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  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    I don't think my poem's are good enough. I could recommend one, and you may feel free to look at the rest of my work...
    What You Can't See Can't Hurt You:

    http://www.friendship-poems.com/poems.php?id=558958

    The other would be Misery's Door,
    or, How Do You Want To Die? ---which is not a poem about suicide.
    //T.L.//

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    You can use any of mine.. that probably isn't very helpful but i don't know which one would be best.. and if you did decide to use one just call me "Jessy" hehe.. :)

  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    But...I'll need a link.

    And if you post something of mine, my pen-name is Nadine Mondrae

    //T.L.//

  • AGirlWorthFightingFor
    18 years ago

    Don't know what you're looking for, but with a name like 'Bruised Views' how about my "Bleeding Memories." Note: this is not a typical teenage cutter poem, I promise
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=169592

  • BREEawNUHH
    18 years ago

    Well, I don't know how good this poem is, but I thought I'd post it.

    Display name: Briana Coulter.

    Here is the poem.

    I sit here alone in the dark,
    just thinking of you.
    I know you are somewhere out there,
    But aren't thinking of me too.

    All of our memories,
    Have just faded away.
    And I know there isn't a chance,
    I'll see any other day.

    Sometimes I wonder,
    What it is you were thinking of.
    When you told me this was best for us both,
    I know you weren't thinking of our "love".

    You meant so much to me,
    You were my only reason.
    But your love was cold,
    Like the winter season.

    Everyone around me,
    Told me that it was all fake.
    But now you are gone,
    And I've had all I can take.

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    i feel this is my most unusual poem i usually write about sadness and love but this is about disability its different so please at least read it thnx

    my display name is girlie_goo but my real name is alex thnx this means loads to me

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=734735

  • Jordan
    18 years ago

    Two Drowning Lover's Hearts

    A cool autumn mist
    Lightly caresses my shoulders
    As we walk
    Along the leaf-ridden path

    I lightly peck your cheek
    You smile (A picture of true beauty)

    The forest sighs
    For she is jealous of what we have.

    As we walk
    Along the colour coded path
    The rain is no longer soft
    But fierce

    We talk...
    The way that stars meant for lovers to talk

    We can only hear a slight
    Pitter-patter
    Far in the distance

    You laugh (Angel's laughter)
    I take your hand
    As we walk
    Toward destiny's core

    You smile
    (A picture of true beauty)
    The forest laughs
    (Remembering the happiness of true love)
    The rain softens once more
    (Sensing that we are already drowning without his help)

    For your smile is enough
    To flood the world with
    Euphoria
    And drown any man's sorrows

    The rain stops...

    And you turn to me and ask:

    "Did you hear something?"

    If you by some shot of luck choose mine, my name is Jordan R.S. Parrott.

    Thanks!