Yet Another New Contest

ok i ended my last contest so decided to start another one. i have 10 titles for you to choose from, they aren't very good but you'll have to deal with it, and the contest will end either after all the titles have been taken or i feel like ending it because i am the judge and i can do that.
You can reserve a title for 2 days then it must be completed. When reserving or writting your poem it MUST have the number by the title

Here are the titles

1- One more time (DONE)
2- Longing to break free (DONE)
3- Out of Here (reserved)
4- No More (reserved
5- The devil's daughter (DONE)
6- Fallen from Heaven (DONE)
7- Heaven v.s Hell (reserved)
8- Story of my Heart (DONE)
9- Rose of Death (DONE)
10- Bound Heart (DONE)

You can do anything with these titles but no profanity!

Prizes-
1st place -comments on 5 poems
2nd place- comments on 4 poems
2rd place- comments on 3 poems

Good luck to everyone and have fun!

can I reserve #1 One More Time

you got it

can i reserve #4 No More?

May I reserve Heaven vs. Hell??

Apologies! I was away for the weekend, and don;t have time to write at the moment. Again, I'm really sorry for any inconvenience I've caused.

Peace.

I got #8, story from my heart.

Hollywood

take that back, i don`t want it

can I reserve #9, Rose of death?

can you unreserve one more time...I thought I had a good idea for it but I can't write it, and I don't want to keep the opportunity from someone else...sorry

ummm.... I feel really bad, reading all the people that want to un-reserve... but I must be one of them... So can you un-reserve #9. Someone else will be able to write it a lot better then I can... I just have no inspiration right now... Sowry...

Ravyn =(

Can i reserve #5 the devils daughter please.

Heres my entry:

The Devil's Daughter

The screams.
Horrible music to my ears.
The Flames.
Burning holes through my skin.
The eyes.
Sending me evil leers.

The lying.
Getting me out of sticky situations.
The doubting.
I'm the bad one here.
The knife.
Getting me into many complications.

The screams.
The flames.
The eyes.
The lying.
The doubting.
The knife.
All lead me to
The Kill.

He's laying there motionless.
Blood seeping out.
The bloodied knife beside him.
There's no more doubt.

I'm the murderer.
I enjoyed the slaughter.
That must make me
The Devil's Daughter.

Can I reserve One more time

#1 One more Time

Breaking, cracking splitting away
One more time my heart starts to sway
Slipping, falling drowning in pain
Every break up is always the same

One more time my heart is empty
And again I mumble to him sorry
One more time I sleep in tears
Wishing I could hold him near

Time replays itself one by one
Showing all the mistakes I've done
Regretting how feelings got in the way
keeping me from the things I needed to say

Once again I find myself wondering why
After every broken heart I must cry
Whether it was my fault or his
No matter who, it all came to this

If it happens just one more time
I will no longer feel alive
It's not worth it to lose my heart
Only resulting more love to fall apart

can i please reserve "No More"? it's been two days, and Who Cares hasn't turned it in yet.

Can I please reserve "Fallen From Heaven" ? ..Thanks. xx.

~Fallen From Heaven (Villanelle)~

When I saw you fall from heaven, all my morals fled,
carnal desires flooded my mind, soon we'd be alone.
Erected thoughts that once stood dormant, now became undead.

My concerns with chastity, turned to amorality instead,
sexual verbal libel, brought on an oddly manipulative tone.
When I saw you fall from heaven, all my morals fled.

Bestial avidities were promptly, but passionately bred,
possibilities of platonic relations, were permanently postponed.
Erected thoughts that once stood dormant, now became undead.

As you lied upon my mattress, your legs began to spread,
our intentions were identical, leaving no emotions shown.
When I saw you fall from heaven, all my morals fled.

An angelic experience, from the beginning to the end,
left our names and forgoing histories perpetually unknown.
Erected thoughts that once stood dormant, now became undead.

What you thought as eternal innocence, bled celestial red,
took what was once solely yours, and kept it as my own.
When I saw you fall from heaven, all my morals fled,
erected thoughts that once stood dormant, now became undead.

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-A villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyme scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

-The first and third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem, and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines).

~Sean Dohr~

Oops, sorry super girl... You don't have to count my poem.

if super girl doesn't post it soon i will accept yours, if she does i may accept both but i don't know yet

..I'm just about finished it. I only did half last night cause I had a headache.. but I'm finishing it now. =)

Fallen From Heaven.

You had fallen from heaven straight into my arms,
Egniting my heart with all your seductive charms.
Spreaded your caring angel wings over my head,
Protecting me and saying what had not been said.

Those three simple words that I was longing to hear,
Were right infront of my blind eyes but wasn't clear.
The smoke disappeared leaving a vision of you,
A strong feeling of love that seemed long overdue.

The way that you would shelter my soul from the rain,
As you would clear all of the clouds ridding my pain.
You'd feel and heal the beating of my broken heart,
Painting a smile on my face like a piece of art.

Sweet tunes would play as I would look into your eyes,
And I could see the man who was hidden in disguise.
The savour who had fallen from heaven above,
Is now the angel who helped me believe in love.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

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Sorry if I took awhile, and if it's bad, Lol..

all right i am going to try something different and try being nice, i will accept both Fallen From Heavan poems though i am only doing this because it was an accident that two got posted.

Thanks so much!

come on guys, there are still titles left, i'm trying to let as many people enter as i can

i dont remember entering this contest so i kinda cant think of wat 2 do and its been a way long time so um other person hoo asked u can have it sorry about that:(

Maybe the person doing this contest should close it..... it's been going forever.

it dosent seem right
You were young,
Death is near,
you were with us all a week ago,
seeing you smile,
hearing you laugh,
seeing your face,
made all of our days turn to Sunshine,
now that you're gone,
i don't think things will ever be the same,
i don't think this pain will ever go away,
all of us sit here in shock still,
as hours pass by,
we cry and weep,
but nothing will change,
nothing will bring you back,
you're gone for good,
And some of just sit here,
and think why,
did this happen to you??,
you were so young,
And while others,
are sad because the didn't even say good bye,
and all we have left are memories,
some bad or good,
but we will hold them in our hearts forever,
and some of us sit,
and wish we had gotten to know him a lot better,
we cant bring you back,
theirs nothing we can do,
but pray and hope that you are listening to the,
words that we say to you,
and hope that you're watching over us this very moment,
we miss you,
we love you,
we all wish that this didn't happen,
but god wanted another angel,
and it was you,
and now when ever i remember you..
i smile, and laugh,
and cry,

i am so sorry guys, my computer broke so i haven't been able to get on. again, sorry!

Nikki what title did you use

is Bound Heart already taken?

Bound Heart

I have a heart and it is bound
With an eternal love that I found

You opened my heart for the world to see
While setting my life up to be free

One talk from you is all it took
To know that I was forever hooked

Now I want you more and more everyday
And how much I love you is what I will always say

Happiness was brought back into my life
Which is so different from all the usual strife

You are more to me than just a lover or friend
You are an angel from above that I commend

Your love is worth more than any treasure or gold
And I truly believe you were the one who broke the "mold"

So my heart will be bound for eternity
With the love you have given me so sternly!

ok i think i will end it, my computer has been messing up these past few days so i couldn't get on

The Winners Are

1st place- Rose of Death
2nd place- Longing to Break free
3rd place One last time

Congrads to everyone!