TITLE CONTEST~**

can i reserve "Perfections Only Flaw" thanks

Can I please reserve "Fading Away" ..Thanks. xx.

Perfection's Only Flaw

[Verse 1]
Swallow these tears,
that strangle your soul.
You can light the fire
but you'll always be cold.
The day is the night's accomplice,
To make this disaster.
Carve your name into hope
But you'll just die faster.

[Chorus]
Withered skin and starving flesh
The beauty of a wh**e,
Hunger, the control took over
You're Perfection's Only Flaw.

[Verse 2]
The acid fills your mouth,
Spilling through your teeth.
Infected your own life
From what you kept beneath.
Your bones rip through
Your sick, pasty skin.
You wanted control
But you'll never win.

[Chorus]
Withered skin and starving flesh
The beauty of a wh**e,
Hunger, the control took over
You're Perfection's Only Flaw.

[Bridge]
Lost in your lies.
Created your demise.
In beauty's deception,
You've lost perfection.

[Chorus]
Withered skin and starving flesh
The beauty of a wh**e,
Hunger, the control took over
You're Perfection's Only Flaw.
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And just to let you know i love the titles...
hope you have fun judging cause i liked writing :)
kt.

Lost Love

It is a cold night
No man is keeping her warm
Her tear drops turn to ice
Her spirit is untold.

Her head bowed down
She tries to imagine
That this is a bad dream,
Her heart is broken
She cries out in plea.

How could such hate
Brake internal piece?
For she has just lost love
Of the man who she thought
Was everything she needs.

Oh the pain that dwells
Deep inside
She can not speak
For she is at the
End of her peak.
She gave a man her love
But he spat it back
In her face.
She is always getting hurt
She has lost love for the last time.

Her heart will be covered
So it will not brake again
His eyes will not shed
Not one single tear.
He her heart
She will be alone
Good bye cruel world
She has lost love.

Can i reserve 'Stronger'? ill write it by hand first then ill post it on here when im done.

Merci!

xLaurenx

I'm on vacation right now.Can I reserve Imprinted in Pain

can i reserve "another lonely night"? thanks!

4] Fading Away.

Can you see me slowly fading away,
My presence drifting into the distance?
The tears I've cried no longer display,
The pain that I feel through all the silence.
My mouth is sewn shut so words cannot spray,
Of what is trapped inside of my conscience.
Would you rather have me slip down and fall,
Or should I never say goodbye at all?

Can you feel all of the pain that I feel,
The throbbing ache that is within my mind?
Are you aware of what my lies reveal,
Or have you now become completely blind?
All of my truth to you seems too unreal,
And that's why you don't try to dig and find.
Will you reach deep and force it out of me,
Or are you just going to leave me be?

Can you hear of this help that I crave for,
As I am screaming it towards your ears?
Begging and crawling all over the floor,
Still reaching for your hand while I'm in tears.
Being pushed back; I can't take anymore,
Rejection is one of my biggest fears.
Save me from who you have made me become,
Because you know that you're not the victim.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

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Ottava Rima is a poem where the stanzas consist of eight
lines each. Each line has a ten -or- eleven syllable count.
The rhyming scheme for Ottava Rima is as follows:

abababcc
dededeff
ghghghii
And so on for as many stanzas as you wish
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Could I reserve surrender please?

10 More to go. woo! =D

~*~"Another Lonely Night"~*~

Here I sit, all alone
Just waiting for you
You said that you'd be here
Now I'm feeling blue

You've hurt me so much
Times too many to count
Too many tears I've cried
Such an immense amount

I should've known you lied
That you wouldn't be there
But I can't believe it, you see
I love you, my dear

So I sit here in pain
And pray I'll be alright
I guess it will be
Another lonely night

Just when I gave up
There was a knock at the door
I thought it was you
The one I'd been waiting for

But standing in front of me
Surely was not you
It was someone else
Who said his words were true

He said there was an accident
And although many tried
No one could save you
And sadly, you had died

He gave me his sorrows
And said his goodbyes
He left me alone
He left me to cry

So I sit here in pain
And pray I'll be alright
I guess it will be
Another lonely night

Copyright (C): Rhianna

{Sorry if it's a little long! I hope it's okay...}
~rhi

i'm sorry that i posted lyrics and you didnt want any =S

CAN I PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!! RESERVE LAST GOODBYE PLEASE!!! i got a good idea, lol PLEASE?! lol

Surrender:

Surrender is a nasty word
that says we couldn't take it
'Surrender' reads the weak man's sign
declares he couldn't make it.

Wisdom is not giving up
Surrender need not cripple
In the lake of life my friend,
Your doubt won't cause a ripple.

Knowing when you've lost the fight
Is winning half the war
Knowing that you'll be all right
Is what you're fighting for.

Knowing when your day is done
Will stop your hands from shaking.
Knowing when to look away
will stop your heart from breaking

Knowing when to turn and run,
to stifle your hurt laughter
Is knowing how to save your soul
for the dream that might come after.

Surrender is a nasty word
that's says we couldn't make it
Wisdom is the war zone where
we learn we cannot fake it.

*crap*... how come my poem says edit and not answer???

{11}~~~BEAUTIFUL~~~{11}
By: Bryce Dressler

B is for the way
you broke me down.
You ripped my heart
you made me drown.

E is for your cold
heartless embrace.
Once full of love
now full of disgrace.

A if for your actions
the ones behind my back
the ones that tore me apart
and took the love that I lack.

U is for the way
you made living unbearable.
You wrecked me emotionally
and made me unstable.

T is for the torture
that you put me through.
because when I said I love you
you said I love you too.

I is for the way
you made me incapable.
The way you made loving you
nearly inescapable.

F is for my fate
after you left my life
when you said yes to him
and became his wife.

U is for the way
you lied to me
how you said we were perfect
and, me, you couldnt leave.

L is for the love
that we no longer share.
Something once so beautiful
now something I despair.

(C) 2006 Bryce Dressler

Shadow
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Size 16 to 8
Didn't take long
She just couldn't wait
Though she knows it's wrong

See her bones
Show through her skin
She's not alone
But she won't let me in

I reach out my hand
But she resists
There's nothing grand
About slitting your wrists

There's nothing clever
In your happiness' theft
Though I endeavour
A shadow's all thats left.

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Good Luck everyone.

Peace. [Sole]

Imprinted in Pain

*This is Tears of Heaven* by the way

Burning Heartache carved from coal
A speck of sanity losing last control
Every pearl wall shows dripping paint
Gushing red faces growing faint

Images of knives inscribed within
Spouting cracks hiding ill-fated sin
Sober pictures crooked on the wall
Doors banging from the wind's call

Glass scattered around the ground
Burning soots piled in a mound
Every turn of head imprinted in pain
Every happiness going down the drain

OMG! I got 2nd. =D Tehe. Sphank you. =P And congrats to the other winners.

Any of my latest poems would be fine. =) Thanks again.

ooo Thankyou for the HM XD

if you could do Bad Day (diary of abuse) that would be appreciated! Thank you!

Congrats to everyone!!

thanks for the hm

any poem you like. thanks