EoB
18 years ago
I have been sitting here for about 1 hour, engulfed by this profound silence, not caring for what time it actually is. I have read some of the most beautiful poems there ever was, loosing myself entirely in their sublety and beauty. Then suddenly, I realize that the whole room is enlit by this wonderful, red light. I turn to the window and behold a red sun rising from behind the mountains far away. The clouds look as if they have been inflamed, and just now, some hundred birds flew across the sky, making this very moment as close to perfect as I ever would want it. |
Steven Beesley
18 years ago
^^^Then write a poem EOB! |
Ed or Ian Henderson
18 years ago
There's something simply stunning about the moment of dawn. It's as though the entire planet becomes something else entirely. The sudden birdsong, where if you've been awake all night you'll be instantly aware of it. The moment the streetlights shut down, as if commanded to do so by the sun appearing over the horizon. The clink of milk bottles. Neighbourhood alarm clocks slammed onto snooze. |
Liquid Dreams
18 years ago
yes! you should right a love or nature poem to express the way your feeling in this moment. =) |
Same Year Reply
18 years ago
wow, that sounds gorgeous, i can imagi-- **ah** |
Same Year Reply
18 years ago
HIPPIES RULE |
Ed or Ian Henderson
18 years ago
Oh if only they did... |