Fantasy to Romance and everything imbetween.

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    CLOSED

    Okay, this is my fisrt contest I made. I haven't won any contests I entered, so I decided to make a contest...anyways. This is my first contest I made, so be patient.

    ~Prizes~
    1st- 9 r/c and added to my fav. list
    2nd- 7 r/c
    3rd- 5 r/c
    HM- (there will be 3) 2 r/c
    Everyone gets 1 r/c for entering!

    ~Rules~
    1.You're own work
    2.2 per poet
    3.Must be new
    4.No cussing/profanity
    5. Any other obvious thing you can think of.

    ~Titles~
    1.Where'd You Go?-DONE
    2.You're Beautiful-DONE
    3.My Heart Will Go On-DONE
    4.Dancing In The Rain-DONE
    5.Time to Dance-DONE
    6.Remembering the Forgotten
    7.Even In Death-DONE
    8.Fields of Innocence-DONE
    9.Unwritten-RESERVED
    10.Dancin Shoes
    11.Fall to Pieces-DONE
    12.Show Yourself
    13.Earthsong
    14.Dances of Dragons-DONE
    15.Making Magic
    16.Livin' in a Casket
    17.Invisible Ink-DONE
    18.Imagionary-DONE
    19.Living in Ashes-DONE
    20.Tired of Rhyming

    ------Contest will end on June 25-------
    (if alot of people enter, which I'm doubting, I will add more topics.)

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    I changed my mind, Sorry. Can I do 'Dancing In The Rain' I was kinda stuck on the one I was trying to do..

  • Miss Pipp
    18 years ago

    ack! so many choices!
    I'll chose one and write but I'll leave fall to pieces don't worry. Ok well I'm off to write!

    Pip xxx

  • MemoirsOfMe
    18 years ago

    8. Fields of Innocence

    Show me where to run
    Show me where to hide
    Show me the truth
    Never the lies.

    These Fields of Innocence
    No longer exists,
    Many are exposed,
    To things they don’t wish.

    Once eyes, so bright and blue,
    Turn dark, unclear, and distant.
    The barrier we all shared, so young,
    Breaks Innocence in an instant.

    Our world today is turned
    Only bringing us to the ground
    Things weren’t as they use to
    The answers never to be found.

    These Fields of Innocence,
    That use to be so clear,
    Fades in the disarray,
    Just so close, so near.

    It’s too late to change
    We were heading here all along
    Yet we never paid attention to our needs
    We can’t admit that we are wrong.

    So as we fade into the future,
    The Innocence in children won’t last.
    They cast away into a place,
    Where childhood goes by so fast.
    They are revealed things so early,
    Exposed, vulnerable, bare.
    Why don’t we see this?
    Because life as we know it, isn’t fair.
    ___________________________________________

    Hope thats okay! :D

  • Moose
    18 years ago

    ~can I reserve unwritten? Thanks~

  • moonriver
    18 years ago

    May i reserve my heart will go on?thanks~~~

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    #14 Dances of Dragons

    Around the fires of a trembling earth
    Flickering Tediously at the night sky
    Rising from the ground, it's first birth
    Weaving together in a quiet sigh

    Scales of dripping mirth appear in sight
    A soft humming of a magical voice
    A gold, and a blue dragon entwined in flight
    Dancing with their final eternal choice

    Eyes of jewels like the midnight stars
    Raise up the world in a mighty roar
    Let your sound be heard from lands afar
    Tatter the ground and Earth's soft core

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    4]Dancing In The Rain.

    Together we'll be dancing in the rain,
    With our half empty bottle of champagne.
    Smelling the scent of wet grass in the air,
    As you brush your gentle hands through my hair.

    Side by side watching the stars from the sky,
    Wishing one day together we could fly.
    Over the mountains and the seven seas,
    Cause the lock on my heart, You have the keys.

    I'm chained to you, You're irresistible,
    I'll love you forever, It's that simple.
    I'm enchanted by your sweet melody,
    The sparkle in your eyes you have for me.

    High in the clouds and in fairytale books,
    Was the only place I thought true love cooks.
    Now we're together, Nothings in our way,
    Because I believe in true love today.

    Copyright © Natalie 2006

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    so, mitsukai eimin, do you want me to reserve Fall to Pieces?

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    I AM SOO SORRY I FORGOT THE PRIZES! i will edit my first post!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    i wanna do where'd you go! RESERVE IT 4 ME PLZ! ill do it in a while.

  • Oscar
    18 years ago

    please reserve even in death for me

  • Oscar
    18 years ago

    Even In Death

    This can't be happening, i must be imagining it.
    he can't be here with me, here everytime i sit.
    i killed him, myself, with my bare hands.
    yet he is still here, comes as swift as the sands.

    Even in Death, he is following me. even thought he is dead, it's him that I see. he's torturing me and causing me pain, he's making me suffer, and cracking my brain.

    even though i killed him, he's still real as can be, yet only i can see him, and he can see me. every time i run, he is right behind. every corner i turn, it's him that i find.

    he's dead and i know it, i buried him in the ground.
    packed it up real tight, so he would never be found. but now it seems that, i'm the one who has bled. for he will not stop, until i am dead.

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    You're Beautiful (#2)

    It doesn't matter if you wear
    A short skirt or an oversized T-shirt
    You're still gonna be my girl
    Still gonna live in this world

    You're beautiful just the way you are
    You could own a limo or the most ugly car
    Don't worry about your scars
    You're wonderful just the way you are

    Wear a lot of mascara, the hippest jeans
    The fact still remains - you're only a teen
    Live life once in a while, travel very far
    You're beautiful just the way you are

    Sing to yourself, sing to me
    Words flowing so sweet and free
    Smile and open your eyes
    You're already so beautiful to me
    ________________________________
    Dedicated to my best friend Kassy.

  • Oscar
    18 years ago

    ok i can do 2 right? i want to reserve imaginary please.

  • Oscar
    18 years ago

    #18 Imaginary

    they told me it was just my imagination, that it was never real. but i know what i'm talking about, the truth that will never heal. They told me i was crazy, told me to settle down. I replied, shut the f up, so they put me in a hospital gown.

    they told me i'd be all right, this was for my own good. they said i'd made stuff up, and put drugs in my food.i couldn't convince them of my sanity. that it was much more than a memory. it was right in front of me, but then why didn't they see?

    he'd come in contact with me, as well as my siblings. but i don't see them anywhere? have i really gone crazy? they tell me i had no siblings, i was an only child. they said i'd made that up as well, those words made me go wild.

    i started hating everyone, my parents included. i refused to see any person, wouldn't even touch my meal. then they put me in a white room, the white jacket leather i could feel.

    that night was when it happened, someone unlocked my door. he came right in, into my room, he who i'd seen only once before. he let me out and in the hall a sight awaited my eyes. my doctor's and parents all murdered. yet all i did was smile, and there were no sad good byes. and then the man he set me free. he let me go, and i could see. that everything, i thought i could be. was really just imaginary.

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    well, this is going well... you all get a r/c for entering!

  • Miss Pipp
    18 years ago

    Fall To Pieces

    Every time I saw you
    i wouuld fall to pieces.
    to see you angry-
    angry at me. I wish I hadn't done it...

    I wish I hadn't done it
    You say I'm smart and nice
    but if I was I would have realised...

    you had feelings for me still
    three months later.
    Nine months and
    when I talk to you I still feel sad.

    I wont stop until I'm back in your arms
    because without you,
    I fall to pieces.

    ~this is about my ex boyfriend who I dumped nine months ago and still have feelings for. I don't think there is a flow to it and it's hard to understand but I hope you guys like it~

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Don't worry about it. I'm not gonna post the one I did... Someone else can take that title if they want to. It was 'Remembering The Forgotten' =) Sorry.

  • moonriver
    18 years ago

    My heart will go on

    Heart, please come to my side joyous
    See, the wind is full of fragrance to our delight
    The moon greets us with all her gentleness
    Let’s dance and enchant ourselves on the serene night

    Sorry to disappoint you, my dear
    I’m waiting for my lord
    Though his disappearance renders me in tear
    Missing any chance to be with him is something I can’t afford

    You are so silly, my baby
    It’s no use sticking to empty yearnings
    You have been lonesome in this unknown corner for century
    You are bound to miss many beautiful evenings

    Whatever you may say my dear
    Nothing could render me alter my idea
    I betrayed you already the first time I am with him so near
    I’ll go on and on until he appears

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Invisible Ink

    I carefully write out
    The lines of my life
    Each and every
    Thought and emotion
    Is expressed in this book..

    And as each feeling seeps
    Into the white page
    That it was printed on
    It becomes invisible ink..

    If anyone were ever
    To see these precious pages
    My soul would be shattered
    And my existence uncovered..

    So I write of my days
    In invisible ink
    No one will ever know
    The secrets and lies
    That I live within..

    This book and my invisible ink
    Is what keeps me alive
    Is what keeps me sane..

    And as I write
    My thoughts, feelings, and desires
    Melt into the pages
    Becoming one with the book
    Never to be discovered
    Because of my invisible ink..
    ___________________________

    hehe. hope you like it! :)

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    Where'd you Go?

    Where'd you go, I'm all alone,
    I can't stand, to be on my own.
    Where are you, please come back,
    Without you here, my life is black.

    You and I, used to be friends,
    Thought we would be until the end.
    Then I fell in love with you, everything changed,
    Now you don't talk, and make me feel deranged.

    Why you got to do that? All i wanted was love,
    You became so important, placed you above-
    everyone else. Now I'm alone again,
    Miss how we used to be way back then.

    Where'd you go? I'm all alone,
    When without you, I'm cold as stone.
    Where are you, please come back,
    But your feelings for me now lack.

    Used to be that you, and me could just talk,
    Sometimes even go on a casual walk.
    Once you found out, you never talked anymore,
    Didn't even care when I cried outside the door.

    Didn't care when you saw me, dying inside
    Doesn't matter to you how much I've cried.
    Don't care I got your back, don't care about anything,
    All of a sudden to you, I mean nothing.

    Where'd you go, I'm all alone,
    I miss hearing, your voice on the phone.
    Where are you, please come back,
    When you need me, to pull you out of the crack-

    You'll be alone.

    ~*Who Cares?*~

    Sorry I took so long, I hope this is OK. You can take this as either a friendship or love poem:D

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    THESE ARE GOOD POEMS YOU GUYS! now lets do some more!

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    i might shorten the deadline to june 20th if noone else wants to enter this contest

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    the contest is closing in 8 days, so 'caught in this pain agin', you need to turn in your poem and anyone else who want to write one, GET ON IT

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    yaya! so when's it ending? :P lol.. cant really keep track..

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    there is still one reserved, so it will go back to the 25th, sry....i am very busy and i cant keep track of all the different things im doing...

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    WOOT! 2 per poet... i was lookin at wat oscar said for about 3 minutes lol...
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    (Rictameter: can be found at http://members.optushome.com.au/kazoom/poetry/rictameter.html)
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    Living in Ashes

    Alone
    Silent, webbed breath
    Living, fearsome nightmare
    Sandlike structures collapse under
    White monsoons sweep all away - destruction
    Washing the world like lightning storms
    Cloudy skies beaming bright
    Everything new
    Alone

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    If we do two, does it have to be a title that's not taken yet? Do we have to do two

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    no, you do not HAVE to do 2, but you CAN if you want to. yes, it has to be one that has not been taken.

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Done yet?

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    no, one is still reserved and she hasnt posted it yet

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    but if it isnt posted by the 25, it will still be judged.

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    1st-Noniwang (dancing of dragons)
    2nd-Jessy (invisible ink)
    3rd-Oscar- (imagionary)
    HM-Heartzonice (living in ashes)
    HM-Whocares (where'd you go)
    HM-Memiorsofme (fields of innocence)

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Yay!

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    aww, thank youu! :D good job everyone!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    aw thnx:D wooo h/m!

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    woot! i won something! thanks :)

    Pls read the tale of the note... and: stepping out of the darkness. thanks!