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Okay, my last one was kind of so-so. I'm gonna create my own titles this time. The rules are the same.
-Must be New
-You may Write Two!

Prizes: You better write a lot for me to Read!
1st-5 poems, reconized in my profile
2nd-4 poems
3rd-3 poems
HM- all quotes or a poem

~*Titles*~
1. Ocean Breeze-TAKEN
2. Wild Desire-TAKEN
3. Black Widow-
4. Love at Last-TAKEN
5. Hands in blood
6. Wedding Dreams
7. Cinnamon Kiss-TAKEN
8. Soul Renewal-TAKEN
9. Die with me-TAKEN
10. Apple Lips

Second Choice
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1. Not Worth It-TAKEN
2. Chinese Garden
3. Silver Eyes-TAKEN
4. Dead Zone-TAKEN
5. Can't Forget-TAKEN
6. Time to Fade-
7. Strawberry Summer
8. He's gone because of me-TAKEN
9. Remain with Me-TAKEN
10. Heart Killer-

nvm

and sorry

can i reserve love at last?! thnx ill get it dun this weekend!

Ocean Breeze
by Italian Stallion

Sitting here by the ocean's breeze
I think of you
And all the times we had
When we where engaged

Kissing each other
And enjoying the view
That had made us cuddle
And feel so free

Out there on the sea
With you by my side
Sailing through the wind
Feeling the ocean's breeze

Asking you to marry me
And be my bride
Oh how you brought a smile to my face
When you said, "Yes, I will"

My life has changed
Ever since I met you
I am whole with you by my side
And I want you to know, "I Love You"

With you as my wife
I enjoy the view
Out here on the beach
Feeling the ocean's breeze

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

Are we allowed to do 2, If we are, I would like to reserve wedding dreams.

Thank you, Joe

nice poem joe

I'll see how many people enters first

can i reserve "Cinnamon Kiss" please?

^that is a really good title you just reserved

hehe.. :)
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Cinnamon Kiss

Laying peacefully in a bed of flowers
I cannot tear my eyes away
From the angel that rests close to me
Holding my delicate gaze all day..

The sweet aroma of honey
Floats through the air
I stare into her sea blue eyes
And run my fingers through her golden hair..

The warm rays of the sun
Flow slowly over me
My body starting to feel tingly
And the will to feel overtaking the will to see..

Gently I put a finger to her moist lips
She slowly lifts her glossy eyes
And as her ruby lips caress mine
The knot of love between us ties..

This supple feeling, this exotic taste, this magical moment
Is one I will never forget and will eternally miss
Lying curled up in the blossoms with an angel
We shared a cinnamon kiss..

c'mon people! there are some nice titles here! :)

Can I reserve Soul Renewal?
I wanna type it up on Word first
-shrugs-

[PygmyPuff]

Hmm. Can I reserve 'Wild Desire'? I've just started it. I'll come back if I get stuck and can't do it..

**Soul Renewal**

Oh He Who Watches Down
On Our Path Of Selfishness
And Looks Away At Our Lies;
Turns His Back When We Are Trouble Bound

Oh He Who Determines Fate
Is So Silent In Our Lives
And Refuses To Hint Our Future
For It Already Is Too Late

Oh Why Does The World Follow
These Manuals For A Happy End
When We Know It Is Crusted With Lies
Created By Those Who Are Ever So Shallow.

Oh Why Do I Feel So Attached
To This Method Of Escape
Where My Selfish Desires Follow Me
Gone Only When I Have Lifted The Latch

His Kingdom Is Paved In Gold
Or So I Am Told
But How Can I Believe
That It If Forever That You Leave.

My Philosophies Are Simple
But Supressed By The Currents
Followed In The Distant Lands
Marking The World Only As A Dimple

[PygmyPuff]

When's your deadline? I was just wondering because I would like to reserve Black Widow, but I don't know when I'll get it done. If the deadline's not overly soon, could you please reserve it for me?

Thanks,
Jordan

xX[. Wild Desire .]Xx

You are nothing but my wild desire,
My one true love who can take me higher.
We dance on clouds and under the moonlight,
I can see the stars in your eyes tonight.

Your silky lips pull me closer to you,
For I know you'll never be untrue.
You stole my heart with your one sweet kiss,
And there's nothing else I want more than this.

It's only your soft voice that I can hear,
While everything around me disappears.
My skin against yours, I feel your heart beat,
It's pumping through your veins but so discreet.

As the sunshine rises and the clouds flea,
There's only love left that you have for me.
And when night falls, With the stars in the sky,
It's then I know our love will never die.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

{Hope that was alright o.O}

My deadline is when I think there's enough poems to judge. You have time.

Should I add more titles if you people want to do 2 poems?

I might do another one if you add more titles. Depends what they are though...

Ok

omg i 4got about this contest! ill get on it a.s.a.p. im in the midst of writin 1 for this other contest! sry:(

omg i wrote it n went i clicked post answer it said i must log in n i LOST IT! so now i g2 start over. GR!

Love at Last AGAIN!! lol

Sitting alone, I know that I'm a fool,
For telling a guy I like him, isn't against my golden rule.
"Don't tell a guy you like him when-
Your name's Erika," is my rule for men.

Thought I finally found someone, who cares like me,
Everyone knows I was wrong, but I was too in love to see.
Each breath I take hurts, since I told you.
Our relationship never began, it's immediately through.

Thought I found love at last after all this time,
BUt I opened my big mouth, I should become a mime-
That way I can't say anything to ruin what I had,
Now each time I think of you, I get so sad.

If you ever need me darling, just give me a call,
If ever you need someone after you fall.
I'll be here, waiting, I'm sorry for what I've done,
I just thought you'd agree, our relationship would be so fun!

I'll br here waiting, if ever in need of me,
Give me a call, and I'll be over in a hurry.
I'll forever, linger on the woderous past,
And somday, you and I, will find love at last.

~*W.C?*~
woah my 1st one was so much better im so sad:( stupid website. this'll nevr win. o well. thats ok, at least the contest will end earlir now

Lol WC I feel your pain. I had one soooo long and it logged me before I could get it.

Can I RESERVE Die with Me please?

I'll write it tomorrow, ive written like 4 poems today n I think i wasted all my words on the last one I wrote lol.

lol i h8 it. o well. good luck every1 btw:D

I'd like to reserve, "Remain with Me"

Thank you, Joe

oooooh. You added more titles =D Tehe.. Can I pweeease reserve "Silver Eyes"

I should have it done soon enough. =)

xX[. Silver Eyes .]Xx

Who's that little girl in my reflection,
Crying and asking for some affection.
I can see the tears in her silver eyes,
They're showing no matter how hard she tries.

She's wanting to reach out for some support,
Because she feels this is her last resort.
Her cold fragile hands won't stop shaking,
And her beating heart just keeps on breaking.

What is she thinking inside of her head?
Is she afraid of what may lay ahead?
There's too many decisions to be made,
To keep her away from the dangerous blade.

Her image slowly starts to disappear,
But around me her voice I can still hear.
As she fades away into the bright light,
I struggle to keep her here with a fight.

Who was that young girl in my reflection,
Crying and asking for some affection.
I can see the tears in my silver eyes,
As I look up it's then I realize.

That little girl crying was me all along.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

{Hope that was okay, Lol... It was pretty bad..}

Could I reserve Time to Fade??? Thanks
punkchick

Sure

Please reserve:

Not worth it

thanks :)

Not Worth It

A run down girl at the age of fourteen
Went to New York to discover her dreams

Been played in the cinemas, with all the movies gone
Leaving home and ending up where it's all wrong

Auditioned for commercials and Broadway plays
Ready to try it for the rest of her days

Dyeing her hair, having plastic surgery
All by the time that she turned eighteen

Got a fancy producer who bought her nice things
All he cares about her is the way she sings

(Hey, things kicked off to a wonderful start
But what happens when life aims for the heart?)

Fell in love with king of Jupiter, which made her feel stupider
Thought he was nice, but he hurt her

And now her money's gone
Wiped straight from her wallet, it's gone wrong

Strumming her fingers on a cardboard guitar
Lookin' up at what used to be the stars

Not a penny left in her fake leather purse
Ended up in a place that was cursed

(Girl, it's not worth it..
Leave before you start hurtin'...)

Girl saved up 20 quarters and went home
Her mama picked her up with the payphone

She was welcomed when she came back
Now she knows livin' the good life is whack

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(was thinking of "Gone" by BEP/Johnny.

:)

I'm sorry I'm not really feeling up to writing anything. BTW this is punkchick. I changed my name.

That's okay

hmm...I think you can un-reserve black widow...I'm just not sure where to go with it.

thanks, though!

5 more days for the reserved ones or I'm removing them

Come on People

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I am working on "Remain with me" it shall be done soon. :)

Ciao, Joe

Remain With Me
by Italian Stallion

Remain with me
Till the end
Hold my hand
And never let go

Cry with me
Cuddle close
Kiss my lips
Lets make love

Watch the stars
Make a wish
Kiss some more
Start to expose

Making love
All night through
Watching you
Till morning bright

Cuddling close
I kiss you once more
Tell you I love you
And I want some more

Watch the sunrise
While making sweet love
To my one and only
Love of my life

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

~Dead Zone~

A rubber coated metal bench
that stands up against the wall,
is placed next to another one,
that stretch far down the hall.

A bench that I'm familiar to,
along with all my friends.
The burnout bench is what it is,
no matter how far it extends.

Anyone who's sitting there,
are looked at with disrespect,
but with a label as a drugee,
what more can you expect.

We've tried for several years,
to ignore the generalizations,
but as the clock continues to tick,
we are losing all our patience.

It's now labeled the dead zone,
for they say our heads are vacant,
but the one thing they don't know
is that they are all mistaken.

~Sean Dohr~

Yay! Almost done! Come on people, write your reserves!