POETRY CONTEST 1! (alex)

Here's my second poem if the rules of 3 poems per person still apply

I'm Not that Girl

Ribbons and laces and pink satin too
Shoes in jewels of all color hues
Dances in dim light with a boy or two
In truth, I am nothing at all like you

Dreamy eyes and seductive lips
Late night parties of swinging hips
No, I'm not that easily tempted to show
My affection to someone I don't know

I'm not that kind of girl at all
My goals, unlike yours, are set far
I work to achieve my dreams at all cost
I am not ready for my heart to be lost

yay it gets markede today... todays the day.... im so excited ^^

right i will have results by the end of today :):):)

Oh my god this was soooooooooo difficult i cant believe how well you all did there wasnt one poem in which i didnt like so you are ALL winners :):) but i said id chose the best 5 so here it goes :):)

1..... [[Natalie]] - Lost In A Portrait.
2..... Poetress*Fighter - Im Not That Girl.
3..... Jay - UNTITLED.
4..... xDarksuicidex - UNTITLED.
5..... [-Untitled-] - My Shadow.

ALL your poems were great i loved reading them but i picked natalies for the top because it captured me the most and perhaps was the more different . BIG THUMBS UP TO EVERYONE WHO ENTERED NEXT CONTEST WILL BE SOON SO LOOK OUT FOR IT :):):) xxx alex xxx

Coolio-Number 5. .not bad for a poem we had to write in school using a template.. xD

Yay!! Thanks, Alex. =P Tehe.

Congrats to the other winners, too. And to everyone who entered, Great poems!