Epitaph Contest

  • ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ
    18 years ago

    CLOSED~CLOSED~CLOSED~CLOSED~CLOSED~CLOSED

    Alright this contest is an epitaph contest!!

    *An epitaph is a brief poem consisting of four
    lines inscribed on a tombstone praising a
    deceased person, usually with rhyming lines.*
    Rules:
    1) Has to be newly written
    2) 2 epitaphs per poet
    3) Have fun

    Prizes:

    1st: r/r/c 6 poems
    2nd: r/r/c 5 poems
    3rd: r/r/c 4 poems
    4th: r/r/c 3 poems
    HM: r/r/c 2 poems

    Have fun contest will end July 28th!!

    Here is an example:

    Here she lies (Epitaph)
    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Here she lies not making a sound,
    soon to be quietly resting under ground.
    A wonderful mother and amazing wife,
    now has went to heaven for eternal life.

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Can you give an example?

  • RetroRavey
    18 years ago

    To a suffering soul.

    Every moment is saddening,
    Missing you, forever more.
    But when God closed my window,
    For you he opened a door.

    To Emliana

    Sister dearest, child of the world,
    I miss you darling, my precious girl.
    So rest in peace, from the very start,
    And watch over me with your warm heart.

  • RetroRavey
    18 years ago

    hope that's what you're looking for...

  • RetroRavey
    18 years ago

    nvm

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    To Little Brother

    Sterling gleams in your eyes
    Smiling face full of soft glee
    Talented, good-hearted child
    Will you ever think of me

    To Family

    A heart held within each other
    A eternal love never to be lost
    Memories of happiness and sad
    Saving each other with every cost

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    Sweetheart

    The spikes of death have gotten you,
    Your spirit is here, but your body through.
    You'll remain in my mind until the day I die,
    For I'll see you again, for now goodbye.

    My Friend

    Came on this Earth, with a glimmer of hope,
    But you took your life with a hook and rope.
    Not sure why, but I miss you so much,
    I miss your love and friendly touch.

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Heavens Gates {Epitaph}

    Through the heavens gates is where you shall be found,
    Since your precious heart now rests in peace underground.
    Loved ones never had the chance to say their goodbye,
    But they know you're watching over them from up high.

    Copyright © Natalie 2006

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    An epitaph is a brief poem consisting of four
    lines inscribed on a tombstone praising a
    deceased person, usually with rhyming lines.
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    {My first go. I thought it'd be easy.. but it was actually really hard..}

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Since we were aloud to do two.. I did another one. =)

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    Eleven Months {Epitaph}

    Your presence still lingers here in these fields of hope,
    While shining your light helping all those around cope.
    Though you did pass eleven months after your birth,
    We'll always cherish the time you had here on earth.

    Copyright © Natalie 2006

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    An epitaph is a brief poem consisting of four
    lines inscribed on a tombstone praising a
    deceased person, usually with rhyming lines.
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  • holly
    18 years ago

    my courageous soldier, without hesitation

    fought to his death, all for his nation

    believing that lie,that fake story

    Dulce et decorum est Pro patria mori.

    {{the last line is latin meaning to die for the fatherland is glorious i got that line from a wilfred owen poem but the epitaph is mine}}

    i miss you, my very best friend

    you protected me to the very end

    i only am because of what you did

    but how i wish you could have lived

  • blissfulbearje
    18 years ago

    lil sis....

    Only four years old,
    With a heart of gold.
    We still see your inocent smile,
    And hear your sweet laughter.

    Angle from the start

    She has a beautiful soul,
    Let this dove fly away,
    Free her spirit in the sky,
    Let her have her say.

    * this is my first attempt at a epitaph so i hope i did it right. xoxox*

  • RetroRavey
    18 years ago

    these epitaphs are making me sad... =(

  • Jordan
    18 years ago

    A Mother's Plea to the Heavens

    Starry skies, hold him tight,
    Keep him warm - safe at night.
    Cradle him in the darkness,
    Protect his soul with all your might.

    The Prisoner's Epitaph

    Here lies a restless man
    Forever caught in the devil's strong gaze,
    Shall you ever tread upon his grave
    You will, too be tortured 'till the end of your days.

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    I will never forget

    The moment when I first laid eyes on you
    I knew the world would never end unless you did, too
    I will never forget our sweet memories forever
    And I promise never to forget you, ever

    Dearly Beloved

    To hold you in my arms one last time
    Before you left my side
    Was a treasure bright as heaven
    Here my beloved lies

  • Oscar
    18 years ago

    little bro

    i know that you loved me you know i loved you too
    and that is why this little verse, is going out to you.
    your death was the story of my greatest woe
    just remember i loved you, my sweet little bro.

    My Wife

    honey please don't blame me, it was not of my will.
    i didn't know that all you did was eat a sleeping pill.
    and if i could, please know, that you i would revive
    for i am truly sorry that we buried you alive.

  • ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ
    18 years ago

    im sorry i forgot i made this contest! um yes they are all great!!

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    A message to the Angels (Epitaph)
    by Tara-Kay

    Love him and cherish him always,
    Make him happy, don't let him cry,
    Tell him I'll be there as soon as I die,
    Because I love him forever and always.

    © Tara-Kay Randall 23rd July 2006

    Troubles and Fears
    By Tara-Kay

    We didn’t know of his troubles and fears,
    And now, I am sad and crying many tears,
    If I could turn back the clock, I would,
    I would listen to you, if only I could.

    © Tara-Kay Randall 23rd July 2006

    *An epitaph is an inscription that can be found written on gravestones. It consists of four lines and usually contains some sort of rhyme scheme*

  • Jordan
    18 years ago

    -whispers to Tara-Kay-

    Umm.....you need to submit two epitaphs, dear.

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    -whispers to Jordan-

    Thanks mate, missed that rule, lol

  • Jordan
    18 years ago

    Heehee, no problem!

  • RetroRavey
    18 years ago

    all of these are realy awesome!

  • ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ
    18 years ago

    Hey im leaving tommorow on a trip an di will be gone for a week or more so im gonna close this contest early!! Contest is now closed!!

  • Jordan
    18 years ago

    YAY! Good luck, guys!

  • ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ
    18 years ago

    1st place: Eleven Months {Epitaph} by ღ s υ ρ є я g ι я ł ღ

    2nd place: My Wife by Oscar

    3rd place: My Friend by ~*Who Cares?*~

    4th place:To a suffering soul. by ~Ravyn*Faelynn~

    HM:The Prisoner's Epitaph by Jordan (TheMalevolant)

    I will give out the prizes when i return! All poems were great!! Congratulations to all the winners!!

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    =O!!!

    OMG!!

    Thank youuuuu!! That was the first time of trying one of these, I didn't think it was that good.. Congrats to the other winners though, and to everyone else who gave it a shot. =D

    These ones would be fine to do:
    ~Simple Creation
    ~I'm Okay
    ~Bleeding Mascara
    ~No Evidence
    ~Warm and Safe
    ~Picture Perfect {Ottava Rima}

    Thanks. xx. =D

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    WOO 3rd!

  • Oscar
    18 years ago

    i can't believe i won with that one. i wrote because all of them were getting real depresswing so i just had to break the ice. thanx!!!

  • Jordan
    18 years ago

    Aww, thanks, Lois!

    Good job EVERYONE!

  • ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ
    18 years ago

    Hey everyone i just got back from vacation!! I have started on Natalies and i will finish up with everyone today and tommorow!!! Sorry for the inconvience!!! Thanx!!

    ~Lois