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~Celestial Red (Villanelle)~

When I saw you fall from heaven, all my morals fled,
carnal desires flooded my mind, soon we'd be alone.
Erected thoughts that once stood dormant, now became undead.

My concerns with chastity, turned to amorality instead,
sexual verbal libel, brought on an oddly manipulative tone.
When I saw you fall from heaven, all my morals fled.

Bestial avidities were promptly, but passionately bred,
possibilities of platonic relations, were permanently postponed.
Erected thoughts that once stood dormant, now became undead.

As you lied upon my mattress, your legs began to spread,
our intentions were identical, leaving no emotions shown.
When I saw you fall from heaven, all my morals fled.

An angelic experience, from the beginning to the end,
left our names and forgoing histories perpetually unknown.
Erected thoughts that once stood dormant, now became undead.

What you thought as eternal innocence, bled celestial red,
took what was once solely yours, and kept it as my own.
When I saw you fall from heaven, all my morals fled,
erected thoughts that once stood dormant, now became undead.

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-A villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyme scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

-The first and third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem, and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines).

~Sean Dohr~

October Rain

you don't know how you make me feel, standing here next to you. knowing that i love you, and hoping you love me too. the dark purple sky, with clouds all around. as the soft rain falls on us, and we listen to the sound.

i wish it would never end, this beautiful October rain, because when i'm with you, i can feel no pain. as we lay on the ground, staring up at a star. i think of all the good times, and how we've come so far.

had i only just known, it would be our last night. had i only just known, this would be your last sight. i never would have left, from that soft spot on the ground, where we lay every day, because that's where each other, we found.

but now i'm alone, you're simply a memory. forgotten by all, all of course except me. i kept you in my heart, still you're a shattered dream. i don't want to let go, but you're fading into steam.

i want to be with you, want to see you anew. so i found out a way, to be with you real soon. and as i pick up this gun, and hold it up to my brain. i'll never forget, that this is my last October Rain.

Oscar

Missing him
by ŘÅÇĦ♥

A silence comes accross her
That no one can explain
They no there is something more
Something she is hiding
It's a silence in black and white

She's hiding the words you said
the things you did
She's hiding the past,
And things not yet of her past
She wants to earse the memories
to earse that part of her life

She wants to cut
She wants to bleed
She doesn't deserve any better
He was all she ever needed
And suddenly
he didn't need her anymore
And she didn't know what to do
Where to go

He's lucky
she knows how to go around like she's happy
Like she doesnt care
she only wishes
He was pretending too.

He said he really liked her..
She'd NEVER admit
She adored him
with everybreath she wonders
what the hell happened
and
where the hell she screwed up.

~Hold me tight~

Hold me tight
And never let me go
Look into my eyes
As I search your soul.
Keep me safe
From all the evil
Bring me close
So our hearts
May beat as one.

Hold me tight
Let me feel the warmth
Whisper in my ear
And tell me that you care.
Let me smile
And let me see you grin
Never will I forget
Your tender loving hands.

Just hold me tight
Let us enjoy our peace,
Hold me tight
And let us put our
Minds at rest.

"Day Break"

Swirling winds surround my thought,
Cushioning my so very harsh movements!
Floating atop the wind, you must be near!

Not quite able to grasp this new found "drug"
I have begun to rely so heavily upon, this "drug"
Your love, holds me through it all!

When daybreak comes I can feel your soft goodbye.
When daybreak nears hurridly you get ready, ready
To leave me alone again to float on cloud 9!

My passion for you is unexplainable, uncharactersitic
For me, so out of the box! I am a sensible person,
Not one to fall so rapidly so forcefully!

Daybreak has come and gone, so many times!
This daybreak is here, and yet so are you!
Once again I am atop the wind, floating and basking!

Love is such a strong, forceful, word, yet it flows
So gracefully when the thoughts are refering to you!
My love save me from myself, from it all!

You caught me when I fell from life, when I
Couldnt take it any longer, when I didnt have
The strength to stand, you held me!

Our love stronger than life, than death, than anything
Else on this planet, or out of this world! Our love,
Is saving grace, its fireworks and bells ringing!

This is real love!

gee thanks for second!. you can just comment on whichever ones you like. great job everyone.

thnx

YAY third place :D thank you and good job everyone =)
Ummmm you can do anyones you want hun...just dont do the songs, thank you.

yay and I read them, oh thank you for that little spelling issue on one of my poems, I fixed it :D
Love you too *hugs*

Do w/e one sounds best to you.

Thanks for the pick! Take your time.