!!Title Contest!!

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you know how it goes, write a poem to the title.
(These are titles from not so famous songs...)

Titles:
-The Heart and the Shape
-Blue Eyed Suicide ~DONE
-Paper Wings ~DONE
-Bloodless~ DONE
-Trapped in the Wake of a Dream ~DONE
-Back in Your System ~DONE
-Nowhere Kids ~ RESERVED
-God's Army ~DONE
-The Art of Breaking ~DONE
-Gasoline Rainbow
-A Beautiful Lie ~DONE
-Say Your Last Goodbye ~ DONE
-Paperthin Hymn

The contest will close when all poems are complete OR the 22 of July

Titles can be reserved for 2 days

Rules:
1. Poem MUST be new
2. The title of the poem must be one of those listed above
3. One poem per title
4. One poem per person
5. Your own work
6. Any length

Have fun!

Prizes:
1st: 4r/r/c
2nd: 3 r/r/c
3rd: 1/r/r/c

OH OH OH !!! CAN I RESERVE BLUE EYED SUICIDE! I think I have a good idea for that one. lol i'll have it done soon i promise

You sure can =D.

Blue-Eyed Suicide
By: Bryce Dressler

She wears her hair in a ponytail
as she pulls it aside like a veil.
Revealing her eyes showing life inside
the love that is my blue eyed suicide.

Loving and caring brought only more pain
after all that I tried my attempts were in vain.
Any shot that I had was a shot in the dark
of begining a relationship and igniting the spark.

Friends with benefits, that's all we became
bringing back pain that was all the same.
Watching you love him was the hardest thing to do
watching your heart mend as mine split in two.

Every kiss it became more clear to me
that your love for me you couldnt guaruntee.
The many tears ive cried, do not mean a thing
ignoring the cries that these tears bring.

Knowing it'll never be just me and you
is the problem that tears my soul in two.
Deciding between your well-being or mine
or living without the love so divine.

I've missed the chance to fufill these dreams
and to fufill my life as though it seems.
Because without the love thats in her eyes
shall be the cause of my blue eyed suicide.

(C) 2006 Bryce Dressler

((I dont like this extremely well, so i might pull a quick one later and re-write this lol.))

Shoot.. now im going to cry.. i just wrote a poem. and when i submitted it.. it dissappeared...

-cries-

xLaurenx...

-goes back to drawing(writing) board-

I want to request Paper Wings please

Paper Wings

The little girl looks out in the world,
But all she sees is rain.
So she sings a little lullaby,
To help rid herself of pain.

Sitting in the windowsill,
The little girl, she sings.
She sings about her pain, and loss
She sings about her paper wings..

*The life that i've been living,
Has left my soul withered and worn,
and because of this wretched rain,
My paper wings are torn.*

No one hears her lovely voice,
Well, no body seems to care
in the broken home she lives,
No one is ever there..

So the little girl sings to the world,
Hoping maybe, someone will hear,
Praying someone will help her to leave
And that her wings can be repaired.

i dont like it.. but i lost the one i did.. so now i cry.

xLaurenx

Lauren I requested Paper Wings.. ITS MY POEM!

Paper Wings

I got paper wings
That cant fly very good
But there enough
To keep flying
Higher every time Im falling
They pull me up
And keep me going
Making me have dreams
Of a place much better then this
A land of fairy tells
And unreal creatures
I escape my pain
With my paper wings

can i request Say Your Last Goodbye??

darn i wanted that...*sigh* i'm gunna do beautiful lie then if ne1 does it i bite u..-.-

~4ever-n-ever~ and Lauren, can both have Paper Wings due to a mess up

Callie, Say your last goodbye has already been reserved so you will have to pick again

come on people, please enter... they're good titles

im busy right this second but ill do it in a while and submit it! dont worry:D

that is absolutly fine, any style that you like :)

Great work!!

Still plenty of titles to choose from people.. and good luck to all!

~*Who Cares?*~ and Póετε§Š Call Me Glen-Duh! you need to submit your entries before i come on next or your titles will no longer be reserved.

I'd Like to reserve nowhere Kids. can I ?
thankss..

x

AHHH IM SRY! i completely lost inspiration! :( if i come up w/ sumthin 4 1 of ur titles, i will post it later if it isnt taken good luck every1 sryagain

Yep thats fine Tine!

Poetess i will leave yours reserved for one more day to see if you can finsh

Who Cares, thats fine, don't worry about it. When you get more inspiration, you can reserve again :)

God's army

Winged blessed two by two,
Marching disarmed to dawn,
Clouded plains above us,
For today the sky is born,

Winged sinners one by one,
Marching armed to dusk,
Firey plains below us,
Today a stabbing tusk,

White golden gentle beings,
Feather wings of softest bird,
The stars shall cry no more,
Angels lifting voices concurred,

Black rusted horrific scenes,
Leather hard, winged of bat,
Flames lick at their skin,
Their souls all run flat,

Angel's bow their heads to prayer,
And whisper Lord to forgive,
The beings of the sin,
In heaven let them live,

Sinner's bow their heads to blow,
And pull the trigger to end all,
It's ended before it began,
Two by two angels fall.

hope thats ok,
good luck peeps.
~Emah

Can I reserve the Art of Breaking?

The Art of Breaking

Submit to the vow of human breaking
Yield to the art of scraping skin
Learn to tighten the veins from bleeding
Start the torture from within

First their tender yearning heart
Then drive their brain insane
Watch as their bones fall apart
Wait as they scream in pain

Conjoin blood, skins and veins
Into a pot of bloodthirsty taste
Drinking, licking away the shames
Leaving none to waste

Once they plea and beg for death
Carve spells into their eyes
Choke their neck from another breath
A hanging mouth in need to cry

Finally time will wither away their soul
Burning it slowly in a ferocious way
Printing the words of death mask's toll
Unconciously falling endlessly away

ok new request! i got inspiration n i already started it! Trapped in the wake of a dream. ill b done in a few.

ok im dun..its not very good tho...

Trapped in the Wake of a Dream

Trapped in the wake of a dream, I can’t get out,
Stuck in the darkness as I cry and pout.
When suddenly, your face appears, as you come to me,
You tell me “it’ll be alright” as you hold me tightly.

You pick me up, and sweep my tears from the floor,
Grab my hand and pull me towards this large door.
I ask him what it is; he says, “Just wait my sweet”
As he picks me up off of my feet.

Pushes me in, back into the darkness,
I cry out as I see light less and less.
Trapped again, it’s De Ja Vu,
I’m stuck in the darkness, because of you….

~*Who Cares?*~

Poetess yep you made it in time =D, thanks for entering too everyone!!

There is 5 poems left!

And Who Cares you can always edit what you write as long as its editted before the contest closes :) I'm glad you could get something in!

I wanna reserve Beautiful Lie

Sure! XD

come on guys!

These are really good

I hope i can still do beautiful lie, because im almost done it just took longer than i thought it would.. oh if you didnt notice i changed from "Meaghen"

Beautiful Lie

Our friendship or our romance
in the summer of 1962
was the summer i'll never forget
it was the summer i met you

Hot summer days,
& sneeking out at night
swimming , in the lake
with nothing on but the moonlight

Laying in the grass
& wishing on the stars
promising "forever"
& calling this summer "ours"

Holding me in your arms
& dancing in the street
You came out of no where
and swept me off my feet

Wrapped up in a blanket
& saying the words "I love you"
I just simply smiled
and said i loved you to

That was the night
Thosse lines were crossed
The night we found eachother
and our innocence was lost

I woke up with you
next to me lying in my bed
You told me you couldnt do this anymore
you were in over your head

You kissed me on the cheek
& said good-bye
I couldnt understand,
how could this happen, & why?

years later i got my answer
She was pregnant with your son
You told me i was the one you loved
but you had to be there for him, you couldnt just run

Now that i know
im not sure i wanted to know why
I was just a girl
wrapped up in another mans beautiful lie

Bloodless.

i stay in the darkness, where i belong.
away from the human's where everything's wrong.
i used to be human, or so i thought.
but despite all my disguises, it all was for naught.

one cannot run from oneself, i am my own enemy.
i can't change who i am, i am what you see.
a creature made only of flesh and bone.
there is nothing more, than this which is shone.

if i deny the truth, only pain will i find.
if i lie to myself, i only kill my mind.
i cut you, you bleed, cut me, there's nothing.
i am but a vessel, a non circled ring.

i do not exist, nor should i be with breath.
i live with no purpose. a life without death.
no heart to be broken, no mind to expand.
but still i can feel it, like a wandering sand.

will i fade away, turn into a memory.
what else am i good for, at least a story.
shall i be remembered, shall i finally walk free?
shall i finally laugh happily? shall i finally be?

GOOD JOB EVERYONE- It is the 22nd of July therefore Contest is CLOSED, I will Judge and Award Prizes ASAP.

Well I've judged, I don't know when I can do prizes but I will as soon as I can.

There were MANY wonderful poems, it was VERY hard to choose especially out of the 3 winners and which place they should get.

1st. Back into Your System by dreadingtime
2nd God's Army by Wings of Flames
3rd The Art of Breaking by Noni Wang

Congrats All Yout Peeps Who Won.

much love

xLaurenx

aww thanks
w00t
lol