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It doesnt seem real

You were young,
Death is near,
you were with us all a week ago,
seeing you smile,
hearing you laugh,
seeing your face,
made all of our days turn to Sunshine,
now that you're gone,
i don't think things will ever be the same,
i don't think this pain will ever go away,
all of us sit here in shock still,
as hours pass by,
we cry and weep,
but nothing will change,
nothing will bring you back,
you're gone for good,
And some of just sit here,
and think why,
did this happen to you??,
you were so young,
And while others,
are sad because the didn't even say good bye,
and all we have left are memories,
some bad or good,
but we will hold them in our hearts forever,
and some of us sit,
and wish we had gotten to know him a lot better,
we cant bring you back,
theirs nothing we can do,
but pray and hope that you are listening to the,
words that we say to you,
and hope that you're watching over us this very moment,
we miss you,
we love you,
we all wish that this didn't happen,
but god wanted another angel,
and it was you,
and now when ever i remember you..
i smile, and laugh,
and cry,

~*~"My Only Chance"~*~

Sitting in the front row
I tremble and I grieve
The fact that you're not with me
I just cannot believe

The piano keys are playing
I try hard not to cry
The worst day of my life
Was the day that you did die

I remember all the good times
I remember all the bad
The times that we were happy
The times that we were sad

With the memories replaying
I wonder and I question
Why you had to go
For you were my obsession

I walk up to your coffin
I reach to hold your hand
I smile through my tears
This surely wasn't planned

I look at your pale face
I take my one last peek
I walk away from you
The tears trickling down my cheek

"I'm sorry," I whispered softly
"But now it's time for me to go."
As I lift the gun to my head
I pull the trigger and it blows

For I only wanted to be with you
You were my focus, my trance
Killing myself was the only way
To be with you, my only chance

Copyright (C): Rhianna

Car Underwater

Dear Love,

I’m in a car underwater, I’m done, I’m through,
Too bad I never got a chance to say bye to you.
The water is filling up my lungs; soon I’ll be dead.
Because I can’t get out of my mind what you said.

The pressure down here is making me insane,
Little do people know what the car down here contains.
It’s just me, a hopeless life, a broken heart…
I hope that you will miss me when you hear of my depart.

I’m in a car underwater, it’s over, I’ll miss you,
Don’t fake cry at my funeral, for they’ll be no rescue.
The end is near, I can feel my life leaving me,
Then my soul can escape this hell and be free.

If you’d just talked to me, instead of this silent doom,
But it’s too late now, the water’s filling up the extra room.
I hope you find this letter, because I want you to see,
Just a little taste of how much pain you caused me…

Love,
Erika

~*Who Cares?*~

She Don't Cry
by Tabby

He was proud just to say "She don't cry"
His lovely girl was his world
The sparkle, the shine within his eye

She loved her dad more than anything
He was her world in her mind
There was nothing more God could bring

As she got older he became very sick
But still she didn't cry a tear
So just for her he remained solid as a brick

But days wore on and worse he became
She stayed with him hours on in
Pretending things were still the same

So weeks went by but he was no better
And she saw that he would soon die
But still she didn't cry for he wouldn't let her

She stayed with him and held his hand tight
As she knew it would all be over
She still told him that everything was all right

He didn't believe her but told her it was okay
So she sat silently by his side
There she remained as his life slowly fell away

Then one day he sat up with the strength he had
And said in a whisper "Im proud of you"
She looked at him and all she said was "I know dad"

He slowly slid down and he peacefully died
And finally a tear slid down her cheek
For the first time she laid her head down and cried.....

(I wrote this poem to show that this girl never cried because she had her dad and that was all she needed.)

The Accident

they told me not to do it. to stay home all lonely.
they told me they forbid it, that him i couldn't see.
but it didn't matter, they weren't controlling me.
i had to get outside, i had to just be free.

i snuck out my window. alone with a small light.
and as i moved i disappeared, into the dark night
no stars were out, the moon was faded.
when i saw his lights i knew i had made it.

we saw a movie together, had a wonderful time
in fact it was so much fun it should be a crime.
i knew my parents were wrong so we got in the car
and after this first date, i knew we would go far.

he stopped the car and i thought that there was something wrong. but when he stopped the care he put romantic music on. he got on me but i struggled, i pushed him far aside. i said please dont touch me all i needed was this ride.

he got all mad but kept on driving. and really i was scared. he starting really speeding up. and i was not prepared. and the last thing i remembered, before my dark blackout. was the shining light of a car and the drivers giving a shout.

i woke up in the hospital bed and was in a lot of pain. i asked the nurses whaqt happened, and to me they did explain. the other car was totaled, passengers, none would live. and my driver also died and would have no breath to give.

so i cried in my bed and i pulled one nurse aside. i asked for a small favor. just one before i died. please apologize to my parents for me, because no ones alive. she said she cant, i asked why not. she said my parents were in the other car and now no one will have survived.

Oscar

"Tell me I'm doing something wrong"
by Wings of an Angel

She wonders, she wonders, whats the point of life?
How come I'm alone, and my only friend's the knife?
Why me, why me, why not another girl?
How come it seems like I'm alone in the world?
Why do I need to feel the blood pour?
How come no one says "Don't do it anymore"?
Why doesn't anyone notice, when I'm feeling blue?
Why don't someone just say "It's not me, its you"?
Since the problem seems to be me, why not let it show?
Why not just tell me I'm wrong, and then I at least know?
How come no one cares, whats so wrong with me?
Tell me that I'm doing something wrong, and then I might be free.

If Everyone Cared
by ∫Bëløveđ∫

If Everyone Cared

If everyone cared, they would notice me
Sitting on this empty sidewalk

If everyone cared, they might give me food
To soothe my empty stomach

If everyone, or anyone cared
They could read my messy cardboard sign

If anyone at all cared
Their family would be mine

If everyone in the world cared
About people like me

If everyone and anyone did
Everyone like me would probably be seen

If everyone on earth cared, I wouldn't be
Holding a cardboard sign

I would be so rich, because
The whole world would be mine

Heart Move
by ♪↑Musicians Finest♪↑

Ever Feel like
theres only one girl
to complete you
Complete your world?

Ever feel like
Seeing that face
changes the beat
of your own heart pace

I feel it all the time....

The beat goes on and so do I
never to quit, theres no goodbye
Before I quit, id cut out my eye
Admitting I love her, Its no lie
Falling down, still giving it a try
No matter my tears, or if i cry
even though its known, she'll deny
My every offer, I've become dry
heres the gun..watch me die
light me up, like the 4th of July
cause I'm not special I'm just a guy
well i got something.heres my reply

Don't think I'm just another man
I got a heart, just understand
worth more then booty and Hands
just let me spit, my mind expand
listen to the words and my command
I snap back at you like a rubber band
I cant get enough, but its me you cant stand
I'm on the ground just give me your hand

Love is what i got for you
i get a feeling you feel it too
just let it be..just us two
ill give u a hint..give you clue
show you a sign, that i still love you
watch out for it, let it come through
feel the love, and then i will prove
we meant to be, don't let your heart move.

more people post! aah, Im not a patiente person:P lol

On Our Way... - By Dhaval

We walked through gates like ancient friends,
your last rose petal declared “he loves me”
as my stifling lips smiled in pretence
I trepidly told of the rose’s honesty.

Somewhere in the scent of the soil we graced
and along the dew of the trails we tread,
ignorance was joy when this heart once raced
and butterflies danced above mushroom heads.

Somewhere along that old winding course
we tripped and fell down flat across the lawn,
I lifted you up, and dumping all remorse
you strode ahead, but I couldn’t carry on.

He was never there around- and you wailed
when his offhand words overlooked your heart,
yet it was I who ensured that tears never welled
in the eyes of the girl who ripped me apart.

Your statements of love gnawed and poked
unrequited knives split my innards in two;
sometime a day-dream, my feeble spirit broke,
somewhere on our way, I fell in love with you......

P.S. It is in the love section for now, but its sad, and can well be in the sadness/depression section, since its written with a depressing air about it.

Don't You See?

They don't know my pain
they don't know my fears
they don't know I'm hiding
they never see my tears!

look at me not through me
don't you see who i really am?
chain me up, throw away the key!
I'm not normal like them

my pain i'll never reveal
my trust will not be given
my wounds will never heal
blood streams out like a dark red ribbon

but that ribbon is my friend
it knows my pain
it will help me til the end
but in all of this, whats to gain?

*hmmmm hope you like it and great contest =)*

xx InNoCeNt GiRl xx

Use me, abuse me do as you choose with me,
for there are no more tears for me to cry,
out of all the innocent girls in the world,
you picked me who you make want to die.

what fun do see in my miserable pain,
as i howl and lie in fear,
you've kept me like this for too long now,
its gone back so many years.

the evilness of your desperate face,
is the thing that keeps me awake,
you enjoy the misery in this girl,
who gave you this girls life to take.

you should be punished like i get punished,
you should be the one to cry,
to reach for areas i didn't know existed,
you should be the one to die.

you say if i should tell about you,
then people would think am scum,
dirty disgrace to my lovely family,
no one would believe me not even my precious mum.

but enough is enough although i fear,
this has gone on to long,
i told my best friend she told mum,
and now i know you were wrong.

mum disowned YOU, for the agonizing pain,
of what to did to me,
now you are the evil one,
who is in hurtful misery

if you have read this please comment i would love to know what you think xxxxx

Death.....

How would it feel, to not be able to feel at all,
No emotions, no love, no warmth in your blood,
To just lie there invisible to not be able to prevent cries,
To have suffered the unbearable pain of ' goin' away ', no one should.

To have cursed life before death is an inevitable fate,
But what would you do if YOU died,
Would you regret life? or how you chose to abuse it?
Would you be able to feel the pain you once had inside?

nvm..

=]

i cant write a new one.

Sorry.

[-untitled-]

Like a childs whisper in the middle of the night.

Off in the distance I catch a glimpse of hope, happiness a brighter light

It's been too long itos time to go I say softly to those demons, who have held me

captive, my memories they know.

I have lessoned my burden, lightened my load. For I am no longer lost I now see the road

I am done suffering and punishing myself for somone eles wrong. The anger the guilt

now placed where it belongs.

I've been handed a second chance a new life for me to start.I have forgiven myself as well as others

mind, soul and heart.

Thanks Breanna =)i love this contest because its so real, it has to be right and thats the professional part haha i like it ^^

xoxo Lucy

c'mon guys! just 11 more! lol

Who Cares-Did u get like, idk, inspiration for your poem from a song by armor for sleep?

(if so i LOVE that song)

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Silent Goodbye

Mutter a word
a simple good bye
something to hint that
theres a soul behind your eyes

just look away
with a distant stare
how hard's a goodbye
a simple way to show you care?

drop me off at this clinic
leave me here to die
forget me at this prison
don't bother to say goodbye

get up and turn
begin to walk away
now a simple goodbye
is what you'll never hear me say

This is a poem kinda based on the book 'cut'
only different b/c in cut the girl doesn't talk but in my poem its the mother. but what ever. i just wrote it specifically for your contest- i know its not good but i wanted to enter. lol

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hi untitled. yes i did i was listenin 2 their what to do when you are dead album..i love it as well. my fave song is truth about heaven though:D

Ummmm I hope this poem is alright, I like JUST wrote it.

~Never again~
I scream in pain
I cry in fright
Is tonight the night
For me to die?
Have you come
To take me away,
Fly me out of sight?
Let me look out the window
Just to see the morning light.

You do not understand
I am not ready to go
Let me stay on earth
Just a little longer.
My wounds will heal
I promise you now
I will never hurt myself.
Just let me stay
I beg of you
I am on my knees
Praying for you too leave.

Never again
I learn my lesson
Just let me stay here,
Let me stay in the light.

A Beggar Cries
by Mr_blueknight

I am a street child, I am A beggar
I didn't see my fathers face
Didn't feel my mothers warm embrace
There's no one who feed me up
No one hear me crying at night
In such a long time I learn how to walk
But theres no one teach me how to talk
Bare footed, Don't have any clothes
Trembling in the cold night when theres snow
knocking on doors, Begging some left over food
Exploring garbage cans, Searching for an old clothes
Sleeping outside others home, lying on the floor
Crawling on the street of hungriness
Fall asleep in so much pain and tiredness
Crying no more, no tears but blood flows
Falling into the rocky road
Body turns like ice, very cold
Lips gone dry,Ears lose the sound
Fingers are locked,cant move anymore
No one knows I'm dying, No one here to care
Oh God why this is happening?
What do I made to suffer all this things?
It is early to die on this young age
I need to fight and live
Change my life, help me out
Is anyone there?, please hear my cries..

how this will be accepted and hope you like this one guys......

"Giving Up"

You love pushing me around
you enjoy destoying the meek
you take pleasure in my suffering
you love it when im frail and weak.

i stand here with a broken smile
full of sadness and despair.
You displayed your wile
but i know you never cared.

You love to see me hurt
You enjoy watching me drown
You take peasure in my pain
you love to pull me down

I tried to be your freind
I tried to give you my love
I tried until the very end
but now it's over i give up

~Glass~

I havnt psoted this in my poems yet i just wrote it for contest enjoy dedicated to Kirstie...

{{Toxic Narcotic}}

Deprived future demolished by anguish,
Hidden beneath forbidden salt teardrops,
Concealed disguise unworthy for pageants,
Angry thunder flickering through tree tops.

Flashing brewing lightening strikes vessels,
Risen blood streams revealing bitter truth,
Powered movements rejecting what is right,
Stealing untold memories saved by youth.

(Feed Me) ................Your toxic narcotic.

Diseased heartache controlling all around,
Forcing mouthfuls of power in weak veins,
Dreaming away hope and faith once again,
Draining all these innocent growing pains.

Numbing fewer sensations from the past,
Countless shivers reminding all the wrong,
Unknown numbers surfacing their final peak,
Ticking until pounding thoughts move along.

(Feed Me) ................Your toxic narcotic.

August 11th 2006
Copyright © Natalie

na im not going to write a new one either i dont see why to be honest you can only write poems when your mind is ready if i rush one it will be crap nva mind xxx

The Angel of Light
by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

As i cut an old worn scar
i pray the angels come close to me
the dark, the light
the dim, the bright

slowly i grow sleepy
as they fight i grow weak
surrendering to my awful thought
i wish the dark will win the lot

if i shall grow
the wings of snow
i shall die even more
for i will not deserve that chore

slowly it brightens
then it dims
as the fight
goes to and fro

i slowly wake up
with an I-V
for now i am alive
but i wish to die

the dark almost won
but the light succeeded
and now it will repeat, once again
for the angel of light must not win

W.C?- i looooooooove that song too, its my fave as well!!.. haha, the music video is soo sad.. it almost makes me cry, especially when i heard it the first time after two of my friends(sort of) go killed in a car accident,. it was so sad b/c the one boy had a girlfriend, they were rele in love, it was so sad...... she's /still/ destroyed.

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To dream no dreams
From childhood rage
To have no hopes
That things will change
To not to want
The best in life
To only want
This nightmare to stop
I know you don’t care
Your just like the rest
As your living in
A nice safe place
The tails of horror
That I share from my past
Still seam to haunt me
And I no it will last
It cant end right now
It cant even soon
Cause im not
Going to give in to a bastered like you
Its not that im better
Its just that im ME
And you never once could even try to console me
My feelings got hurt
Along with my pride
But the broken bones
Only hurt till I stopped the crying
They mended them up and said ide be fine
But the scares on my heart
Are there for all time

i think we have over 20 poems not sure ????

oh untitled that's so sad!!! i love the music video it makes me sad as well:( i've only seen it a few times though because my pc has pretty much everything blocked.

it think it is above twenty

Loneliness Of A Werewolf

This empty chasm fills my lungs as I breathe
Conspicuous suffocation taking me
An abandoned wolf pup starting to teethe
Crippled and forsaken as I can be

My lonely hope deteriorates as I speak
A mournful cry to the moon filled night
They only know me to be ragged and weak
A frightened sheep in an all or nothing plight

I am not me when my skin is soft and pale
And I am broken when she sees my hungry eyes
I cannot do this, but my heart is frail
Feeding on her flesh will be my own demise

In this moment, my monster within escapes
Uncontrollable and filled with feeding fury
"Please hide child," but she only stands and gapes
Another innocent lost at the cost of my insanity

I must abide the werewolf code and run away
Never to be caught, a miserable nightmare eternally
Cursed to dread the nights that follow each day
Immortality being the one pain that kills me

This poem is not DIRECTLY about depression, but I hope it counts. If not, let me know. Thanks!

ok its more then 20 now....what's happening?

yeah it should be

umm, judging perhaps?

i kno its still early but if it isnt judged in like 5 days and ppl have send them a pm and they wont reply ill take over and disqualify myself...lol

umm, whats going on?!

well, duh, its finished so I guess everyone is:P

in 3 days if no reply 2 anything ill judge.