*~*New Contest*~*

  • *colorsofmylife*
    18 years ago

    Okay, I am new at this so forgive me if it's not the greatest...

    Pick a title from below and write a poem using it...

    Rules...
    *Must be your own work
    *Must be newly written
    *One poem/title per person

    Titles...
    1. Distance - Done
    2. Step by Step
    3. Invisible - reserved
    4. More to Life - reserved
    5. Someday - Done
    6. Hold On - Done
    7. Stuck - Done
    8. Shine
    9. I'm Real - Done
    10. I'll be - Done
    11. Learning to Fall - Done
    12. The Reason - Done
    13. God's Will
    14. Soldier - Done
    15. Who am I - reserved
    16. The Impossible - Done
    17. Dare to Dream - Done
    18. Hero - Done
    19. Broken - Done
    20. Alive - Done

    Prizes...
    * 1st Place - 8 poems
    * 2nd Place - 5 Poems
    * 3rd Place - 3 Poems
    * HM - 1 Poem
    * I might comment on what you enter no matter whether or not you place in addition

    The contest will end when all of the titles are done

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Can I please reserve 'Someday'.

    I'll have it done by tomorrow, since it's 3:46am here. =)

  • *colorsofmylife*
    18 years ago

    wow! it's 1:47 pm here!! and yea you can

  • RetroRavey
    18 years ago

    Broken

    I have fallen from my stage,
    Left cold, alone and...
    Broken.
    I was about to say my line,
    When he walked in.
    He looked at me
    With those indigo eyes,
    And I fell
    Without even thinking.
    He had left so long ago,
    He had said goodbye,
    This very night,
    Three years ago.
    He was the first to reach me,
    Sitting in my broken pile on the floor,
    Crying in my broken hudle,
    On the now broken floor.
    He was still beautiful,
    Still young in looks,
    But his eyes still held too much wisdom,
    For his age.
    He smiled at me and lifted me up,
    I was crying and sobbing and wanting him to let me go,
    Or hold me forever.
    But he whispered in my ear,
    "It'll be alright,
    I'm not leaving this time,
    And I'll stay with you, my love."
    So now these broken body,
    With a broken soul inside,
    Might finally be able,
    To mend.

    ~I really think this sux monkey toe. i didn't give it my all, sorry~

  • Moose
    18 years ago

    Can I reserve stuck please?

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    xX[. Someday .]Xx

    There's a deadly secret I've kept inside,
    Can't build up courage for me to confide.
    The memories are eating me away,
    Making it harder every single day.

    I know that what you were doing was wrong,
    So why was it that I still played along?
    Why didn't I scream? Why didn't I cry?
    I can't seem to stop asking myself why.

    You're the reason I won't let love come in,
    'Cause of your dirty hands touching my skin.
    I told you no, did you care to listen?
    But I guess not 'cause you let it happen.

    You held me down tightly without a care,
    And all I could think was this isn't fair.
    My delicate heart is cracked into two,
    'Cause of the evil sin you had to do.

    Now when I see you, your head bows in shame,
    'Cause you finally realize you're to blame.
    And even though I'm not really okay,
    My soft voice will tell the world someday.

    Copyright © Natalie 2006

    {sorry for it not being good o.O}

  • *colorsofmylife*
    18 years ago

    very well done!!! keep them coming!

  • LovelyDivine
    18 years ago

    Could I reserve who am I???
    Thanks.
    BrOkEnHeArTeD

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Can I reserve Invisible

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    17. Dare to Dream
    By Wings of an Angel

    Don't let anyone take away your mind.
    Dare to take a challenge, if you want to unwind.
    If you have somthing on youre mind, let them know,
    Give them everything, this is youre personal show.
    Let them know that you are the person you are,
    Show them you are the driver of youre lifes car.
    Show them youre faults, show them youre real,
    Make sure they know you, let them know how you feel.
    Dare to be strong, dare to be free.
    Show youreself and say: This is me!
    If you might be angry, dare to scream.
    If you want to live, dare to dream!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    can i reserve alive plz?

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    18 years ago

    May i please reserve Step by Step?

    Merci Beacoup

    x3333

    xLaurenx

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    Alive

    Each night I cry, thinking of what you’ve done,
    Taken away all happiness, taken all fun.
    Not to sure why, but I still love you,
    Despite all friendship we had between us is through.

    You confuse my mind, each and every night,
    You make me cry, yet keep me in this fight.
    Make me want to die, but I’d miss you too much,
    Just for the hope of getting one last touch.

    Keep me alive, yet kill me inside,
    Doesn’t matter to you how much I’ve cried.
    You don’t care how I feel, or how much I care,
    I love you so much, but you hate me? That’s not fair.

    Don’t know how that’s possible. Kill me each day,
    Yet keep me alive at night. Make my life gray,
    Yet my dreams so sunny. You confuse my mind,
    I love you baby, but you leave me behind…

    ~*Who Cares?*~
    Hope this is OK, if not lemme know

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    18 years ago

    Can i un-reserve step by step? im sorry, but i thought i had inspiration.. but it came out totally sucky and i dont want to stop another poet freom submitting a poem for that title.

    Sorry

    xLaurenx

  • *colorsofmylife*
    18 years ago

    it's alright...thanks

  • *colorsofmylife*
    18 years ago

    sorry guys, but I am leaving tomorrow for North Carolina...I won't be back until Tuesday...keep the poems coming and I should be able to judge when I get home

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    okey dokey:D have fun

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    Hey, brokenhearted, can I take your reserved title? It's been a while and I have a good poem to fit the title...

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    I also have a poem for "Soldier," but it is not newly written. Can I still post it?

  • *colorsofmylife*
    18 years ago

    Sure Sean...why not

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    ~Soldier~

    Mom, I hope you're proud of me,
    even though I lay here dead.
    I'm sorry that you had to see,
    what Sunday's paper read.

    "Six American soldiers found dead,
    as the result of a roadside bomb."
    I know you said I should have stayed,
    but either way I would have gone.

    Now, that I look back on things,
    I realize that I did wrong.
    I wish I could have realized it,
    before my funeral song.

    I found out while in battle,
    that the war had little reason.
    The bullies against the nerds,
    not God against the heathens.

    Iraq, was like a movie,
    where you can't believe the scenes.
    America truly was the enemy,
    "the ruiners of dreams."

    Just another pointless war,
    that the U.S. "had" to fight.
    Instead of listening to George,
    I should have done what was right.

    Now, I lay here motionless,
    listening to the priest.
    Remembering how life was,
    before I was deceased.

    ~Sean Dohr~

  • LovelyDivine
    18 years ago

    If you want and u are allowed you can take my reserved title. I'm sorta having a rough time writing anything this week.

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    i'll try to get my done soon

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    18 years ago

    Ill try to write Distance

    ~4ever

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    reserve 'learning to fall' plz

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    18 years ago

    Distance

    Theres many miles in the word distance
    And it breaks my heart
    Knowing theres a distance
    Between you and me
    I hear your voice on the line
    And I suddenly feel special
    And its like the distance
    Isnt a boardering wall separating us
    I cry when you call
    Because I dont want to lose you
    Because of the distance between us
    And I will be saddened
    If something ever happened to you
    And I cannot be there
    Holding you through it
    Its an endless cycle
    That I always seem to love someone
    Thats so far away
    So please tell me
    If loving you is like distance
    I hope you say no
    Cause man my love
    Is the closest feeling Ive had in forever
    So tell me Jesse
    Is my love for you
    Like distance
    Or can it turn into something
    And not just another heartbreak
    Because like you said
    There aint no miles in love
    But many miles in the word distance

    --**Deicated to Jesse H.**--

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    Learning to Fall

    Shes learning to fall
    Shes learning to ask
    Shes learning what its like
    To face this task
    She is learning still
    To be on her own
    To live far away
    To live all alone.
    Shes learning to cope
    With such a loss as this
    Shes learning to live
    Without that candy kiss

    Shes learning to fall
    Learning to make mistakes
    Shes learning to break
    Learning to fight the stakes
    Shes learning to live
    Learning to live though death
    Learning to breathe
    Through another last breathe
    Shes learning without him
    Shes learning to fall
    Shes trying to forget
    And not to recall

    Shes learning to fall
    Shes learning to live
    Live without hiim
    Live to forgive

    ~sry i didnt take much time on this and it is bad...thats okay. i havent one a contest yet anyways...i might change it later, if i have time. this might be a little confusing, but this reminded me of my grandfather yesterday when my grandmother died andn he took it really hard. they were married a long time and this poem is about a girl who went through the same thing.~

  • IfIhide11
    18 years ago

    can it be hero instead of heroes...if it can I would like the do that one.

    -ifihide11

  • *colorsofmylife*
    18 years ago

    yea that's fine...it can be hero

  • IfIhide11
    18 years ago

    Hero

    You can't always be there. When I fall. Trying to catch me doesn't work at all. I know you care because you're always there. You can't always be there. When I cry. As the tears swell up in my eyes. You're more of a person than I could ever be. You must understand where I am coming from. You want the best, you want me safe and you need to know that it's just not me. You can't always be there. When I am scared. I feel so small, no bigger than an ant, but I don't want you there when I am scared. I don't want you there when I feel like nothing, zip, zero. Please quit trying to be my hero. You must understand. You can't always be there. When I fall.

    -ifihide11

  • Moose
    18 years ago

    7.) ~*`Stuck`*~

    Walking down the blazing streets
    as cities among me burn.
    Living in a world full of hate
    taking the destruction we earn.

    Stuck in this country alone
    once united now divided.
    Democrats and Republicans
    lead us now instead.

    A civilization once full of life
    now uptight after an attack.
    Never letting our guard down
    always looking behind our back.

    This is not how it should be
    always fearing for our lives.
    Worrying about how others see us
    and not worrying about our kids and wives.

    In a country led by a man so deaf
    stuck in a country that is so blind.
    Living in a country so stubborn
    living as the outcast of mankind.

    (C) 2006 Bryce Dressler

    ((Sorry forgot about this contest. Tried to do one as quick as I could.... hopefully its atleast decent.))

  • IfIhide11
    18 years ago

    can i reserve more to life

  • Meggie33
    18 years ago

    ~I'll Be~

    Ill be here still, when you return,
    Ill be here still, for you I yearn.

    Ill be here waiting, through night and day,
    If you look back over your shoulder, you'll see that I stayed.

    Ill be still living, when all else has died,
    Ill be still trying, when I've tried and tried.

    Ill be singing, when I've lost my voice,
    Ill be feeling special, when I know I'm one of your toys.

    Ill be still pretty, when my make-up has washed off,
    Ill still be breathing, when I can barely cough.

    Ill still be your girl, when youre no longer my guy,
    Ill be still smiling, as a tear falls from my eye.

    Ill be still waiting, when you say you won't be back,
    Ill still wait for you, even with all you do lack.

    Ill be around, when nobody else comes near,
    Ill still call you, when youre something no one wants to hear.

    Ill still hug you, when you try to shove me and say no,
    Ill still kiss you, when you tell me I need to go.

    Ill be still loving you, no matter what you say or do,
    even if you don't love me, honey, Ill be loving you!

    ♥♥♥♥♥♥

    **meggie**

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Is this going to be judged.....

  • *colorsofmylife*
    18 years ago

    when all of the titles are done then yes it will be

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    yay im back from vacation! anyway this contest is moving along nicely, nice work everyone so far, this should be a good contest:D

  • Meggie33
    18 years ago

    lalalalalala

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Is this one still going?..

  • LovelyDivine
    18 years ago

    I'm sorry but I can't think of anything for who am i right now...I will try again tonight and let u know tomorrow as soon as I get online.

    ~*Brokenhearted*~

  • DeadlyObsession
    18 years ago

    can i reserve God's Will