~*Ravey's NOT Title like contest!*~

oooooooookay...

I have a contest for ya'll that's not title related. WoOt!
The deal is I have 13 words or phrases, to be used in a poem, and you must use at least 6(that's SIX!) of them in your poem. I'll judge on how well the words or phrases fit, how well it's written, and how much I personally like the poem.

Rules are as usual. One poem per person, can be about anything, profanity is allowed... must be your own. blah blah blahness.

PRIZES!!!!!!~ WoOt!

1st- 6 r/r/c
2nd-5 r/r/c
3rd- 4 r/r/c
4th-3 r/r/c
HM-2 r/r/c

everone gets 1 r/r/c for entering...

there may or may not be one or more winners per place...

~~~~~WORDS OR PHRASE THINGS~~~~~~~

1. I'm lost here
2. I don't need you
3. phoenix
4. He walked away, and I died inside.
5. Give me another chance to break your heart
6. vicarious
7. Hope less
8. kiss me kill me
9. Take me away
10. Can you save me from you?
11. baa Baa black sheep
12. fate in darkness
13. Give me pumpkin pie, or give me death!

I hope those do. I was in kind of a rush....

Contest will end in about one week... I will judge sometime within three days of it ending.

Thankz ya'll.
Ravyn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Don't Walk Away

Hope less and live more.
I wish I could.
I've been wishing a lot...
Since the day he left me.
He walked away, and I died inside.
Now I'm lost here.
I don't need you, is what I long to say.
Kiss me kill me,
just take away my pain.
Would you give me another change to break your heart?
Or can you save me from you?
It's all vicarious.
And I still need you.

Revenge

His kisses are like poison.
He walked away, and I died inside.
but like a phoenix i rose from my ashes.
Ready to live,
and learn from that mistake.

I don't need you!
Thats what I said;
I'm lost here.
Take me away,
to where the sun will shine again.
They were my plans
but then i saw her kissing you
and felt a vicarious joy.

i became completely jealous of her.
i still want you for my own!
nothing can save me from this love
unless
Can you save me from you?
maybe fate, in this darkness, can can cause you to save me.

ill let you kiss me, kill me
just be mine for a short little while
give me another chance to break you heart.

A Lost Songbird

Life bursts forth
greeting fate in darkness
elegant and beautiful
the pheonix sings

An unexpected surprise
the harmonious creature
voices not a melody but
baa baa black sheep

It melts in the ears,
floats in the air,
takes me away
to my fantasy island

But its hopeless i fear
for i'm lost here
with three bags full
and a pile of singing ashes

"Give Me Pumpkin Pie, Or Give Me Death!"

Thanksgiving memories
of a broken family
that gives no thanks to me
for all these vicarious activities
It's hopeless telling me to hope less
I'm not here

Kiss me kill me
baa Baa black sheep
Take me away
I leased my fate in darkness

Father walked away
He walked away,
and I died inside
It's hopeless telling me to hope less
I leash my fate in darkness
Can you save me from you?

Like a fickle phoenix
You rise to give me another chance
to break your heart
I don't need you
I don't need you

~Baa Baa Black Sheep~

Baa baa black sheep deep within my soul,
clouded by the soot, emitted by the coal.
Hidden in the darkness, lies my hopeless fate,
yet a pheonix lights the way, to my final date.

It's fire is my passion, taking me away,
awaiting what I long for, final judgement day.
Ever since you left, I've been dying inside,
bottling up emotions, I wish I didn't hide.

I knew I didn't need you, even from the start,
yet I let you break, my already broken heart.
I'm still lost without you and your nefarious ways.
you've left me empty-handed, in a vicarious daze.

~Sean Dohr~

wow... reminds me of my halloween costume AGAIN lol! (Literally... I went to a convention..)

Cruel, numb night

I don't need you.
I can handle myself.
How could you even care?
You threw me into the dark...
The dark, cold, empty room
Now I walk, holding onto the wall
I'm lost here
Where are you?
Help...
...Get your hand off of my mouth...
Remove your lips from mine...
Baa baa black sheep...
You're still stuck on feeling dark...
Tell me, is this my ending?
Fate in darkness?
Kiss me, kill me...
Am I just another love to you?
Hopeless...
I wish you could change
Bolted doors and tight-nailed windows
Can you save me from you?
He walked away, and I died inside
I wish that he wasn't you
Give me another chance to break your heart
And this time I'll make sure it can't be glued
Right now I know your jealousy
Drove you to take me away
To your sick world for eternity...

When I Said Goodbye

He walked away and I
died inside. I say this
to myself every day of
my poor miserable life
without you.

I dont need you... i think.
but the truth is, I do.
my broken heart and
upset and lost soul are from
the pain you caused me. It was
fate at first, then fate in darkness.
I thought there was nothing to
lose, yet i lost everything.

I'm lost here without you.
My cries are for your love,
which you ripped away, and
it seemed less than unfair.
"Can you save me from you?"
i write in that letter, that last
one of my pain before the
razor hits my skin.

"Take me away" i whisper as
the cold hands of Death grip my
throat and tighten... its darker now,
yet i still see you laughing at my
pain and sorrow, and then
as I watch from my little window,
my own funeral,
a silent tear falls down your cheek,
and i wonder if you really loved me...

the way i loved you, when i said goodbye.

WOW...

really hard contest Ravyn... but i DID IT!!! WoOT!!!!

Wow. That seems hard.. I'll give it a go. =]

Pip xxx

so how many days are left?

3 days-ish... I think.

"Another chance?"
by Wings of an Angel

I'm lost here, cause youre killing me.
I no longer know if were meant to be.
Help me understand, take me away,
So I can know what I have to say.
Kiss me, Kill me, do what you please,
So I can know if there's love in the breeze.
Is it hopeless, or is there a chance?
is it love or just a summer romance?
Do you love me, do I love you?
Should I feel happy or just feel blue?
Do I need you, or do I not?
I remembered once, now I forgot.
Give me another chance to break youre heart,
So then I'll know if it was there from the start.

This was a fun contest:)

ok, hope i'm not to late! i just got home from vacation like 3 hrs ago! ahhh so tired!

You think that without you, I can’t survive,
That without you near, my life’ll take a nose dive.
Well, Mr. AJ, I don’t need you at all,
I’m still in love with you, but I won’t fall.

Someday I pray that you’ll take me away,
Love me forever, from day to day.
Until then my fate is in darkness,
So I guess all I should do, is hope less.

I ask of one thing, before you turn your back,
Kiss me, Kiss me, then leave me in the black.
I must admit I’m lost here, but what can I do?
But AJ, I ask, can you save me from you?

~*W.C?*~
ya i used 7 o well:P

yay that was a fun contest! when are you judging?
xxALLYxx

I'll probably judge on the 14th or the 15th. I'm glad that you quys like this contest

Baa baa black sheep
by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

Baa baa black sheep
with coal black wool
hides in the night
just wait, you'll see,
your lurking fate in darkness
out he'll come
acting innocent
"I'm lost here"
he'll say to you
"please help me
so the wolves don't take me away"
thinking he's hopeless without you
you give him consent
you'll tell him you wanted a sheep,
you love their wool
then you shout
KISS ME
KILL ME
and out his lights go
for he was an impostor
for you are the true
Baa Baa Black Sheep

HEY LADIEKINS!!!!!!

since when are you RAVEY!?!?!?!?!?!? hmmm????

just wonderin...

lol...wow.

Since I got bored with Rave! lol.

oh... okay...

yeah... umm I think I'm gonna judge tonight or tomarrow.

woohoo *dances*

~!*******RESULTZ*****!~******************

1st- HeartzOnIce
2nd- Allanah Rayne pearson
3rd- ~*Who Cares?*~
4th- silhouette, of something unimaginable
HM- Sean Dohr
HM- iNviSibLe 2 u

and everone else gets one r/r/c!!!!!! Wo.Ot!!!!!!!

Good job everybody!

yay 3rd *dances* thnx:D

I finished many comentses, but I will finish the rest tomarrow... or later tonight...

I finished them all.!!!!!!!!!1 Wo.Ot! I love reading ya'll's poetry!

omg omg omg i won lol :o thank u's!

thanks and congrats to all

Wo.Ot!