Tried Something New

I have a new poem called You Are. It's quite different from how I normally write since I thought I'd try something new. I'm asking for you to please go check it out and leave honest critique so that I know if I need to fix it in any places of if it didn't turn out good or whatever. I'll be sure to return the favor for anyone who does comment on it since it means a lot to me. Thanks guys!

i checked it out

i checked it out also

Thanks a lot guys. I'll check out your poems soon as I have time (school's started again and I got homework...ick) but soon as I can I will..

Thank u for checking out my poems.

No problem at all. Was a joy to do so.