*~^~*TiTlE cOnTeSt*~^~*

  • briana
    18 years ago

    *closed*
    this is a title contest
    Rules are:
    1. must be own work
    2.must use my titles
    3. doesn't have to be new

    Here are the titles:
    -Twisted Tears(done)
    -Death of a Sinner(done)
    -Loney Love(reseved)
    -Wising Up (done)
    -Cruel Soul(done)
    -Obsessive Dreams(done)
    -Broken Skin(reserved)
    - Just Perfect (done)
    -Closing out the World(reserved)
    -Rainbow Feelings(done)
    -Rain drops and Tear drops(done)

    Prizes are:
    First Place-6 c/v Placed in my favorites
    Second Place- 3 c/z Placed in my Favorites
    Third place-1 c/v
    all others will get a vote
    Conest End *August 7*

  • Chelsea Sprite
    18 years ago

    "Wising Up"
    ~~spanish367

    I trusted him.
    To me, he was a kind friend.
    He always listened to my sighs and tears,
    And would never leave me without a kind word.

    He said he would always be there for me.
    He said he would love me no matter what.
    Now, I wonder where all those sweet words came from.
    I can see now how easy it was for him to lie to me.

    His kind words touched my heart.
    His name was music to my ears.
    Now, his mention cuts me like a knife.
    This anger inside I've held for so very long...

    Knowing now what I should have known then,
    I can never trust anyone like him again.
    So the next time I meet a guy online
    I'll wise up and read through the lies.

    Good bye to heavy memories.
    Good bye to you, Pearce.

  • LovelyDivine
    18 years ago

    could I reserve Twisted Tears???

    ~*Brokenhearted*~

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    ...Can there be more titles?..

  • briana
    18 years ago

    yeah ill put more up natilie

  • LovelyDivine
    18 years ago

    Twisted Tears

    Tears of Sorrow, of Joy and Happiness,
    Never thought it would end like this.
    Emotions being thrown up and down,
    Sometimes I’d rather drown.

    But it seems that I am drowning,
    I’m drowning in my own tears,
    Tears of sadness and full of fears.
    I’m drowning in my twisted tears.

    Time has passed but you’re still in my heart,
    While thinking of you, I’m falling apart.
    All that we had was it all in vain?
    Now I’m just laying in al my pain.

    Laying in all of this pain,
    Feeling like I’m going insane.
    Forever will I be dying?
    Dying from my twisted tears.

    **It's really short and I dunno if it's that great, but I put my all in it. I hope you like it :D**

    ~*Brokenhearted*~

  • Suchapoetictradgedy
    18 years ago

    Can I reserve Broken Skin?

  • briana
    18 years ago

    yes flying high

  • struggling
    18 years ago

    I would like to reserve Loney Love

  • briana
    18 years ago

    ok thats fine stuggling

  • Megann Lee
    18 years ago

    I'd like to reserve "Just Perfect" If I may.

  • Megann Lee
    18 years ago

    Just Perfect.
    by Perfectly Pale Perfection

    Blue eyes as bright as an October sky.
    A hidden story, they seem to mask.
    Her lips refuse to part, and reveal the stories.
    Of the perfection she just doesn't have.

    She can't seem to grasp the fact of why.
    Her parents, yearn for her to be Just perfect.
    Another image, of her deceased sister.
    The perfect child that they once had.

    She stands silently staring into the mirror.
    Of what she was like, and now of what she is.
    She shrieks, looking back at herself horrified.
    Her beauty she once seemed to carry, is washed from her face.

    All her grace, she once had earned.
    Comes crashing down around her feet.
    Her clever, wittiness she once created.
    Lingers within her hating mind.

    The evil runs thick, it's in her blood.
    It controls her brain, she doesn't get what she's done is wrong.
    She's just perfect, like her parents wanted.
    As a smile forms, on her dead like face.

    She lifts her arm, points, aims and counts back from ten.
    The numbers fly, back to one.
    As she pulls the trigger back with ease.
    A loud crack, snapping back.

    One, Two, Three, Then Four.
    The sound echo's in the room.
    A lingering smell of smoke.
    The gun has left behind.

    "I'm just perfect" her now parting lips scream.
    The gun raising to her temple.
    As the process repeats.
    One last, click, along with one loud crack.

    Three bodies remain.
    Just like a an old horror movie portrays.
    Of a girl who wants perfect enough.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    can i reserve obsessive dreams?!

  • DeadlyObsession
    18 years ago

    can i reserve closing out the world

  • FlirtingWithDeath
    18 years ago

    Rain drops and Tear drops

    Alone in my room
    Hearing the storm come
    I sit on my floor
    Counting the bumps
    On my walls.
    Rain drops and Tear drops
    Mix well with each other
    A perfect harmony
    Of what I do dread.

    Broken hearted
    Broken minded
    I feel empty inside
    The whisper of your name
    Gives my heart fright.

    Resting my head
    Against my bed
    Rain drops and Tear drops
    I hear
    And it is something that
    I dread.

  • blueknight
    18 years ago

    woah i just wnt that " raindrops and teardrops" too lols but then go a head
    i just write mine lolz

  • briana
    18 years ago

    ok thats fine! Im sorry, first come first serve!

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    Rainbow Feelings

    Pink
    Shy, sweet and gentle
    Kind, loving, caring
    Crushed, humiliated

    Red
    So angry, provoked and short tempered
    Violent
    Deep in love

    Orange
    Peppy and strange
    Eccentric, trying new things

    Yellow
    Friendly, outgoing
    Smiling inside and out

    Green
    Strange, natural
    Envious, quiet

    Blue
    Freedom, strong of heart, romancing
    Daring, cold and light-paced, crying

    Purple
    Fashioned, amethyst
    Silky touch of parent to child
    A gracious monarch

    Black
    Empty, alone
    Scared, shadowed
    Darkness crawling in and out of a longing heart

  • LovelyDivine
    18 years ago

    the deadline is coming up soon....are gonna end it even if some of the poems aren't done???

  • briana
    18 years ago

    no if reserved....i will wait but only one more day!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    omg im sry i 4got about it..here it is!

    Obsessive Dreams

    You think that I’m obsessive; well you haven’t seen the worst,
    For without my dreams, I could not quench my thirst.
    I dream of you every single night, as well as day dreams all day,
    You turn my life around from sadness, make my skies not gray.

    Then reality kicks in, and broken hearted I become,
    But that is not the reason of this poem.
    Obsessive dreams, of you and me,
    How one day, together we’ll finally be.

    But I know in my heart, this won’t occur,
    Because I’m sure you think I’m immature.
    However, it’s quite opposite, I’m really not,
    I might not be the best, but it’s all I got.

    These obsessive dreams, won’t seem to go away,
    You’ll continue to make my skies no longer gray.
    You think I’m bad, well you should see my dreams,
    And then my obsessive behavior won’t be all it seems.

  • LovelyDivine
    18 years ago

    oops...nm

  • briana
    18 years ago

    I'm going to end the contest now! I will post the winners Soon!

    1st Place goes to...... Obessive Dreams by Who Cares!

    2nd Place goes to ........Just Perfect by Perfectly Pale Perfection!

    3rd Place goes to.........Cruel Souls by Save an egg crack a smile!

    to all the rest great job it was really hard to pick!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    *GASP!!!!!* how did i win?! wow im in shock. thanks so much!!!!!