Goran Rahim
18 years ago
ok we tried many different things here, |
Goran Rahim
18 years ago
and let me start from myself. |
Catherine
18 years ago
It's really unfair for me. I NEVER leave a comment without a helpful hint, but most people say about my poems are just that they are good, they loved them, how sweet, etc. But I have NEVER gotten a BIT of help to improve. Ppl tell me to TRY to improve, but they NEVER (Not exagerating) give me a tip on HOW! |
Ed or Ian Henderson
18 years ago
I'm like anyone else. I like my ego pandered to. But there are some sharp pennies out there whose opinions I value way higher than "wow u r a gud poet i realy liekd dis 1 it wuz wel kwl now rate me plz lol" and suchlike. |
Catherine
18 years ago
and Catherine, I've read all your stuff, if you're serious about becoming better, read all you can, study the craft, try smaller formats, and stay away from the traps that suck young poets in, the it needs to be tear jerking or sad to get peoples attention.....Your writing is below par for a poet , but above par for your age, however that means nothing either way, it is how diligent you challenge yourself to become better. It all starts in the classroom, in the books, and lastly in the dictionary, but only with comprehension and williness..... |
Goran Rahim
18 years ago
I did check ur poems, they are great start, just keep it up you will get there. |
Chelsey
18 years ago
My sis Eirisa I feel has made me the writer I am today...I was thinking about this the other day actually...When my poems weren't the best she'd always read them and be honest with me and always help me critique them..sometimes I'd read her poetry so much that it became like a study to me because I wanted to right like her..so much that I took notes of what I saw..she doesn't even know that haha....but yeah definatley her..and everyone else from the poetry club I'm in..they always are open with you about my writing and help me become better and realize my mistakes and all |
Choose xX Alex Xx Life
18 years ago
it seems goran is a good commenter would you comment on mine then please |
Goran Rahim
18 years ago
looooooool |
blueknight
18 years ago
hey goran comments on my |
Goran Rahim
18 years ago
looooool |
BrokenMisery
18 years ago
I, along with many, have not recieved much in the way of critisim in fact I am recieving more critisim from a website that doesn't even focus on poetry. |
shela
18 years ago
dwelt? |
Kaylee
18 years ago
I don't know about you but the few comments I've recieved by him were kind of positive. And when I asked him for an opinion on something and he was honest I took that as it was someone pointing out things I didn't see. I'm actually thankful for that. It let me think things over. As for him being afraid of new comers. I just don't get that feeling from him. |
Goran Rahim
18 years ago
shela i disagree with u, cause the only person who helped me to find better is DWELT and to prove it you can check out the comment he made on my poem BUT THAT TIME, then u will understand what is honest comment about |
HOLLY ARMER
18 years ago
If not for Bob (dwelt) my poetry would still be riddled with useless punctuation. Bob has helped me become the writer that I am today (which is a far sight better than I used to be). So I definitely disagree with Shela's statement of him not wanting anyone to be a better writer than him. Such nonsense! |
Mommy And Me
18 years ago
Mr. Mathison my poetry teacher. :D |
Kirsty palmer
18 years ago
i dont really beleve that i have a person who i would identify as 'the best person to give feedback' but a part of me gets really annoyed when people just write.." love this poem" |