5 Senses Contests

wait meaning the 1st word has to be one of those or the title or what? im confused sorry

inner strength,
By: Socks [aka Jaime]

See,
The bird fly,
in the midnight sky,
flying ever so high,
my oh my.

Hear
The wind rustle through the trees,
and sing the special song,
or the wolf cry out to the moon,
to where it should really belong

Smell
The sweet smell of the flowers
smelling ever so great,
And get rid of all
that meaningless Hate.

Taste
The fruit that grows so ripe,
for you to eat,
Its tastes better,
then any treat.

Feel
the power to do great things,
in this helpless place,
enchant it,
with your sweet grace.

I wanna do this? ..do the words HAVE to be in that order though....??

Ok.. well I've done one. Tell me if I've done it wrong, kay? It's probably really bad, cause I'm half asleep. But I just wanted to do it now, cause I won't have the time to do it after tomorrow.

~Salt Produced Tears~

Feel stimulated exhausted nerves,
Trembling beneath unknown fears.
Rushing blood streams reacting,
Overpowering salt produced tears.

Hear one shattering beating heart,
Crashing in harmful dreaded ways.
Altered pieces are misplaced within,
Never returning in numerous days.

Smell rage slowly creeping through,
Building masses of pure emotions.
Deeds affecting innocent around,
Traveling between their own notions.

Taste victory on choked tongues,
Speaking viciously towards sorrow.
Contemplating right from wrong,
Stealing what is left of tomorrow.

See painful outbursts on repeat,
Pausing suddenly only to breathe.
Rewinding many historic regrets,
While watching past dreams leave.

July 30th 2006
Copyright © Natalie

..oh, and if anyone has suggestions for a better title, I'm open for it. Lol..

If you do 'Emotions' like this contest, (Ex Love, Lust, Death, Hate..For I have a poem I'm writing about it now) I'd enter definately. I'm going to try to enter this one if I can do it.. Not sure though.

xDarkSuicidex

Supergirl, you don't even have to use all the words. And they don't need to be in that order.

It's fine, though.

^^^Oh.. My Bad..

*SINGS*

Everyone should enterrrr thisssssssssssssssssssss.

HAHA!

"A.B.A.N.D.O.N."

Feel the molecular stab of pain, we thrust
In wounded bliss and animal fury, in God we trust
Fuck retribution, infinity draws me in
Shuts its wings and brings me near

Shudder like a new spark
Born into an endless dream
Hitting bottom is not a weekend retreat
So like ice we blur and shift

Losing all hope is freedom
Twenty-one furious guns all screaming,
"Salute me!"
The Mona Lisa falls apart
Like a teenage whore's broken heart
for the sake of your post-modern art
of breaking down

A piercing voice splits the mist of pain
Fast-forward to the next page
Out on the front lines of the battlefield
I don't have a mind, I'm a human sheild

A spiral of snow awaits us
I've crossed the line from sane to not
This side is better, but better than what?

One lone soldier cannot fight this war
That is what we have armies for
I cannot fight this war
That is what we have armies for