Another Poem Game!

  • Goran Rahim
    18 years ago

    everyday
    i was going to school
    by a school bus
    there was this girl,
    so pretty, so nice, so innocent
    gazing at me with a smile,
    today,
    i am so upset
    i did not see her
    cause
    i missed the bus

  • Goran Rahim
    18 years ago

    New Title is

    When I Saw You In My Dream

  • desigirl
    18 years ago

    when i saw you in my dream
    i was so glad
    i ran toward you
    cause you were selling ice cream

    title
    IF You TELL ME I LOVE YOU

  • HOLLY ARMER
    18 years ago

    If you tell me I love you
    I'll puke up my lunch
    especially if you say that
    you love me a bunch

    So just be quiet and
    don't say even a word
    cause I don't wanna
    have to give you the bird

    lmao...Sorry I'm a bit cynical this early in the morning.

    New title: The Magic of Pop Rocks

  • LockedInEternity
    18 years ago

    uhh..pop rocks are a candy right??..well..if its not too bad..not it is:):)

    The magic of pop rocks
    the constant surprise
    their sweet sudden popping.
    it shows in my eyes.

    The crackaling noises
    they sound in my ear.
    this fake flavoured candy,
    To me it is dear:P:P

    he he...hey, u try cumming up with a better one:P...anyways...
    NEXT TITLE:
    My headless rubber chicken:)

  • Jordan
    18 years ago

    OK, so the last post was posted a minute before mine...I like mine, so I'm going to leave it. Sorry to have messed up the flow of this thread. :(

    Slowly pour you
    Into my mouth

    You begin to pop
    I begin to shout

    You never cease
    To amaze me, dear

    Pop rocks you keep
    My mind so clear

    You help me attain
    The highest highs

    I love it when
    You rub my thighs

    You make me scream
    You make me shout

    Pop rocks, I love you
    In my mouth.

    Wow...I umm...Must really subconciously looove pop rocks. Lmao.

    Let's leave the last one.
    Next title: My Headless Rubber Chicken (courtesy of: MaLuV4uIsEnDlEsS)

  • Sondos
    18 years ago

    My headless rubber chicken
    Still stares at me in disgust
    At the antics of these humans
    And other creatures and louse

    He took my heart away and we
    Bonded like candy to sugar
    And i sucked his head away
    Wrung out in his pain he'd curl his
    lips into a poultry pout
    In mockery if he could

    lol i just made it up on the spot

    Next Title: Soap Sculptures

  • RainbowSlider
    18 years ago

    Soap Sculptures

    Clean statues that cry in the rain.
    Statues that never get dirt or pain.
    Immature visions of forgotten art.
    Dramatic extras like unused part.

    Advertising that seeks attention.
    A flower that seeks redemption.
    Mascarading actors with no clue.
    My mind when I thought of you.

    The emptiness of life beyond hope.
    A writer's block given by the Pope.
    Mental obessesions that refrain.
    Unbroken glass on a window pane.

    Carved nightmares with no use.
    Just a concept that can only lose.
    An abomination of idolatry given.
    A statue that can never be forgiven.

    Music that has no refrain ever.
    An angel caught in the weather.
    Stillness that lasts in forever.
    Horror of quills without a feathers

    Next Title: Andromeda's Curse

  • Ashleigh Skye
    18 years ago

    this sounds really kewl but im not to sure what Andromeda is so I dont think I can really write about it.. to bad