!!Contest!!

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    And again I'm making a contest. Very original, I put up titles, you make a poem to it.

    Rules:
    It can be about anyting, except profanity.
    It must be written during one of the past three days. (after the 24th).
    Must be yours (duh).
    Only one poem each.
    And yes, you can reserve a title.

    So here I go, the titles are quite strange, but whatever:
    Titles:

    Ice of Eternity
    Heart of the Ocean DONE
    Dead rose DONE
    Feelings so cold DONE
    Never said I was yours
    Child of the future
    The wild cat
    The lion shield DONE
    Seven deadly sins
    I'm not insane
    I never promised DONE
    The garden of life

    Good luck people, do your best!

  • Wings Of Flames
    18 years ago

    2) Heart Of The Ocean

    She rose her bow to the world,
    And they faintly echoed back,
    With a roar of propellers,
    And her sides painted black,

    In the ice of the majestic sea,
    She broke her steady course,
    She shuddered along the icicle,
    And groaned from the force,

    Water surging under her,
    But still she pushed far on,
    Another hour before her end,
    Until she's finally gone,

    Unsinkable they cried,
    She'll never be pushed down,
    Rose held dearly in the mist,
    While Jack would surely drown,

    Bodies floating by her waist,
    She's gone into the night,
    Jack will stay in her heart,
    For he shall bring her light,

    The necklace not forgotten,
    But lost forever more,
    Through the quacking ripples,
    Upon the ocean floor.

    *The Titanic* unless you couldn't tell
    :P
    Emah

  • MemoirsOfMe
    18 years ago

    Number 10... It should be 'I'm Not Insane' if I'm not mistaken.

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Can I reserve Dead Rose??

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    sure;)

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    can i reserve im not insane?!

  • Little Dot
    18 years ago

    I Never Promised
    by Sarah Drew

    I never promised to love you
    You were the only one
    Who thought it would pull through

    I never promised to be by your side
    I told you I hated you
    But you still tried

    I never promised not to make you cry
    I always laughed at your tears
    I just wanted you to go and die

    I never promised to stay away
    From that other girl
    You saw us together one day

    I never promised I wouldn't tear
    Your heart into little pieces
    It wasn't your heart I wanted to share

    I never promised I wouldn't make fun
    I loved to laugh at you with my friends
    I'm not sorry I broke your heart, hun

    I never promised to lay by your side
    When you tried to take you life
    You should have known I lied

    I never promised to go
    To your funeral
    It was stupid to think I would show

    I never promised to leave
    Flowers on your grave
    I will not even grieve

    -Hope you like it-

  • Tine
    18 years ago

    Feelings So Cold

    I always thought that
    we would grow together old
    but then you scared me by showing
    feelings so cold

    Even when it took you so long
    to finally open up my heart
    your feelings so cold
    torn everything you worked on apart

    But you didn't care
    not even when my head was low
    I wanted to be strong, but to you
    no feelings so cold I could show

    Because I loved you then and now
    I don't really know it anymore
    and your feelings so cold
    pushed me out of the door

    So here I am now today
    lost without you
    and I cannot think of you
    without thinking of your feelings so cold, so blue...

    x

    There you go!! I hope you guys like it;) I tried my best... :) :$

  • Tiny Reader
    18 years ago

    THE LION SHIELD

    Facing up to you
    my prey; driven by my thirst
    for blood and pain.

    Pulsing, exceeding
    the normal rate of a heart
    tracking your scent.

    Killing is my cacoethes
    and I relinquish in your fear.
    You hide behind a frightful light;
    I welcome what I see.
    Your weakness, I pity
    I raise my shield.

    The impuissance you're exerting
    Means little to me
    With this lion shield I hold in front of me
    I have no shame; no guilt.

    Facing up to you
    my prey; driven by my thirst
    for blood and pain.

    Pulsing, exceeding
    the normal rate of a heart
    tracking your scent.

    ---------------------------------------
    This won't be to everyones taste, I'm sure :D

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    very nice people, this is great! Keep it up!

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Dead Rose

    Wandering Earth without a cause
    No hope, no joy, no true life
    Withered down to my very core
    My old burning fire is no more

    Like a dead rose, sorrow takes over
    Nothing to smile about anymore
    naught of beauty, but of thorns
    Only dying colors still adorn

    I've lost to time's little game
    Thought I could outlive fate
    But like always, I was wrong
    tis in sadness I belong

    Surrounded by flocks of golden lilies
    Watching other roses bloom in sight
    Only my petals seem to fade
    Only I seem to lose my color shade

    They all grow taller and taller
    Reaching the sky of heat
    They take all of light
    Leaving me in dark blight

    I'm a dead rose, an unseen pain
    Against all the beauties of the world
    Alone I stand in my own shadow
    Alone I speak with dying woe

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    yay, were getting there people!

    Excellent work, I am highly impressed by what great work you have made with these titles, which I thought were nearly impossible. I am stunned!

    Keep it up!

  • Tine
    18 years ago

    I'll be egoistic enough to say thanks! =D come on everyone else.. :$ say thanks! =D

    x

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    You have every reason to say that:)

    Youre all doing an amazing job:)

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    I will close the contest on friday, and probablt judge it on saturday... Just so you know!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    hi guys, im not gunna b able to write the poem i reserved im really busy cuz im leevin outta town nex week. sry:( good luck every1 else

  • Tine
    18 years ago

    I'm sure you would've done a fantastic job!! I hope you'll like it where you're going! :)

    x