain within, so deep it hurts.
Staring eyes, hurtful lies
As we watched him slip away

Refrain:
So soon your life was stole away,
So quickly gone without a trace.
Out of sight, out of life,
A shadow overtaking a rapid pace.

Chorus:
So short your time here on earth was spent,
So quickly you slipped away.
Out of reach, out of grasp.
But in our hearts to stay.

Refrain x2:
So soon your life was stole away,
So quickly gone without a trace.
Out of sight, out of life,
A shadow overtaking a rapid pace.

Great jobs so far! Keep 'em coming =D

Anyone?

does it have to be in like a song format? or can it just be a poem? :P if it can be a poem can i reserve : 20] Listen To Your Heart [DHT]? :D

Lol.. I'm sorry Jessy. But I really want song formats. You should give it a go though, It's not that hard. You just have to have one part that's said a few times. Just have a look at some of my lyrics and see how they're layed out.. And try and lay it out like that. xx Hope you can do one =]

I'll post mine in a bit :)

hehe, okayy then.. ill see how im feeling :P

Can I reserve Pictures IN the mirror?

#12 Pictures in The Mirror

Verse 1:
So long ago, it seemed so far away
Since I held your face/your smiling lips
I was so young, was so naive
I believed every word/ that you slipped

Chorus:
Where are the fairytales I dreamed
Where are the princes I seek
Inside those pictures in the mirror
I am all yet nothing but bleak

Verse 2:
I see lines drawn upon my face now
Beauty fades, my time exceeds
Wasted all these precious years
Just to do your dirty deeds

Verse 3:
Your picture flash by, me and you
Laughing and smiling like little kids
We seemed so perfect, unlimited love
Yet in this love tragedy still hid

Chorus:
Where are the fairytales I dreamed
Where are the princes I seek
Inside those pictures in the mirror
I am all yet nothing but bleak

Bridge:
I was nothing but a fool/nothing at all
I judged nought of heart, but what I saw

Chorus:
Where are the fairytales I dreamed
Where are the princes I seek
Inside those pictures in the mirror
I am all yet nothing but bleak

For Bobby.

Undiscovered

Verse One
In my young beatin' heart tonight,
I hear your whisper, 'an I hold it tight,
'An I can sense forgiveness in your soul,
Somethin' I've been searching forever for,
Thought I found me an undiscovered miracle,
But to let you find your way, I need to let you go.

Verse Two
'An I know this might make me cry,
Thousan' fireflies couldn' cheer me,
'An I hear you wantin' to know why,
All I can tell you as you take my hand,
Is that somewhere you'll find that girl,
'An to tell you the truth, she ain't me,

Chorus
In mornin' light, she'd hold your hand,
During evenin', she'd enchant you close,
'An you'd be smilin' as she makes a face,
'Cause to you, she's your angel in snow,
But on Christmas, she'd even tell stories,
'An you'd snuggle when the fire dies out,
'An I know my heart would be breakin',
As much as I love you, she just ain't me.

Verse Three
In my young mind thinkin' tonight,
I hear your voice sayin', "I love you.",
'An to me, you've never bent the truth,
Somethin' I've been wantin' to know,
As I push the hair from your eyes,
How could an angel like you enter my life,

Verse Four
'An I know there'd be bridges to cross,
In my heart, they're miles too long,
I sense you standin' at the very start,
Thousan' butterflies fluterin' within me,
Couldn' forget how your voice was the net,
But someday, you might understand,

Chorus
In mornin' light, she'd hold your hand,
During evenin', she'd enchant you close,
'An you'd be smilin' as she makes a face,
'Cause to you, she's your angel in snow,
But on Christmas, she'd even tell stories,
'An you'd snuggle when the fire dies out,
'An I know my heart would be breakin',
As much as I love you, she just ain't me.

Verse Five
'An I know there'd be bridges to cross,
In my heart, they're miles too long,
But I hear you sayin, "I love you.",
In my thoughts you'd forever be,
Undiscovered to anyone but me,
'An I hope you know I love you too,

Chorus
In mornin' light, she'd hold your hand,
During evenin', she'd enchant you close,
'An you'd be smilin' as she makes a face,
'Cause to you, she's your angel in snow,
But on Christmas, she'd even tell stories,
'An you'd snuggle when the fire dies out,
'An I know my heart would be breakin',
As much as I love you, she just ain't me.

Verse Six
'An I know there'd be thoughts of you,
But understand if you ever come back,
Than I'd know there would be reason,
To believe, she might just be me.

There great guys!!! Keep 'em coming. =D

Cmon guys!!!! Lol.. There's still -heaps- of titles left.

Wow. It was all the way at the bottom. Cmon people. You know you wanna give this a try =D

Lol. *cries* no one likes my contest!

Ha! Cmon, guys. It's seriously not that hard. And you can reserve a title for up to a week. Theres no date for when this ends. I'm ending it when all the titles are taken.

Can I reserve #13 Lovers And Liars please?!?

Thanks

wait did jessy reserve 20 or not? if she didnt i wanna do it...

lol.. who cares you can have it :P too difficultt.. hehe

May I reserve 14 can you hear me?Thanks~

Woo. cmon people. =D

Can you hear me

Verse one:
Whenever the moon hang up in the sky
I’ll confide my secret to her sincere
It’s said moon could help our dream fly
Can you hear me, my dear?

Verse two:
Wandering lonely along the empty street
Sweet memories broke my heart
My yearnings for you dampened the wind
Can you hear me, my dear?

Verse three:
You’ve penetrated every details of my life
You are the unique figure haunting in my dream
The rhythm of missing tugs my heartstrings
Can you hear me, my dear?

Chorus:
Oh, my darling, let me sing a song for you
It’s not beautiful, but it’s full of sincerity
I’ll sing with my whole heart-for you only
Can you hear me, my dear?

Yay! Cmon everyone lol. You all know you wanna give it a goooo =P

Just so everyone knows. As people post their lyrics. I'm judging them straight away. Down to every little detail. And when I choose the winners, I'll be making a new thread with the winners and my comments on all the poems there. Mmkay?

~Wasted Years~

(Verse 1)
A relationship bound by the court,
two parents yearning to abort.
One child's postpartum deport,
a life, from the start, out of sorts.

(Verse 2)
The help of two elders, they sought,
a custody battle, never fought.
Drug addict parents, got caught,
important lessons, never taught.

(Verse 3)
A baby that was left behind,
consequences of a legal bind.
A lifestyle of a different kind,
viewpoints from a distorted mind.

(Verse 4)
A family separated by years in time,
a life with a different rhythm and rhyme.
Two people, making up for another's crime,
always living off of their last dime.

(Verse 5)
A difficult situation from the start,
a unique picture, of an unpopular art.
A family, nearly torn apart,
two grandparents, certainly, off the charts.

(Verse 6)
An unwanted boy, now full grown,
held together by seams, left un-sewn.
Approaching life with a whole different tone,
hoping, some day, to live life on his own.

~Sean Dohr~

~I wanted to pass by the chorus's, because they usually hold very little meaning and are usually something set into a song to attract an audience. Unless used correctly, a chorus takes away from the meaning of a song. I decided this old poem of mine would make a very interesting song.~

He probably just forgot to change it

can I reserve move along?

meh well, it's none of my business, not like it's my poem or anything. If it isn't supposed to be there then the poem should be DQ'ed

~RULES~
-> Only one song per person.
-> Must be newly written, NO exceptions.
-> It can have profanity in it. But try and star out the words.
-> Must be your own work
-> Have fun =D

..Sorry Sean Dohr. I did put in the rules for it to be newly written. I'm not making any exceptions cause I don't want other people then complaining they didn't get to use an old poem or song or whatever. And P.S. You should have changed the title, Then I might not have realised. =)

Anymore takers?

You Set Me Free

We twisted our fingers
Closed our eyes and breathed
Smiled, laughed, and cried
You were the world to me

Your sense of humor
Drove me insane
You were the first
To take away my pain

I went crazy in the head
When I heard you had left
How could you leave me
I'd felt I was dead

You were everything to me
I'd give up everything and anything for you
I'd sacrifice my life
I love you...

Um, I think thats a poem?

Wow, I need to improve my reading skills...haha. Sorry, I thought the rules read that you had to fit lyrics to one of the titles. I didn't know it had to be newly written...sorry again.

That's alright.

If you any of you's are finding it hard to write these. Tell me, And I'll post one in here, So you can see how it's set out and things. But, The one I'd post here I don't have posted on this site. So yeah.

omg i 4got i reserved the last title! im so sry. uhh i nevr really written song lyrics b4 n i didnt really pay attention it was lyrics so can u unreserve me. i am so sorry if ne1 wanted that title. sry sry sry!!